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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-01-2015, 06:24 PM
Replies: 0
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Posted By Bleed Away
4AM in London

No one knows me. At all.
I first came here when I was only 6
with my mum, back when a sense of family still existed
back when I wanted to live in America, instead.
I was the successor of something...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-01-2015, 10:11 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 114
Posted By Bleed Away
Get some help, bruh

Our smiles are reminiscent
of the beheaded, unsuspecting
but frantic. Who will survive the approaching
last days? Society with eyes like dartboards -
only carcasses found, “that is us
right now”...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-24-2015, 09:23 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 310
Posted By Bleed Away
I would change "hangs" to...

I would change "hangs" to "hang". But, apart from that, I really liked this; you did very well with the line-breaks!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-24-2015, 09:15 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 204
Posted By Bleed Away
This is, by far, the best I have read from you....

This is, by far, the best I have read from you. Keep it up.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-21-2015, 07:46 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 173
Posted By Bleed Away
Stochastic

Here are the tribal drums/hear
the tribal drums - they are
falling apart. Now dance
with the flesh, until you have
nothing left
to be ashamed of.

We are among the sands.
We are one with our...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-17-2015, 11:14 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 123
Posted By Bleed Away
Disconnectivity

The doing of God’s work:
Don’t let the world turn your stone
into manna, as if such an origin
was never after your life [since the beginning]. I know
that pain.

You were born an orphan;
a miracle...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-16-2015, 01:37 PM
Replies: 2,155
Views: 72,821
Posted By Bleed Away
yo. where you doing your grad?

yo. where you doing your grad?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-15-2015, 03:12 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 840
Posted By Bleed Away
Thanks for this, btw - I really appreciate it! I...

Thanks for this, btw - I really appreciate it! I showed it to a few people and none of them got anyrthing from it, despite it being very relevant to what is going on today.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-14-2015, 07:06 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 350
Posted By Bleed Away
Absolutely no offense was taken. This is no...

Absolutely no offense was taken. This is no longer a sensitive subject for me (thanks to the therapy). I wanted this to have a different aesthetics to that of "Northern Atheist"; I didn't want things...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-09-2015, 03:01 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 350
Posted By Bleed Away
Dear Susan

I apologise via autobiography
with my essence suppressed;
I loved you more than a man should dare.
This was the end of the road for me;
I had lost myself
therein concatenation,
humans called it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 06:34 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 198
Posted By Bleed Away
The third stanza was particularly...

The third stanza was particularly thought-provoking.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 06:31 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 252
Posted By Bleed Away
I enjoyed this, especially the imagery in the...

I enjoyed this, especially the imagery in the first stanza! The only thing that distracted me while reading this was the lack of punctuation; the first stanza had none at all, while the second had...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 06:22 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 175
Posted By Bleed Away
I think this poem was constructed perfectly....

I think this poem was constructed perfectly. Instead of the format taking presidence over the meaning behind the poem, it complimented it very well. The line breaks were very calculated.

The only...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 05:45 AM
Replies: 2,155
Views: 72,821
Posted By Bleed Away
After being on this site for over 9 years, I have...

After being on this site for over 9 years, I have decided to invest on a guitar (acoustic and electric). Writing poetry for so long and listening to a copious amount of music over the years will...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-05-2015, 08:02 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 259
Posted By Bleed Away
This is you at your best.

This is you at your best.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-05-2015, 07:47 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 239
Posted By Bleed Away
Otto Rocket

Standing at the crossroads, impervious
to the soul that never existed
to begin with. I transformed
into the holy until I become one
with the ruin of not giving a damn
about mortality.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-04-2015, 12:59 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 185
Posted By Bleed Away
Nostalgia

Renaissance man
afraid of change -
afraid of the shrines that our ancestors once worshiped.
It’s funny how history often repeats itself
in a way that M-theory can’t predict;
there are some things...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-30-2015, 12:17 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 229
Posted By Bleed Away
Schrödinger equation

Once upon a time
you wished for a peace of mind
out of principle.

A life of fallacy
soon became your sole domain.
You preserved your virginity
with the wildest of expectations;
It was never your...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-27-2015, 01:23 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 186
Posted By Bleed Away
Think Tank

I am a washer, you are
the village bicycle -
a local minimum; this is just
recreation. We are
just passengers,
with no morals to be found.

Was she Greek or
Spanish or
French or
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-26-2015, 08:23 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 192
Posted By Bleed Away
To a person

You are lucky
not to be destroyed.
You can thank God for
unhurting you. Later
life remains a novelty,
with a livelihood
you can not tame
or regain
or dedicate
to your endangered
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-25-2015, 10:16 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 167
Posted By Bleed Away
If You're Feeling Promiscuous

Numbers and depravity,
there’s no getting around it:
I made love to your silhouette,
I stopped your florescence
from throbbing. I just want to know
your name; I just want to dissect
your past. I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2015, 05:00 PM
Replies: 0
&&&
Views: 201
Posted By Bleed Away
&&&

I promised you
this and that,
among other things.

I was
drunk
you were
sober
and, for a moment,
you were a part of me.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2015, 11:52 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 283
Posted By Bleed Away
I think you guys have a point about the last line...

I think you guys have a point about the last line being too obvious. You guys make a good point about changing the title, but I fear that the meaning behind the poem might be lost if I did.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2015, 11:44 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 206
Posted By Bleed Away
zenopartition

You see, it runs in the family
the demons that my sister is facing...
I don’t even know why
I am talking to you about this.
You said, “The good always die young!”
If that’s true, why do you...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2015, 11:49 AM
Replies: 2,155
Views: 72,821
Posted By Bleed Away
A good idea might be for the WotW to compile...

A good idea might be for the WotW to compile their favourite 5 poems (that they have ever posted on this site) from each of the regulars here.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2015, 09:18 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 283
Posted By Bleed Away
MLK day

Dreams like post modernism.
Gestures like pointillism.
No event can embody a person
because the spirit never relinquishes
its place in human history.

My liturgy guides me
through the formless...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2015, 07:14 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 172
Posted By Bleed Away
Dihydrogen Monoxide

Everyday is grey -
CGI suns and streamlined
acid rain. No schools
left alive.
The streets lit
by inanimate rage;
I found myself
(((in the belly of)))
a returned dystopia
on an unassuming
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-19-2015, 03:41 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 182
Posted By Bleed Away
Cruellest days

“It’s better to be dead than ignorant.
It’s better to be an illusion
than a headless chicken.
It’s surely better
to be safe
than sorry.”
These were the words spoken to me
since the days of...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-15-2015, 10:50 PM
Replies: 2,155
Views: 72,821
Posted By Bleed Away
Long time no see, Randy!

Long time no see, Randy!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-13-2015, 07:08 PM
Replies: 2,155
Views: 72,821
Posted By Bleed Away
I find it hard to ever move on from here because...

I find it hard to ever move on from here because I grew up here (almost literally - been posting here since I was 13). I didn't know you lived in London, btw.
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