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Forum: Singing & Vocals 10-15-2013, 11:59 AM
Replies: 4,783
Views: 130,320
Posted By Saparasa
Oh man merriman you're the freaking best. Just...

Oh man merriman you're the freaking best. Just listened to the fry tutorial on your profile and the combination of the jaw drop, keeping the soft palate raised and sending the air at the hard palate...
Forum: Singing & Vocals 10-15-2013, 11:39 AM
Replies: 4,783
Views: 130,320
Posted By Saparasa
No, I don't really have anything to record it...

No, I don't really have anything to record it with well. I guess I'll stick with practicing false chord screams, which come much more naturally to me to be honest. Seems like most metal bands use fry...
Forum: Singing & Vocals 10-13-2013, 01:08 PM
Replies: 4,783
Views: 130,320
Posted By Saparasa
Ok, just a quick question. I've been doing fry...

Ok, just a quick question. I've been doing fry screaming for a few months now and I'm finally getting proficient and reliable with it, but the thing is, whenever I swallow then scream straight after,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-02-2013, 10:36 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 360
Posted By Saparasa
Hi, I've been... busy, no not busy, just terrible...

Hi, I've been... busy, no not busy, just terrible at commiting to anything, so I'd not written anything for a while and I only get ideas of stuff to write about when something happens. Anyway, thanks...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-31-2013, 09:00 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 360
Posted By Saparasa
Black Lined Silver

Wow I've not posted anything here in a while, anyway here ya go:

As I struggle into the abyss
With fear of accepting bliss
Hues of black lined silver
Will make me find her sooner
Affection can...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-31-2013, 08:53 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 252
Posted By Saparasa
I quite like it, feels kinda pop punk/emo, like...

I quite like it, feels kinda pop punk/emo, like Silverstein I guess. It's well written and shows you know what you're doing here, it fits that genres lyrical style well, but then you end up with the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-28-2013, 07:29 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 243
Posted By Saparasa
Interesting piece, flows very easily and has a...

Interesting piece, flows very easily and has a nice rhythm to it. I really like the structure, in each stanza it makes me take a pause to read the next two lines, like they're an added thought but...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-27-2013, 08:13 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 375
Posted By Saparasa
Like a dog to it's master

And this time I feel
There's no end to this stream
Pouring deeper into me
Burning my insides
Corroding the remains
Cleaning me out.

But this is what I deserve
Agony until I can't stand anymore
'Til...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-22-2013, 07:25 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 379
Posted By Saparasa
After reading through and just thinking lyrically...

After reading through and just thinking lyrically (I don't know music stuff...), to sum it up, it's really repetitive. There just doesn't seem to be much there, a lot of it just feels like words to...
Forum: Singing & Vocals 01-22-2013, 07:11 PM
Replies: 4,783
Views: 130,320
Posted By Saparasa
Why hello there, please could I have some...

Why hello there, please could I have some feedback on my screaming, this is a (slightly) better recording and I'd warmed up for a while beforehand. All it is is just 18 seconds of random screaming...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-20-2013, 07:39 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 408
Posted By Saparasa
Hi guys and thank you for your responses. Weird...

Hi guys and thank you for your responses. Weird how I decided to check this just after you'd posted Eccer, thanks for commenting on my stuff so much, you're really helpful :) I'm glad you're...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-15-2013, 06:05 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 408
Posted By Saparasa
Society of Deceit

Hi guys, sorry for posting so much on here but I really need help with this poem, I'm not sure whether to scrap it or keep on working on it. There are two different versions, the original- simpler...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-15-2013, 05:49 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 408
Posted By Saparasa
I really liked this piece and the way I...

I really liked this piece and the way I interpreted it was a man lost his wife and child, with the first section about him falling off the bike and into a haze where he is grieving. Is 'Where the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-14-2013, 04:03 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 340
Posted By Saparasa
Thanks for the response Eccer, I really...

Thanks for the response Eccer, I really appreciate it :) Haha I wrote it completely metaphorically as a guy getting more and more friends and then a girlfriend, but then he becomes dependent on his...
Forum: Singing & Vocals 01-14-2013, 01:17 PM
Replies: 4,783
Views: 130,320
Posted By Saparasa
Just gonna leave this beautiful piece here,...

Just gonna leave this beautiful piece here, marvelously recorded, touching lyrics, amazing vocals.

https://soundcloud.com/saparasa/musical-genius

Waddya think? :D
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-12-2013, 04:24 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 375
Posted By Saparasa
Simple and effective. I really like it. Two very...

Simple and effective. I really like it. Two very relatable ideas which work well together. The way the lines get shorter in the second verse works well too, making me pause and think while I read it....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-12-2013, 12:24 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 774
Posted By Saparasa
After reading through many times i think i can...

After reading through many times i think i can finally comment on this, weird how many people have looked at it but not said anything. I really like the rhythm and flow of the piece, it feels...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 01-11-2013, 07:25 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,199
Posted By Saparasa
Psst how many newbies is that, i can't count :(

Psst how many newbies is that, i can't count :(
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-11-2013, 07:11 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 340
Posted By Saparasa
Entertaining Dinner Guests

A flea among beasts, sucking and leaping
Living but hiding, at least there are feasts
Staying discreet, ready to retreat

But vigilance falls to recklessness
Greed gobbles with intoxication
From...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-10-2013, 05:11 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 377
Posted By Saparasa
Hey thanks for the reply :) Been so busy lately...

Hey thanks for the reply :) Been so busy lately and forgot to reply. Hmm when i read that line i take a pause there and i kinda think it fits but ill think about that. How did you interpret itbecause...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-06-2013, 08:08 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 377
Posted By Saparasa
Enlightenment in Darkness

Graciously swaying beneath the facade
Deceiving all sense with our intentions
Perceptions pass further than peeping eyes
Apprehension is not an invention

The ones out there, they know, yeah, they...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-02-2013, 05:21 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 431
Posted By Saparasa
Thanks a lot for the responses and criticisms,...

Thanks a lot for the responses and criticisms, it's really appreciated. Haha yeh, looking through it now there are some silly spelling/grammar mistakes, i typed it out pretty quickly. I guess i'll do...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 01-01-2013, 09:10 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,199
Posted By Saparasa
Hi there, I do believe I meet the requirements,...

Hi there, I do believe I meet the requirements, however there seems to be a lack of willingness to participate in here :( I'm crappy anyway but it would be nice to have some competition with other...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-01-2013, 09:07 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,281
Posted By Saparasa
Holy crap... Wow that was pretty darn awesome,...

Holy crap... Wow that was pretty darn awesome, really really well written and structured and avery pleasant story :) Damn you, I can't criticize it with my nooby knowledge :P
Would you like to read...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-01-2013, 07:45 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 430
Posted By Saparasa
Wow! That was really awesome, love the feeling to...

Wow! That was really awesome, love the feeling to it. Has that definite cheesy power metal lyrics kinda feel :D The rhymes are really solid, they all fit in well it doesn't seem forced. The general...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-01-2013, 11:05 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 431
Posted By Saparasa
Crosses not working? Try a Torah

Hi guys! I've had an urge to write lyrics for a while now and have been attempting bits of crappy poetry, but never really liking it. But last night i woke up at half 4 and had a tune and an idea...
Forum: Singing & Vocals 12-05-2012, 04:46 PM
Replies: 4,783
Views: 130,320
Posted By Saparasa
Alright thanks, i'll look into buying a mic soon,...

Alright thanks, i'll look into buying a mic soon, is it the SM58 which is usually reccomended, i can't remember. But yeh, i'll keep working on it anyway as i think i've figured out high screams...
Forum: Singing & Vocals 12-05-2012, 04:24 PM
Replies: 4,783
Views: 130,320
Posted By Saparasa
Haha thanks for replying, yeh... I know the mic...

Haha thanks for replying, yeh... I know the mic on my webcam is awful. I'm not sure if i would be able to get a better recording, my college has a recording studio but i'd doubt they'd let me use it...
Forum: Singing & Vocals 12-04-2012, 03:23 PM
Replies: 4,783
Views: 130,320
Posted By Saparasa
Hi guys! Been screaming for quite a few weeks,...

Hi guys!
Been screaming for quite a few weeks, with practice for at least an hour a few times a week, and i'd like some feedback on how i sound :) Got a cover of Gauntlet of Solitude by The Devil...
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