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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-03-2013, 01:42 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 363
Posted By lububble17
thank you :)

thank you :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-12-2013, 10:44 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 282
Posted By lububble17
^^this could be the first verse ^^second or...

^^this could be the first verse

^^second or alternate verse

^^chorus
your writing style is great keep it up! :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-08-2013, 11:06 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 297
Posted By lububble17
really really nice :)

really really nice :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-03-2013, 11:03 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 272
Posted By lububble17
It seems like a whole lot of ideas that are...

It seems like a whole lot of ideas that are almost together, but not quite.



I take it this part is the chorus of your song, or at least it should be. I like the simplicity :)
as making the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-03-2013, 07:06 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 363
Posted By lububble17
Peter and Alice

So this is a short song I wrote with one of my favorite bands, Of Monsters and Men, in mind. Tell me what you think :)

VERSE 1
Peter was a small boy
In a small town
He said ďIíll never grow...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-03-2013, 07:03 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 425
Posted By lububble17
I love the way this is written! The title...

I love the way this is written! The title immediately drew me in and I like the way there is emotion, but it is not overpowering. Great inspiration :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-03-2013, 06:58 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 233
Posted By lububble17
Beautiful! It flows really well...I'd love to...

Beautiful! It flows really well...I'd love to hear it as a song!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-03-2013, 06:57 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 335
Posted By lububble17
At first the lyrics didn't make sense, but I...

At first the lyrics didn't make sense, but I really like the song. It's different and catchy. Great
job :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-15-2012, 04:20 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 227
Posted By lububble17
nice, lots of emotion. It does have a lot of...

nice, lots of emotion. It does have a lot of rhyme but not too much as long as the tune varies. go for it :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-15-2012, 04:16 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 506
Posted By lububble17
What 21wickwing said is true but hey, i like it!...

What 21wickwing said is true but hey, i like it! great job, and great voice :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-15-2012, 04:14 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 641
Posted By lububble17
This song has a lot of heart :) it seems almost...

This song has a lot of heart :) it seems almost like a poem...great job.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-14-2012, 09:39 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 352
Posted By lububble17
diddo to fenderdude06!

diddo to fenderdude06!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-14-2012, 09:34 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 324
Posted By lububble17
High five to new people! I really like these...

High five to new people! I really like these lyrics, especially Verse 1. I don't really get the 'god damned raped' part, but you obviously have talent for writing. :p:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-14-2012, 09:28 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 385
Posted By lububble17
Dude, this is amazing. Love everything about it....

Dude, this is amazing. Love everything about it. If this is true, I'm SO sorry. If not, well its still great anyways :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-14-2012, 09:23 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 352
Posted By lububble17
Got the sarcasm...pretty good :)

Got the sarcasm...pretty good :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-10-2012, 01:30 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 572
Posted By lububble17
These lyrics are very deep and have a strong...

These lyrics are very deep and have a strong emotional message. I would really enjoy hearing it!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-10-2012, 01:24 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 473
Posted By lububble17
These are really nice...i can totally see it...

These are really nice...i can totally see it being a song. (or hear?) :P anyways, it feels very real to me.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-10-2012, 01:20 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 609
Posted By lububble17
This is truly beautiful! i really wish i could...

This is truly beautiful! i really wish i could hear it :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-09-2012, 11:34 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 354
Posted By lububble17
i LOVE the way you wrote this. It's half poetry/...

i LOVE the way you wrote this. It's half poetry/ half song. really nice :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-09-2012, 11:27 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 230
Posted By lububble17
Thank you for the advice !

Thank you for the advice !
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-08-2012, 11:57 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 505
Posted By lububble17
could do without the last two lines, but I am not...

could do without the last two lines, but I am not one to judge, just my opinion.[QUOTE]
i agree with Delan666 on this.
But these lyrics make me laugh! Awesome...it's rare that song lyrics are funny...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-08-2012, 09:42 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 249
Posted By lububble17
Fade the Black

Hello...wrote this song a while ago. I would love some feedback :)
VERSE 1
The words etch into your brain
You canít handle the pain
You think youíre going insane
Can you keep playing the part?
It has...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-08-2012, 09:38 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 336
Posted By lububble17
what the HEY. another good song!

what the HEY. another good song!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-08-2012, 09:35 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 470
Posted By lububble17
This is so well written! "Blue sky turns...

This is so well written!

"Blue sky turns to starry night
Dont know why but it feels so right
Sittin' here on the roof of this old shed"

"I've lived here all of eighteen years
Through all the ups...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-08-2012, 09:29 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 537
Posted By lububble17
This is a really great song. I know i say it a...

This is a really great song. I know i say it a lot, but i genuinely mean this. The background story keeps it interesting, and the adjectives are well used to describe the emotion.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-08-2012, 09:12 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 230
Posted By lububble17
Unkown

Ok so please don't laugh. If i heard this song on the radio i would turn it off, the lyrics are soo0 dumb and airheaded but here goes:

VERSE1
I feel like the only one in the world who isnít someone...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-24-2012, 10:07 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 280
Posted By lububble17
Dude I am so jealous! as far as I know your...

Dude I am so jealous! as far as I know your skills are amazing! i love this. keep it up!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-24-2012, 10:05 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 519
Posted By lububble17
Wow! lots of info out there...just try to sing...

Wow! lots of info out there...just try to sing whatever song you can never get out of your head. Like the ones where the lyrics just stick. Singing along is great, but sometimes the singer has a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-24-2012, 10:00 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 417
Posted By lububble17
Great! I love the creativity:)

Great! I love the creativity:)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-24-2012, 09:55 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 284
Posted By lububble17
Smile Rest In Peace

VERSE 1
Do you ever notice the things you have till theyíre gone?
I know the answer and Iím not the only one
We are born with the world in our hands
And then it slips through our fingers like...
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