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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-04-2009, 12:50 PM
Replies: 3
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Posted By hope's downfall
i really like this. i know that's not helpful at...

i really like this. i know that's not helpful at all, but maybe still nice to hear?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-04-2009, 12:22 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 219
Posted By hope's downfall
this isn't a bad piece, but the idea of a...

this isn't a bad piece, but the idea of a misunderstood girl trying to find herself is soooo overdone. i know this because i've written thousands of pieces with this same idea myself. you say this...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-04-2009, 12:08 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 189
Posted By hope's downfall
i have issues with this. you start out saying...

i have issues with this. you start out saying how you could have a future with this girl, which is what i assume you want, but the rest of the piece is condemning her for being shallow and...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-04-2009, 12:03 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 331
Posted By hope's downfall
i love the ending, but the rhythm is still...

i love the ending, but the rhythm is still messing with me. that's really my only complaint about this piece. the content and the idea are great, the words themselves i like, just the long lines...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-22-2009, 08:39 PM
Replies: 8,016
Views: 130,317
Posted By hope's downfall
so i amended my goal from every post on the first...

so i amended my goal from every post on the first page to every post with 0 replies on the first page. and i'm already losing steam. i think nicotine withdrawal makes me more add than usual.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-22-2009, 08:11 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 171
Posted By hope's downfall
i'm sorry, but i just didn't like this piece. it...

i'm sorry, but i just didn't like this piece. it takes itself way too seriously. you're trying to put way too much importance on ordinary words. if this piece had a face, it would have a cocky grin...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-22-2009, 07:45 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 212
Posted By hope's downfall
this feels really impersonal, but like its trying...

this feels really impersonal, but like its trying to be less so. kind of reminds me of some movie where an old business exec tries to appeal to a young crowd by using what he thinks is popular...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-22-2009, 07:21 PM
Replies: 8,016
Views: 130,317
Posted By hope's downfall
can i bum one from you? ugh, i hate that...

can i bum one from you?


ugh, i hate that expression. and myself for saying it. and my stupid arms are still itchy. on to piece number 2...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-22-2009, 07:17 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 216
Posted By hope's downfall
this wasn't all that interesting. there wasn't...

this wasn't all that interesting. there wasn't much feeling in it to me. i could be way off, but it just seems like you wrote it just to write it, ya know? hope that helps, sorry if i didnt make...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-22-2009, 06:32 PM
Replies: 8,016
Views: 130,317
Posted By hope's downfall
im bored, broke, and i need a cigarette. i'm...

im bored, broke, and i need a cigarette. i'm gonna crit every piece on the first page. or at least until my arms and nose stop itching.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-28-2008, 10:51 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 194
Posted By hope's downfall
don't stick that tongue out at me unless you...

don't stick that tongue out at me unless you intend to use it...

that was an actual line from a one act play i was in. it was said to my character's female (and platonic) best friend. it took me...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-28-2008, 05:22 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 194
Posted By hope's downfall
its acoustic with a bit of a souly feel to it. I...

its acoustic with a bit of a souly feel to it. I may write a piano part for it if I find the timeqmotivation.

and the last line isn't really meant to make sense. I get bored with logic sometimes
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-28-2008, 01:50 AM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
well, if i wasn't depressed before...

well, if i wasn't depressed before...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-28-2008, 01:04 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 260
Posted By hope's downfall
so i've not been on here for a while, and reading...

so i've not been on here for a while, and reading this made me realize that i really missed your words. this was lovely, love.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-27-2008, 11:28 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 194
Posted By hope's downfall
yea, you could probably take me...

i ****ing hate the holidays.


the writing's never been on the walls,
its on the hearts that you've scarred.
a truth that never bleeds, only falls apart.
we've been over this a million times...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2008, 02:52 AM
Replies: 1,410
Views: 64,744
Posted By hope's downfall
sometimes i need to be seen to know i'm still...

sometimes i need to be seen
to know i'm still alive.
it's hard to know you're real
when you've got nothing left to feel.
shit shit shitty shit.
****. no. more.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-06-2008, 04:06 PM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
that book totally knocked me on my ass. it was...

that book totally knocked me on my ass. it was ridiculously great.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-01-2008, 01:27 PM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
i dont really know. i was really dizzy and shaky...

i dont really know. i was really dizzy and shaky all day, and every now and then i'd have to sit down for a minute. so i was thinking i needed to sit, so i turned around to walk to a chair, but...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-01-2008, 12:34 AM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
i passed out today for the first time in my life...

i passed out today for the first time in my life (that is, the first time it wasn't alcohol related) at work. aside from the painfully large bruise on my hip, it was kind of exciting.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-11-2008, 01:58 PM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
that's better. :heart: edit: ok, now i'm really...

that's better. :heart:


edit: ok, now i'm really having a bad day...

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0970416/
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-11-2008, 01:39 PM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
dont be sorry, love, i wasn't offended. i've...

dont be sorry, love, i wasn't offended. i've just had a really bad day amidst a rather long string of really bad days, and its getting the best of me.

i think i'm starting to lose my faith in love.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-11-2008, 01:28 PM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
i've been loved by just about everybody... take...

i've been loved by just about everybody...


take that however you like.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-11-2008, 01:19 PM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
love is the cinder block tied to my ankles.

love is the cinder block tied to my ankles.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-10-2008, 01:10 PM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
no worries, dear, it happens all the...

no worries, dear, it happens all the time...

actually, it never happens. i have rather large boobs. but you can't see them on the internet, so i understand.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-10-2008, 01:04 PM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
thanks! and also, me=girl.

thanks!


and also, me=girl.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-10-2008, 01:01 PM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
this winter i'll be starting my 6th attempt at...

this winter i'll be starting my 6th attempt at higher education... er, maybe 5.5th attempt, i've lost count at this point. this time i'm going for photography. i absolutely love photography, so i...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-03-2008, 02:44 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 798
Posted By hope's downfall
sorry i haven't gotten to this yet, love. i...

sorry i haven't gotten to this yet, love. i don't have time now, but i promise i will later. i'll get to your new one too.

:heart:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-22-2008, 06:45 PM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
i was there... and i was an old pro at using the...

i was there... and i was an old pro at using the big girl potty.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-21-2008, 05:45 PM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
she was so surprisingly good in that movie.

she was so surprisingly good in that movie.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-21-2008, 02:31 PM
Replies: 6,068
Views: 95,708
Posted By hope's downfall
^^:haha it's either really impressive or really...

^^:haha

it's either really impressive or really sad that you either knew all the lyrics to that song or copy/pasted then changed all the m's...





edit: the fact that that song is now lodged in my...
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