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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-21-2013, 09:24 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 325
Posted By SilentProtest
Really not much to critique when it comes to...

Really not much to critique when it comes to songs like these imo. I thought the song was going to go on from the perspective of the writer after reading the first stanza. What the character became...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-21-2013, 02:25 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 530
Posted By SilentProtest
WotW: Revery of peace.

The quiet static of snow falling,
muffled by a dense wood.

White like innocence wilting a flowers pedals,
Steadfast towards the sky without hope,
Tormented, longing..
Stretching to taste the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-20-2013, 10:15 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 338
Posted By SilentProtest
"another virtue rendered useless by...

"another virtue rendered useless
by permanence."

And then the closing thought that it was never the writer's virtue was pretty cool. Everyone tries to adopt doctrines they believe will help them...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-20-2013, 10:10 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 221
Posted By SilentProtest
Very nice. Cool word usage. Really like the...

Very nice. Cool word usage. Really like the rhythm.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-16-2013, 08:26 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 482
Posted By SilentProtest
Kinda cliche but since this is for a song and...

Kinda cliche but since this is for a song and isn't poetry, how you decide to convey it could make it work. What emotion does it hinge on?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-16-2013, 07:22 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 316
Posted By SilentProtest
Unto you a child is taken.

Second shirt today..
Snot.

I watched the cars roll by,
They know where I live.
Oh god, they know where I live.

Slow. Slower. Not ready.
They press on.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-16-2013, 06:39 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 683
Posted By SilentProtest
Wow. Chills. So very lost in this.. Yet I don't...

Wow. Chills.

So very lost in this.. Yet I don't care. Pictures. Painting pictures.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-16-2013, 12:54 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 630
Posted By SilentProtest
I thought it was damn funny.

I thought it was damn funny.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-16-2013, 12:46 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 355
Posted By SilentProtest
summertime.

Until the beginning,
your heart was a firefly,
with lungs akin to crickets,
and a soul like a shadow.

Silhouettes turned to shackles,
ever so soothing,
luminescence would move me,
away from...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-11-2012, 12:47 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 348
Posted By SilentProtest
I liked the vagueness. It could be Anyone you...

I liked the vagueness. It could be Anyone you know or yourself being timmy fenn, and you allow the reader to put their own faces to the pronouns, instead of telling them what to think. I really like...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-10-2012, 02:59 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 395
Posted By SilentProtest
Imagery was awesome in this. I couldnt detract a...

Imagery was awesome in this. I couldnt detract a clear meaning but it seems to ride on the duality of hope and hopelessness. These emotions didnt come through to me, though they were evident, so I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-10-2012, 02:41 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 369
Posted By SilentProtest
Not proud. But not really ashamed either. They...

Not proud. But not really ashamed either. They instigate it and I fulfill their needs. I consider myself an unsung hero.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-10-2012, 02:29 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 651
Posted By SilentProtest
I would try to hone or get "in touch"...

I would try to hone or get "in touch" with your emotions through introspection and only write about what your feeling when you write. When your happy and you try to write a sad poem, it just doesnt...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-10-2012, 02:17 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 369
Posted By SilentProtest
lol Im that other guy so I really enjoyed this....

lol Im that other guy so I really enjoyed this. Always fail at relationships but I make a damn good pool boy.

*this is ****in awesome. I just keep rereading. My glass is raised.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-10-2012, 02:12 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 651
Posted By SilentProtest
For me, a powerful poem is achieved with the most...

For me, a powerful poem is achieved with the most powerful emotions driving them. Also having a personal connection and experience with the topic.. Hate, Love(lust), and depression work better than...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-10-2012, 01:31 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 651
Posted By SilentProtest
I like the changes. Another thing that i feel...

I like the changes. Another thing that i feel really helps the piece is your use of vocabulary. You really nailed it there, and it did alot to set up the time periods.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-10-2012, 01:23 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 291
Posted By SilentProtest
Pronouns refer to the children.

Pronouns refer to the children.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-10-2012, 01:11 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 510
Posted By SilentProtest
My thoughts^

My thoughts^
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-10-2012, 01:05 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 651
Posted By SilentProtest
When i first saw that wall of text i didn't want...

When i first saw that wall of text i didn't want to read it lol. However, the first few lines really captured my attention and the piece was really easy to relate to. Your switching between...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-09-2012, 02:55 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 291
Posted By SilentProtest
"You mean to tell me I'm not a free thinker?"

"Persecuted" peoples will
Push pupils past their limits.
Forcing Fear into the eyes,
Of our future villains.

Arm them all and send the word,
Spread it to our children.
Martyred minds for our...
Forum: The Pit 03-28-2012, 03:44 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 206
Posted By SilentProtest
Not a bot.... I already have $2.45 lol

Not a bot....
I already have $2.45 lol
Forum: The Pit 03-28-2012, 03:38 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 206
Posted By SilentProtest
^^It cool bro. I just put this here for people...

^^It cool bro. I just put this here for people tight on money with time on their hands. Its pretty easy to make $10 dollars and get a starbucks card or if you really put in some time, you can get...
Forum: The Pit 03-28-2012, 03:21 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 206
Posted By SilentProtest
Cool way to earn giftcards

App is called JunoWallet
1.Download app
2.use code: JC919759 to earn $.25
3.Download promoted apps for $.16 to your wallet

Money adds up quick and you are sent the giftcard codes via email....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-06-2011, 05:34 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 292
Posted By SilentProtest
Simply amazing. There is so much talent in these...

Simply amazing. There is so much talent in these forums. Rather inspiring.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-06-2011, 05:31 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 248
Posted By SilentProtest
Really enjoyed this alot! There are some parts...

Really enjoyed this alot! There are some parts that i cant figure quite puzzle together but nothing i would change.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-06-2011, 03:17 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 230
Posted By SilentProtest
Even Their Twigs are Safe

A little short but id like to flesh this out and see what it can become.

I knew it was too much
The water just kept rising
And my roots betrayed me

In the deluge, I saw you move
So lovely with the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-05-2011, 02:59 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 166
Posted By SilentProtest
Thanks for the crit. I decided to change that...

Thanks for the crit. I decided to change that little recommendation of yours. Im glad you enjoyed it :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-05-2011, 01:55 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 183
Posted By SilentProtest
Overcoming failure/oppression

Overcoming failure/oppression
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-05-2011, 01:39 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 181
Posted By SilentProtest
I really enjoyed the second stanza and down....

I really enjoyed the second stanza and down. Something about the first stanza just didnt do it for me. Overall it was an excellent read.


"yes, i've told you i love you
but that was someone who...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-05-2011, 12:17 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 166
Posted By SilentProtest
Battle with blackness

Pretty rhymey. I know alot of you dont like that, but im an amateur lol.

Late at night I grabbed the sky
And pulled it to my chest
In my heart Iíve always known
That the stars are mine

I felt my...
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