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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-01-2012, 11:56 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 270
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PCADriven
Run
Hope you guys enjoy, lemme know watcha think, and C4C :) Verse1 I live, without ever feeling Anything, that I’m sick of hearing Are the problems that I lose too She stands without ever kneeling In... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-11-2011, 11:03 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 307
Posted By
PCADriven
Thanks for the critiques and thoughts guys, I...
Thanks for the critiques and thoughts guys, I appreciate it. I see what you mean about the rhyming being generic and more style than substance, and I'll be looking at it closely when I revise it.... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-08-2011, 10:40 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 175
Posted By
PCADriven
The entire piece, while full of imagery, did not...
The entire piece, while full of imagery, did not seem (to me at least) to have a very followable concept or story behind it. the imagery itself was questioning and dark, which i enjoyed. Overall,... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-05-2011, 09:58 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 221
Posted By
PCADriven
I really enjoyed the tone and flow of this piece,...
I really enjoyed the tone and flow of this piece, i found it to be very well written. the imagery was very nicely placed throughout and painted a clear picture not of images per say, but of emotion,... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-05-2011, 09:43 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 307
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PCADriven
Not One More Word
AN: C4C! Thanks for reading! Verse1 When I see these lies The ones that haven’t died I feel like falling apart inside With your ghost locked away I have to wonder why It’s so hard to get by When I... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
10-16-2011, 08:28 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 285
Posted By
PCADriven
Thanks for the critiques guys! MusicMan I'll crit...
Thanks for the critiques guys! MusicMan I'll crit yours tonight. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
10-12-2011, 11:45 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 285
Posted By
PCADriven
If You Want Me To Stay, You're Gonna Need Some Schackles (Working Title)
New song I wrote yesterday, C4C and please enjoy! verse1 My reflections staring back at me Everyone I’ve wronged a mirror A conduit for my frustration A quiet corner for contemplation Has alluded... |
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Forum: Promote YOUR Band
10-09-2011, 04:18 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 81
Posted By
PCADriven
Waiting On Gabe (Alt Rock)
Hey guys, check out my band Waiting On Gabe here: Facebook (http://www.facebook.com/pages/Waiting-On-Gabe/160304267392867?sk=wall) (song can be found on the BandPage tab) SoundCloud... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
09-17-2011, 10:55 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 350
Posted By
PCADriven
First off, thank you for the critique on my...
First off, thank you for the critique on my piece, it is much appreciated and I will be taking your words into careful consideration when I edit it. now, as for your song. I felt like this was... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
09-17-2011, 10:47 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 800
Posted By
PCADriven
First off, thanks for the critique on my piece. ...
First off, thanks for the critique on my piece. Please know that I will take your review very seriously when editing my song. Now, onto your piece. I thought this very well written. The structure... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
09-15-2011, 11:29 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 227
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PCADriven
Losing Ground (With Or Without You)
AN: C4C, enjoy!!! Verse1 Who’s going to believe that I In all my years Have never felt anything Without it putting me in a corner I can’t believe that you In your few days Have felt everything |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
09-04-2011, 11:37 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 302
Posted By
PCADriven
Thanks for the critiques and suggestions guys,...
Thanks for the critiques and suggestions guys, much appreciated!! |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
08-31-2011, 09:56 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 146
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PCADriven
I thought this was a good set of lyrics, it took...
I thought this was a good set of lyrics, it took abstract and mystical concepts (gorgons, Greek mythology) and grounded them in relatable themes, which is not an easy task, so i commend you on... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
08-31-2011, 01:53 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 302
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PCADriven
My Life In My Pocket
AN: Pretty straightforward tune I recently wrote, lemme know watch think and as always, C4C!! Enjoy! My Life in My Pocket Verse I spent my time pretending That this wasn’t real I wasted my time... |
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Forum: Pop Punk & Emo
08-19-2011, 05:57 PM
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Replies: 288
Views: 8,468
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PCADriven
the new song is actually pretty good in my...
the new song is actually pretty good in my opinion, different yes but its nice to see them expanding musically a bit |
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Forum: Pop Punk & Emo
08-09-2011, 03:18 AM
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Replies: 71
Views: 1,070
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PCADriven
U said u don't have wireless but if u ever do,...
U said u don't have wireless but if u ever do, around the worlds are great. Try to make ur stage moves personal and within the intensity or feel of the song. Good luck out there! |
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Forum: Pop Punk & Emo
08-04-2011, 01:09 PM
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Replies: 89
Views: 3,477
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PCADriven
isnt he dropping a new record this fall full band...
isnt he dropping a new record this fall full band style? |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
08-03-2011, 11:36 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 304
Posted By
PCADriven
Thanks for all the crits guys, preciate it!
I...
Thanks for all the crits guys, preciate it! I eliminated the into upon looking at it and realizing it was four lines of cliche lol. I also reworked a part of the ending of the second verse, so... |
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Forum: Pop Punk & Emo
08-02-2011, 06:20 PM
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Replies: 169
Views: 4,142
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PCADriven
I thought warped had great variety this year to...
I thought warped had great variety this year to be honest by incorporating a few more mainstream acts along with some indie ones while leaving the meat of the tour to the usual suspects. |
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Forum: Pop Punk & Emo
08-02-2011, 06:17 PM
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Replies: 49
Views: 1,230
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PCADriven
The album was overall mediocre with a few...
The album was overall mediocre with a few standout moments that show great promise. I think the fact that Ronnie hasnt been exposed to new music in a long time because of his jail sentence really... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
08-02-2011, 12:48 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 139
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PCADriven
I liked this. It had a dirty, almost tired...
I liked this. It had a dirty, almost tired half-eloquence to it (if that makes sense). The rhyme scheme you were using I thought worked quite well in keeping a certain flow going throughout the... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
08-02-2011, 12:36 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 173
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PCADriven
I found this to be a frustrating read and I'm...
I found this to be a frustrating read and I'm sure that would translate into a frustrating listen as well. You play around with both grounded and abstract concepts (following someone home and then... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
08-02-2011, 12:33 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 148
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PCADriven
Dont double post it, the mods dont like it. fair...
Dont double post it, the mods dont like it. fair warning, its happened to me before. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
08-01-2011, 11:51 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 240
Posted By
PCADriven
First off, thanks for the crit on my piece, much...
First off, thanks for the crit on my piece, much appreciated. Secondly, I enjoyed this. It had a nice flow and had just enough imagery to not feel like another little semi-sappy song, which I think... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
08-01-2011, 11:33 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 345
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PCADriven
I really, really liked this. It wasn't overdone...
I really, really liked this. It wasn't overdone and had what felt like organic one liners instead of ones where the author went back and intentionally put them in his/her piece. That being said, I... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
08-01-2011, 11:28 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 196
Posted By
PCADriven
Ive posted more than 20 songs and poems here and...
Ive posted more than 20 songs and poems here and all ive gotten are nice critiques and criticism, no one tries to steal your shit, promise. But then again, maybe my stuff isnt worth stealing..:P |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
08-01-2011, 11:27 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 211
Posted By
PCADriven
This had a very simple, honest feels to it, which...
This had a very simple, honest feels to it, which I thought was well done. I liked the change from "half sublime" to "full sublime" at the end, I thought that was a neat way to tie those two stanzas... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
08-01-2011, 11:24 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 304
Posted By
PCADriven
Every Song You've Ever Heard Is A Lie (Just Like This One Is)
AN: Haven't been inspired to write in awhile, but this just hit me and I wanna know what you all think! Thanks for reading and C4C! Verse1 When this rock hits your window I hope it cracks and... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
06-21-2011, 12:08 AM
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Replies: 0
Views: 125
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PCADriven
Have You Ever Thought? (WIP)
AN: Hey guys, I wrote this song with the beat in mind, and I hope that you guys can recognize it as easily as I can when I look at these lyrics. Also, there is no chorus (yet), so these are all... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-23-2011, 08:27 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 123
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PCADriven
I enjoyed this. I thought the imagery was simple...
I enjoyed this. I thought the imagery was simple and quaint, and by the end i could really see and understand the scene you were depicting. Good job. Unfortunately, i dont understand Italian so if... |
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