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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-26-2011, 12:12 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 161
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Snowblind 911
thanks, your pre-edit summed up what i was...
thanks, your pre-edit summed up what i was thinking. in my head this is totally different, i'm going to re-write it and strip it of the messy unrestrained stuff. hopefully it'll turn out a lot... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-25-2011, 11:30 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 161
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Snowblind 911
if i tell you i love you too much (ots)
ots, i hate that it came out how it did, i just... i don't know. it just did. i keep dreaming you’ve died. the trees on the hill behind your house stand still, mostly bare but with a few worn... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-20-2011, 01:43 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 198
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Snowblind 911
**** man, that's harsh. i can only begin to...
**** man, that's harsh. i can only begin to imagine what that must have been like :( :heart:. you don't have to answer, but would you have rathered she left you for another guy? i'm struggling to... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-19-2011, 01:12 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 198
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Snowblind 911
it's harder that she doesn't even openly...
it's harder that she doesn't even openly recognize it herself yet. when she does it'll probably destroy me. it'll mean all the subtle actions and words were totally misread. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-19-2011, 11:35 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 198
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Snowblind 911
xx
i am in love with a lesbian, :/ how hollowing it is to know that she will never love you as you love her- that she could never. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-19-2011, 04:55 AM
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Replies: 1,621
Views: 48,760
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Snowblind 911
i'm in love with a girl who i think is perhaps is...
i'm in love with a girl who i think is perhaps is gay and doesn't know it, and who also has massive abandonment issues/bigger commitment issues, and pushes me away even though i know she loves me. i... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-05-2011, 10:06 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 134
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Snowblind 911
i find that not using quotation marks has just...
i find that not using quotation marks has just become something i instinctively do. i agree it can trip a piece up, but it just feels wrong for me to draw so much attention to dialogue in most bits... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-05-2011, 09:56 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 410
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Snowblind 911
it's been so long since i've actively read...
it's been so long since i've actively read anything, that a piece of this abstract, aloof sorta vibe goes right over my head. and i regret it, because there's definitely something to these words -... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-03-2011, 06:52 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 134
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Snowblind 911
ait
it's nothing much, trying to sort my head at best. leave a link and i'll do my best to give you something helpful in return. i poured the last of the unfinished open beers onto the lawn, heard you... |
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Forum: Bandleading
06-03-2011, 01:34 AM
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Replies: 515
Views: 103,261
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Snowblind 911
First paid gig last weekend. We'd played at like,...
First paid gig last weekend. We'd played at like, 5 parties, a charity event at a swanky hotel with a couple of hundred guests, and at a local tavern prior to this. It honestly put me off playing... |
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Forum: Bandleading
06-03-2011, 01:12 AM
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Replies: 35
Views: 1,650
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Snowblind 911
Definitely agree with the post saying it depends...
Definitely agree with the post saying it depends on the venue. I'm lead vocals/lead guitarist (on most songs) in an indie-rock/alternative band. Our preference is to dress semi-classy - jeans and... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-03-2011, 02:34 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 390
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Snowblind 911
thanks a lot for that guys :).
i agree it's a...
thanks a lot for that guys :). i agree it's a bit thick with overlapping ideas and stuff, i'll sort it out. cheers for that explanation about semi-colons too, allen, i remember that now that you... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-02-2011, 08:21 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 390
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Snowblind 911
why i smoke
it was lost blood seeping into the air before our bodies collapsed; the only treasure for our splayed x’s. the last measure of our waltz; the violin exitlude; the cluttered scuffle as the orchestra... |
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Forum: The Pit
01-30-2011, 01:58 AM
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Replies: 15,019
Views: 288,074
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Snowblind 911
Hey, um, I'm not sure if I'm asking for advice or...
Hey, um, I'm not sure if I'm asking for advice or not yet, I guess we'll know when I've typed this out. I've had a "thing" with a girl since New Year's. I started speaking to her probably two weeks... |
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Forum: The Pit
01-30-2011, 01:32 AM
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Replies: 135
Views: 2,196
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Snowblind 911
Uh, no? Every petrol station around here has a...
Uh, no? Every petrol station around here has a standard unleaded and then an E10 unleaded. In fact I can't remember the last time I didn't see an ethanol pump at a petrol station. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
07-05-2010, 06:30 AM
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Replies: 2,713
Views: 52,342
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Snowblind 911
allen <3. hopefully i'll catch you on msn...
allen <3. hopefully i'll catch you on msn sometime soon. unrelated, in the mood for downbeat pseudo-melancholy arrangements of your least favourite pop songs?! then do i have the link for you!... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
06-07-2010, 07:01 AM
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Replies: 1,535
Views: 75,154
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Snowblind 911
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
06-07-2010, 06:48 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 197
Posted By
Snowblind 911
tram lines
lyrics, crit-for-crit. i don't write for the same reasons i used to, really. tram lines the last sound i remember clearly poured down from the belfry and into my lungs i held it in until my chest... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
06-04-2010, 09:39 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 299
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Snowblind 911
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
06-02-2010, 04:18 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 834
Posted By
Snowblind 911
I agree that it wasn't a great crit, and you...
I agree that it wasn't a great crit, and you probably couldn't take much from it at all, but sometimes it's best just to bite your tongue. It turned me off giving you a critique (not that I probably... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
06-02-2010, 06:46 AM
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Replies: 2,713
Views: 52,342
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Snowblind 911
i would never buy a CD unless i had no way of...
i would never buy a CD unless i had no way of downloading the music. i would also never expect anyone to pay for my music. i feel it's fair. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
06-02-2010, 06:43 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 255
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Snowblind 911
listen to 'step right up', it's so freaking cool...
listen to 'step right up', it's so freaking cool and fun. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques
06-02-2010, 05:48 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,937
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Snowblind 911
metal rarely has good lyrics, i'm embarrassed for...
metal rarely has good lyrics, i'm embarrassed for you for thinking that. also, it matters for me when i'm writing my own lyrics, but i don't really care when i listen to other people's songs, so... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
06-02-2010, 05:07 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 255
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Snowblind 911
jeff mangum wrote that, tom waits is the white...
jeff mangum wrote that, tom waits is the white guy with a black man's voice. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
06-02-2010, 03:09 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 834
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Snowblind 911
as a general rule of thumb, don't insult people...
as a general rule of thumb, don't insult people after you ask for their opinions. he wasn't trying to belittle you. don't be a prick. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
06-02-2010, 01:35 AM
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Replies: 18
Views: 775
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Snowblind 911
i can't offer much by way of critique, but i'll...
i can't offer much by way of critique, but i'll try give something; overall impression was good, personally, i thought the rhymes in the second stanza were too obvious (but that's just personal... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-10-2010, 07:18 AM
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Replies: 2,713
Views: 52,342
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Snowblind 911
i'm glad this is back up. i can't really be...
i'm glad this is back up. i can't really be bothered reading people's poetry, but i like this thread. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-28-2010, 06:05 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 316
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Snowblind 911
these words are just so beautiful when sung. one...
these words are just so beautiful when sung. one of my favourites of yours. :) |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests
02-16-2010, 04:27 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 620
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Snowblind 911
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Forum: The Pit
01-31-2010, 10:50 AM
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Replies: 94
Views: 1,337
Posted By
Snowblind 911
i want to be with the girl i love, anything else...
i want to be with the girl i love, anything else is just icing. |
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