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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-12-2014, 07:26 AM
Replies: 2,107
Views: 69,419
Posted By NGD1313
you are all beautiful people and i miss you all.

you are all beautiful people and i miss you all.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-12-2014, 07:04 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 667
Posted By NGD1313
WoW: one-hundred thousand

almost one hundred
thousand on
the odometer
and i still haven't
seen a thing;

i am sorry
for more than distance
can cover
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-17-2014, 02:01 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 373
Posted By NGD1313
New Hampshire

kill me with kindness
with traffic lights
with rain and sand and grass
with chintzy brown eyes
with two cards a year
with new friends
and old ones

every once in a while
i think of New Hampshire
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 10-16-2013, 06:54 AM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,177
Posted By NGD1313
my one true passion and a bit of writing? in.

my one true passion and a bit of writing? in.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-15-2013, 04:24 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 712
Posted By NGD1313
WotW - monster movie

christened in spit and bit nails
kissing the skin and missing the scales
my Pilsnered affections dribble down my chin
while i study you beneath a canopy of smoke
fiddling with the buttons on your...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-18-2013, 07:55 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 342
Posted By NGD1313
i missed your stuff. very haunting. could use a...

i missed your stuff. very haunting. could use a bit of line break revision as Dylan said and i'm not sure about 'asshole' in the first verse. it's a little too strong, i think? could just be me...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-18-2013, 07:42 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 255
Posted By NGD1313
the stormlands

each day i wake
with a black sand in my teeth
although i've never seen an ocean.

i dream of green seas enameled in spilled salt
the ellipses that punctuate your thoughts
the discrepancies in my...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-04-2013, 06:42 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 423
Posted By NGD1313
No Sleep

you wake me
your voice a warm summer storm
keeping pace with the dreams
i never asked for and could not believe
black blood still in my teeth
as you shake the nettles from my hair
with painted white...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 02-10-2013, 04:25 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 797
Posted By NGD1313
song lyrics are fine too. i'm in Jimmz.

song lyrics are fine too.

i'm in Jimmz.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-28-2013, 06:04 AM
Replies: 2,107
Views: 69,419
Posted By NGD1313
I am always talking about The Weakerthans.

I am always talking about The Weakerthans.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-27-2013, 05:43 AM
Replies: 2,107
Views: 69,419
Posted By NGD1313
please set it up Jimmy, i'm half-way to the...

please set it up Jimmy, i'm half-way to the seasonal grand slam and i've gotta try for them all. also, thanks for the Windmill rec you gave me a while back; it took me a while to get into it but it's...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-29-2012, 06:07 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 572
Posted By NGD1313
^one day i will. not at all too harsh Steve....

^one day i will.




not at all too harsh Steve. i couldn't be more grateful. that last stanza is the point and the first bit was meant to earn what's more plainly stated in the second but i agree it...
Forum: The Pit 11-26-2012, 05:40 PM
Replies: 91
Views: 1,871
Posted By NGD1313
Walter White/Gustavo Fring - Breaking...

Walter White/Gustavo Fring - Breaking Bad
Angelus/Mayor Richard Wilkins - Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Stringer Bell/Avon Barksdale - The Wire
Al Swearengen - Deadwood
Joffrey Lannister (Baratheon) -...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-19-2012, 09:05 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 572
Posted By NGD1313
the shakes

i get the shakes
when you dot the t's and cross your eyes
you know it keeps me awake at night
like a block of faulty fluorescent lights
blinking at me like you used to be
but never really getting it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-30-2012, 05:24 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 831
Posted By NGD1313
thank you all so much. honestly.

thank you all so much. honestly.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 10-22-2012, 05:06 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,204
Posted By NGD1313
innnnnn.

innnnnn.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-20-2012, 03:36 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 565
Posted By NGD1313
yes.

yes.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-17-2012, 07:14 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 831
Posted By NGD1313
WotW - i am the budapest

(i am the budapest
anthologist of second thoughts)

some nights you slept
on things you should've said
while i kept American breweries afloat,
(singlehandedly) with our rent money.
with nothing but...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-14-2012, 08:14 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 578
Posted By NGD1313
Prizefighters

you stand -
all five foot three
of your gentle machinery
slouching toward your
concept of true north
while i lay at your feet
swollenly, sullenly -
trying to find my teeth
through a sheet of...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-08-2012, 08:05 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 460
Posted By NGD1313
Live Nude Models

don't be pleased and don't be (please?)

in the faded light of an alarm clock heart
with a handful of parts replaced
and no longer loud enough to wake -
you are a consolation prized,
a neon sign...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-18-2012, 09:58 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 308
Posted By NGD1313
Aberrations

and if i never get better
it's just as well
each word you speak is hell
colorless cheeks
ribboned lapels
the tale the tape hiss tells.

you are a defeated smile
hanging just below the eyes;
i am the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-03-2012, 06:12 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 248
Posted By NGD1313
bird funerals

there are no rules.
list the things i gave away
anthologies of words i didn't say
are you still here?
the sky threatening a darker grey
weathermen promising tomorrow's today
but it's aimless -
what i...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-30-2012, 11:38 AM
Replies: 2,107
Views: 69,419
Posted By NGD1313
ha. maybe. i don't know, i was surprised when...

ha. maybe. i don't know, i was surprised when they actually did just jam. that point where they had Gibbard running around playing a little on each instrument was pretty cool. maybe Death Cab just...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-22-2012, 03:29 PM
Replies: 2,107
Views: 69,419
Posted By NGD1313
Summerfest? i think i remember you mentioning...

Summerfest?

i think i remember you mentioning going to Summerfest a couple years back so we've probably seen a couple shows together. ha. small world.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 07-22-2012, 02:40 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 578
Posted By NGD1313
voted for the first because the second was...

voted for the first because the second was occasionally verbose, but God were there ever some brilliant lines in that second one. also, the last stanza(?) of the third was just lurid. :p:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-14-2012, 07:52 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 429
Posted By NGD1313
twenty six seems arbitrary, unless there was some...

twenty six seems arbitrary, unless there was some alphabetic reference i didn't pick up on. this was rly gud.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-14-2012, 07:48 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 301
Posted By NGD1313
thank you both for taking the time to read....

thank you both for taking the time to read. :heart:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-13-2012, 04:40 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 301
Posted By NGD1313
a hole in the world

two coffee mugs staining the rug
an old couch where we first made out
our hands easy on each others' knees
like the secrets we keep -
i ask you if you dream,
and we compare notes on leaving
but you...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-08-2012, 05:43 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 316
Posted By NGD1313
forgetting

forgetting
to lock the door on my way out.
for getting to your house
too early to see
two driveway lights and a glowing drift
forgetting a glassy night,
or the way you talk to him -
like a pair of...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-06-2012, 05:46 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 447
Posted By NGD1313
thnx Jimms and other critiquers (critiquettes?...

thnx Jimms and other critiquers (critiquettes? critters?). Seventh Angel, you're completely right about my punctuation. it's terrible.

secret council ( :batman: ), very much honored for the WotW.
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