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Forum: Tabs & Chords 11-09-2014, 07:28 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 247
Posted By D2BII
I really hope that I don't come off too harsh on...

I really hope that I don't come off too harsh on this one. I understand the amount of work that was put into this--so I'll be as thorough and honest as possible.

The solo from bars 1-20 seems to be...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 11-08-2014, 11:12 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 530
Posted By D2BII
I meant to compare the feel (how bubbly it is)...

I meant to compare the feel (how bubbly it is) more so than the actual composition and phrasing. lol

It would be cool if you did use a DAW. It sounds cool as hell as is, so I can only imagine how it...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 11-08-2014, 10:35 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 436
Posted By D2BII
Ordinarily, I'd do a section-by-section review,...

Ordinarily, I'd do a section-by-section review, but honestly, the song is quite cohesive. Honestly speaking, there's nothing that immediately jumps out at me as something that may need to be revised....
Forum: Tabs & Chords 11-08-2014, 10:17 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 458
Posted By D2BII
Actually, the change that you made with the bass...

Actually, the change that you made with the bass definitely smoothed the edge a bit, at least to me. When I first listened to it, it was noticeable that the section was tweaked. At first I thought...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 11-08-2014, 10:04 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 161
Posted By D2BII
Eclipsed/Flow/Eidolon (Prog WIPs GP5) C4C

Hey guys, as I mentioned before, I had some more ideas that I wanted to have critiqued. Eclipsed and Flow are two old songs that I made.

Eclipsed
Eclipsed has roots dating all the way back to mid...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 11-08-2014, 12:32 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 530
Posted By D2BII
I actually like this piece a lot. It's bubbly as...

I actually like this piece a lot. It's bubbly as hell, the feeling reminds me of some songs from a Japanese fusion band called Trix. There's a lot of stuff going on in it, but for the most part it's...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 11-08-2014, 12:23 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,077
Posted By D2BII
Tempest- I filled out the drum parts a bit more...

Tempest- I filled out the drum parts a bit more and changed some of the chords from 45-49 to avoid too many nasty clashes. There may be more work to be done to avoid clashes, but for the most part I...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 10-25-2014, 02:30 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 458
Posted By D2BII
About a week ago, I listened to some of your...

About a week ago, I listened to some of your older tracks like "Aesthetics" and "Evolutions of a Lover's Quarrel" (that one was pretty humorous despite being a seriously awesome track). This track is...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 10-14-2014, 08:39 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,077
Posted By D2BII
:haha: I can't take full credit for that one. I...

:haha:

I can't take full credit for that one. I actually got the idea from this old Japanese band called E-Z-O (some members of that band were also part of a more prolific Japanese band called...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 10-12-2014, 01:39 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 435
Posted By D2BII
Tried to bring it back in a little. :)

Tried to bring it back in a little. :)
Forum: Tabs & Chords 10-07-2014, 08:33 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,077
Posted By D2BII
Thank you so much for the criticism! I happen to...

Thank you so much for the criticism! I happen to agree with you on quite a bit of it--especially regarding the drums. The drums are unfinished in both songs, but they're also probably the weakest...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 10-04-2014, 11:40 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 647
Posted By D2BII
My apologies! :bonk: Matt Garstka is...

My apologies! :bonk:



Matt Garstka is incredible. No shame in ripping his style at all. It's beautiful to listen to. To be honest, I want to steal some of his stuff too. :o

And to be quite...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 10-04-2014, 08:30 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,077
Posted By D2BII
I still need to add drums--I always do find drums...

I still need to add drums--I always do find drums to be difficult.


As promised, I tidied up the harmonies where JazzDeath pointed out. I tried to really lock into a harmonization with the rhythm...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 10-04-2014, 08:05 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 647
Posted By D2BII
Hey guys, I thought that I'd take a crack at...

Hey guys, I thought that I'd take a crack at reviewing your music, as I've thoroughly enjoyed the stuff I've heard from one of your previous collaboration "Ouroboros" and the stuff that was written...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 09-01-2014, 01:43 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,077
Posted By D2BII
^ Thank you for your criticism! Hopefully I can...

^ Thank you for your criticism! Hopefully I can make some real changes to both of these songs by the New Year. I want to make sure that note clashes are minimal and intentional when they actually are...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-31-2014, 08:06 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 743
Posted By D2BII
I'm not sure if I should clap or if I should cry....

I'm not sure if I should clap or if I should cry. Ditto CheesyMozarella... That was incredible.



I wish I could do that.... :o :cry:
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-31-2014, 05:03 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,180
Posted By D2BII
I gotta say, your part threw me for a loop. :haha:

I gotta say, your part threw me for a loop. :haha:
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-31-2014, 03:25 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 478
Posted By D2BII
I've listened to all three so far, and I have to...

I've listened to all three so far, and I have to say that you have some very good work here. If I had to pick between the three, I would say that Geochronmachane is my favorite. That's mainly because...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-13-2014, 08:03 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,077
Posted By D2BII
Thank you for your critique! I think I understand...

Thank you for your critique! I think I understand where you're coming from as far as the clashing and lack of harmonic discipline goes, and I certainly agree that there are many areas where things...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-10-2014, 12:58 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,180
Posted By D2BII
I had to calm it down a little. :haha:

I had to calm it down a little. :haha:
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-09-2014, 02:35 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,991
Posted By D2BII
This is my first time critiquing a piece, and...

This is my first time critiquing a piece, and overall, I really do enjoy your work. Your musical vocabulary is incredible, and is honestly way above my level of theoretical understanding. I'll try to...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-09-2014, 11:42 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,180
Posted By D2BII
Oh my god. That was brilliant. :haha:

Oh my god. That was brilliant. :haha:
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-09-2014, 01:19 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,180
Posted By D2BII
Thanks a lot for the compliment. I just checked...

Thanks a lot for the compliment. I just checked Spiral Architect and they're an awesome band. I actually made that riff for one of my originals sometime between 2011 and 2012. I thought that it...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-08-2014, 04:52 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,077
Posted By D2BII
Proggy stuff? (GP5 WIPs, C4C)

Hey guys, attached are a couple of pieces that I've written (and had to rewrite/rearrange as a result of someone stealing my first laptop :angry: ). There are still several more songs that I'll have...
Forum: Tabs & Chords 08-08-2014, 02:16 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,180
Posted By D2BII
Hope you guys like it. :D EDIT: Hopefully I...

Hope you guys like it. :D


EDIT: Hopefully I didn't step out of turn... :confused:

EDIT 2: Edited my part again.
Forum: Guitar Gear & Accessories 01-16-2014, 04:42 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 815
Posted By D2BII
I remember seeing a great thread on here from way...

I remember seeing a great thread on here from way back about guitar shops in Japan. I'd suggest you check it out--so much excellent gear and many Japanese exclusive guitars shown in this...
Forum: Guitar Gear & Accessories 01-16-2014, 04:21 PM
Replies: 47
Views: 979
Posted By D2BII
That is one hell of a rig. :golfclap:

That is one hell of a rig. :golfclap:
Forum: Guitar Gear & Accessories 01-16-2014, 04:18 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 815
Posted By D2BII
There are plenty of Japanese-only ESP, Ibanez,...

There are plenty of Japanese-only ESP, Ibanez, and Schecter (such as the BH-I 24 for example) guitars. Then of course, you have the Japan-only lower models for ESP (such as Grassroots and Edwards)....
Forum: Guitar Gear & Accessories 01-12-2014, 12:36 AM
Replies: 853
Views: 11,225
Posted By D2BII
Unfortunately, I don't have any playing...

Unfortunately, I don't have any playing experience with either Diezel or Bogner to give a truly informed opinion. All I know about those companies' amps are the specs (Diezel amps are often loaded...
Forum: Guitar Gear & Accessories 01-11-2014, 10:54 PM
Replies: 853
Views: 11,225
Posted By D2BII
They make awesome amps, just that they aren't for...

They make awesome amps, just that they aren't for everyone and the amps aren't really that popular in comparison to Mesas, Diezels, etc. Often times it seems that people either love them or hate...
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