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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
05-03-2013, 07:40 PM
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Views: 172
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5wFisher
in defense
i don't really like this song that much but i wanted feedback so i could get better. any critiques would be helpful. thanks! never know what you had until it's dead and gone you wrong somebody and... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
05-03-2013, 04:01 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 152
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i'm dying
i'm dying i'm deciding the future; always uncertain can't take much more hurting i'm dying i'm deciding should i do it |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-23-2013, 06:51 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 225
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E.s.a.d.
work in progress... eat sh*t and die sh*t, my sh*t must be tasty i don't want to hear you cry enough is enough now waste me |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-06-2013, 04:19 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 192
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5wFisher
turnoff
need help finishing this poem any critiques would be helpfull _________________________ harmonicas cry she waits outside in the pouring rain banging on the door like a bass drum |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-04-2013, 07:21 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 477
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5wFisher
nice job. it moved me yet still showed off your...
nice job. it moved me yet still showed off your poetic prowess. once again, good job |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-26-2013, 07:59 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 235
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5wFisher
down this road
i wrote part of this two years ago an i finished it up last night. C4C? tales of wind and thunderstorms forewarn me of my future down this road i know that men with good eyes are often blind they... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-16-2013, 09:27 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 159
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5wFisher
my darker days
watch silence settle only to give way to madness f**k, ret**d, g*d d**nit and the harder i try the more i need to deny, the fact that i'm not an asshole for denying your temptation so watch the... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques
03-06-2013, 05:59 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 496
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5wFisher
start by taking a lot of notes. then try to pick...
start by taking a lot of notes. then try to pick out thoughts that go together and eventually it will flow, at least that has helped me many times |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-05-2013, 08:24 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 165
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-05-2013, 05:31 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 165
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5wFisher
our thing
every inch of you is craving to be touched and right now i'm soaked in lust let's do our thing tonight it'll make everything alright i can feel your cleansing breath on my skin |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-03-2013, 08:21 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 240
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5wFisher
short poem: roll back
c4c? the pavement is cracked the junkies are jacked the saxophone leaves me blue if you cut your ties your eyes will roll back into your head and you might as well be dead |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-28-2013, 11:43 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 117
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5wFisher
lost my belt
you love me like this i'll love you like that i'll cover you in kisses so sweet so sweet babe, don't even begin to think you can control yourself you lost my keys, you lost my phone you lost my belt |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-18-2013, 01:02 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 217
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5wFisher
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-16-2013, 07:52 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 217
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5wFisher
icy landscapes
icy landscapes serenade my soul the wind blows on through like judas in the days of old i feel like my life has been wasted my pockets are empty and nobody really gives a f*** as to what i think |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-09-2013, 03:57 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 130
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5wFisher
the knife
did you notice, as you aged? the knife creeping ever so closely to your shadow; cold and calculating waiting for you to lose focus waiting for a random act of violence to put you on the spot did you... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-07-2013, 06:49 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 163
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5wFisher
bare limbs
this winter chill blows through my bare limbs leaving my ears pleading for mercy this sound, as unpleasant as a choir of crying babies it's effect, like sirens signaling an of an accident further on... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-30-2013, 03:38 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 148
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5wFisher
no use to you
i know it's no use to you now but i love you you know the sun sits high above the clouds where it belongs i know it's no use to you now but i need you and if the rain creeps in through the... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-13-2013, 04:10 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 238
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5wFisher
thanks for the critique. i will look into keeping...
thanks for the critique. i will look into keeping my lyrics succint |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-13-2013, 03:59 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 238
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5wFisher
being obscene
smoking cigars racing cars he'll fly to mars is there something he's hiding? bankrupt, he's a poet no guitar, he sold it he starts walking the people think he's running away |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
09-16-2012, 05:29 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 123
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5wFisher
what will you do?
what will you do when everything's been conquered? you've sailed the seven seas not everybody agrees with you though have you not noticed the people muttering under their breath? people taking... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-31-2012, 02:19 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 323
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5wFisher
poo smearer
true story. the bottom is falling out shit clings to the wall and i'm to blame i am the poo smearer hear me out the whole school hates me and i've gone psychotic |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-27-2012, 07:44 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 194
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5wFisher
i'll be all alone
as the sun burst through the clouds i heard an angel sing aloud but by the end of the day i had turned her away she'll fly on, into the heavens, past the sun and i'll be all alone she'll find love,... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-14-2012, 05:17 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 116
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5wFisher
the monitor
destroy childhood toys and dreams i can suck it up i can make amends remember how we were like brothers the best of friends in time in time we will recognize each other |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-13-2012, 06:53 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 116
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5wFisher
no comfort
as blood rushes to my vacant brain my naked eyes are blinded by the light feeling overwhemed by the pitfalls of reality i make my way out of bed and into the shower i dry off, shaking like a... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-11-2012, 09:59 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 109
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5wFisher
train-a-coming
Smack that needle down deep in my vein Deprive me of any sanity that's inside my conscious self To hell with my mental health I see a train-a-coming I'm gonna ride it into my grave There are angels... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
06-22-2012, 07:17 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 94
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5wFisher
ballad of brian jones
*looking for feedback... wasted away, swimming pool dead frogs stuck in amplexus water bugs, sticky snails mosquito's malaria sitting down, i'm not diving in birds chirp, feel the cold wind |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
06-04-2012, 05:27 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 297
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5wFisher
when you smile
when you smile something happens to me i go from a child to a man with few insecurities when you smile there's nothing else i need i just wanna lay here with you and feel you breathe |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
05-29-2012, 05:17 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 205
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5wFisher
schizophrenic
i'm schizophrenic she jumped ship the moment my mouth uttered those words still i need her like a junkie needs a fix this road is lonely as it is cold still there's rhythm |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
05-18-2012, 09:00 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 223
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5wFisher
psycho lover
i can't seem to stretch this out into a song so i'm just gonna write what i have down... psycho lover heads below her shoulder turned release the blade numb the mind one last time |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
05-14-2012, 08:40 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 138
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5wFisher
anger in a manger
anger in a manger a king without a crown the world keeps on spinning but someday we'll all drown a prophet in sandals man handled look to the west and let the sun drag you down |
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