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Forum: Guitar Gear & Accessories 06-06-2008, 09:44 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 292
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Amp for Acoustic Guitar

Hi there, looking at purchasing an acoustic amp, I've never purchased an amp before (always just borrowed people's) and am looking for something pretty good, but hopefully under AUS$2000. A friend...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-24-2008, 07:49 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 323
Posted By Pete Murray#1
solid, with some definite potential. Some really...

solid, with some definite potential. Some really good starts were let down by some disappointingly forced rhymes in the following...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-21-2008, 08:37 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 433
Posted By Pete Murray#1
My favourite piece of yours that I've read Jamie,...

My favourite piece of yours that I've read Jamie, really well done!
C4C? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=766438
Thanks mate
Sam
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2008, 06:07 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 436
Posted By Pete Murray#1
overall its a decent effort, especially if its...

overall its a decent effort, especially if its your first attempt. Its not horrible and its not spectacular. There are loads of cliches (i'm guilty of that too) and a few lines are a little so-so...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2008, 08:55 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 428
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Imagination on a Screen

Imagination on a Screen
Music and Lyrics by Sam Dutney and Annie Bingley


Iíve been sitting round for way too long
And the world just seems to be
Getting smaller by the minute
There are lives in...
Forum: Tab Talk 01-18-2008, 11:11 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 160
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Tab Request: Left Behind - Jeremy Fisher

Just wondering if anyone knows where I can find a tab for Left Behind y Jeremy Fisher off the album Goodbye Blue Monday? Thanks if you can help and thanks anyway even if you can't :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-05-2007, 06:36 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 609
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Thanks to every one who has submitted feedback,...

Thanks to every one who has submitted feedback, much appreciated. Especially thanks to jamie for the detailed crit, you're 100% right in that this song isn't intended for consumption outside of...
Forum: Alternative & Indie 12-05-2007, 08:09 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 150
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Anyone a fan of Jeremy Fisher?

Just wondering if anyone here is a fan of Jeremy Fisher, saw him live on Monday as the support act for Xavier Rudd and he was pretty good, got his album 'Goodbye Blue Monday' and now i'm hooked :D
Forum: Musician Ads 12-05-2007, 08:02 AM
Replies: 1,353
Views: 83,270
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Moving down to brisbane in January and looking to...

Moving down to brisbane in January and looking to find some people to jam with, I'm mostly into surf/folk/easy listening style acoustic (think Jack Johnson, Matt Costa, the Beautiful Girls, Pete...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2007, 10:35 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 246
Posted By Pete Murray#1
I really liked this piece, plenty of different...

I really liked this piece, plenty of different ways to read it and a lovely flow. I really loved the third stanza, that classic image of the angel on one shoulder and the devil on the other really...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2007, 10:00 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 169
Posted By Pete Murray#1
I think it does need a bit of work, in particular...

I think it does need a bit of work, in particular as you said there's no chorus. For a pop-punk song the chorus is essential so I think you should focus on putting together a good chorus to...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2007, 09:30 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 625
Posted By Pete Murray#1
I really liked this piece, I'm not going to...

I really liked this piece, I'm not going to provide a stanza-by-stanza crit for this one because I don't feel it's necessary. There's a lovely feel encassing the whole piece and the last stanza in...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2007, 08:35 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 325
Posted By Pete Murray#1
you did a good job overall, what i particularly...

you did a good job overall, what i particularly liked was the way the rhymes flowed so well. A few things maybe consider as I said above but overall it was quite good.
C4C?...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2007, 07:26 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 435
Posted By Pete Murray#1
well I've been away from the forums for almost a...

well I've been away from the forums for almost a year but I still recall your old pieces having much more pizzaz (sp) still it works as what it is with the exception of the one stanza mentioned. It...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2007, 07:15 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 922
Posted By Pete Murray#1
really good piece overall, good angle, some great...

really good piece overall, good angle, some great lines. Admittedly some of it needs some more polish IMO but definately an excellent start

c4c?...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2007, 07:05 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 274
Posted By Pete Murray#1
overall I actually really liked this piece, to me...

overall I actually really liked this piece, to me there's something beautiful about a simple strong that isn't riddled with complexity and metaphors, that simply expresses an emotion in a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2007, 06:59 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 480
Posted By Pete Murray#1
a pretty good piece overall, a line or two that...

a pretty good piece overall, a line or two that doesn't seem quite right to me but that aside it looks very sharp
c4c? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=727998 If you'd be so kind
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2007, 10:42 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 251
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Really don't have much to add here, it's a...

Really don't have much to add here, it's a definate example of how less can be more. A good solid piece that i certainly wouldn't mind hearing a recording of

c4c?...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2007, 10:22 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 527
Posted By Pete Murray#1
a good piece overall, the theme is strong...

a good piece overall, the theme is strong throughout and I can hear it in my head sounding pretty damn good with the right music behind it

c4c?...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2007, 10:15 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 373
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Very strong piece, powerful throughout without...

Very strong piece, powerful throughout without being over-simplified or too complicated, a very happy medium. Really good piece
c4c?...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2007, 10:08 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 609
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Kimberley (If I was)

At the end of the year I'm leaving my town to go and study in Brisbane which means I have to leave my girlfriend (who's a year younger than me and still at school) behind. Since she wants to go to a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-25-2007, 07:09 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 399
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Overall quite a good piece, some flow problems at...

Overall quite a good piece, some flow problems at times but nothing that isn't eminently (sp?) fixable.
cheers
Sam
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-25-2007, 07:12 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 143
Posted By Pete Murray#1
The River

This is my first go at songwriting in almost a year so go to town on it

Crit for crit of course

The River (tentatively titled)

(Verse 1)
I wake up early morning
Alarm pulls me from my sleep
I walk...
Forum: Tab Talk 04-18-2007, 05:00 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 882
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Chris Smither - No Love Today

Anybody know where I can find a tab of this? There isn't one here at UG (obviously or else I wouldn't haveto ask), really want to get a tab for this but so far my searches have proved fruitless (if...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-29-2007, 04:48 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 282
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Good finish, slight change to the bridge. This...

Good finish, slight change to the bridge.
This was really awesome, first and 3rd verses were great, chorus was pretty good, bridges weren't so flash. Still this was a pretty awesme song and it was...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-29-2007, 04:40 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 342
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Good finish Not bad, the first two verses arent...

Good finish

Not bad, the first two verses arent great but the rest is very good. raise the bar on the first two verses and this would be outstanding.

Please have a look at mine, "Good Company",...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-29-2007, 06:10 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 257
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Good piece, might be a bit short though... not...

Good piece, might be a bit short though... not really sure, but it reads very well and I liked it.
Please have a look at mine "Good Company" link in my sig.
Cheers
-Sam
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-27-2007, 07:16 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 259
Posted By Pete Murray#1
I like the repetition of the chorus at the...

I like the repetition of the chorus at the end.
PLenty of interpretations for this, some more obvious than others. I like this piece, its left open to the reader/listener to discern the meaning...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-25-2007, 10:41 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 547
Posted By Pete Murray#1
Actually you missed mine, link is here...

Actually you missed mine,
link is here
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=508877

Cheers Jamie
-Sam
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-25-2007, 12:06 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 547
Posted By Pete Murray#1
I liked this a lot, it was different for sure but...

I liked this a lot, it was different for sure but I liked it. I laughed so hard at the 'mind out for death' part I just thought that was hilarious, I haven't heard someone say that since I was about...
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