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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-14-2014, 05:58 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 239
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
The Gospel of DiCaprio

dear readers
if you can feel then
please don't read this
it is for the emotionally illiterate
those among us that try
and try as they might
the only eulogy they seem to read
is their own, late at...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-05-2013, 12:26 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 192
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
Excerpt from short story

Cigarette lit. Dangles. Dangles. Smoke clings to it, rolling slowly along it’s length until breaking free at the divide between butt and cancer. It floats gently to the eyes of it’s killer, it’s...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2013, 08:25 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 204
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
Family or something. Title is not known

Monologue for a short story I'm working on. Feedback, positive or negative, is always welcome.

I want to teach my son to love how I have loved, how I love. I want to show him that feeling like...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-07-2013, 01:37 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 379
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
An addict, a lover, a fiend.

Incandescent luminary essence of eastward facing stalwart light
Stitched upon the faintly blue-ish hued embroidery of the starlit night
A cleaner thing was never gleaned within the edge of Sunday...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-30-2013, 06:58 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 260
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
Untitled

Completely unedited. I'm posting it for critiques on the general feel of it, and also for advice on where to improve and how to change this. It is wholly unfinished.

I would really love and...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-12-2012, 01:25 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 219
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
Neutron Star of Dying Memory

Face paint brushed on teenage cheeks,
your lips part and show me
the shine of off-white teeth
under the high school football lights.
it's an act so simple
it couldn't even confuse a molecule,
and you...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-09-2012, 03:29 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,138
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
It's typical teenage whinery. You should...

It's typical teenage whinery.

You should definitely pursue it, though. Make the ever loving shit out of that whiney song. Write three dozen more after that, too. It's necessary for your development...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2012, 01:23 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 492
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
This was excellent. I'll say more after class, if...

This was excellent. I'll say more after class, if I can think of more to say.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 11-30-2012, 03:18 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 733
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
I had to give it to gray. Dem lines was dope,...

I had to give it to gray. Dem lines was dope, son. Trell.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-30-2012, 07:23 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 498
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
Oh Holy Couch of Teenage Fingerblasting

Alone, sitting on your bed
as you dress yourself in the bathroom
with garb which will be discarded
even still, you dress
and I undress,
taking from my shoulders
the weight of cloth
once draped...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-30-2012, 03:25 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 253
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
It's fine. I approve wholeheartedly of harshly...

It's fine. I approve wholeheartedly of harshly worded crits, and happen to agree with most of yours. This was one of my 'Just write shit to get into a writing mood' pieces.

Love wasn't even meant to...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-27-2012, 07:07 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 253
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
Living Diction

You are only,
and will only ever be
reflected light
refracted cleanly
in my corneas.
The image travels
to thinker, thought
and then tongue.
“You are beautiful.” I say,
with a half-smile or a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2012, 06:02 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 200
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
The Observer Being Observed

Someone told me
That you were just
A listless little
Lipless kid
A few years back,
And I tried hard
To forget,
Cause I had doubts
And they’ve only grown up
Since then,
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-16-2012, 01:05 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 270
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
A question about prose

What are the rules on posting prose in this section? I didn't find anything in the rules section, though I only looked briefly. thanks.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-02-2012, 02:59 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 244
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
Thanks, Flev. Anything from anyone would be...

Thanks, Flev. Anything from anyone would be entirely welcomed, too. I don't write much anymore. I need to know how bad I've gotten.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 10-31-2012, 05:29 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,179
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
sent

sent
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 10-31-2012, 02:58 AM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,179
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
So I forgot that I had to PM the submission to...

So I forgot that I had to PM the submission to you (it's my first comp.) and just kind of posted it in the main thread area. There probably aren't any taksie-backsies, huh?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-30-2012, 09:00 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 244
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
Fulgur Urbem

incandescent luminary tombstone
stitched upon black and purple felted skyline
changing now to light brown and faded gray-greens
returning now to home and all those delicate home-things
quietly...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 10-16-2012, 02:31 PM
Replies: 53
Views: 2,059
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
Let me in, I say!

Let me in, I say!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-09-2012, 03:24 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 453
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
Aeterna Solatium Domum

Bubbling echo
of warmth spread out
as well as over
human geographical oddities.
Asymmetrical visage -
Old family pictures
laid out
like waves crashing
cleanly against
inconsistent red carpeting,
Forum: Modern Rock 01-21-2012, 02:20 AM
Replies: 76
Views: 2,379
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
Pretty much anything by him is quality. Try 'The...

Pretty much anything by him is quality. Try 'The Gray Tower' off youtube for starters. 'Lioness' is also quite amazing.
Forum: Modern Rock 01-19-2012, 12:39 PM
Replies: 76
Views: 2,379
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
La Coka Nostra - I'm An American. Also a lot of...

La Coka Nostra - I'm An American. Also a lot of Rza/Gza/ODB (The best parts of Wu Tang, basically.)

Every single one of you should check out Songs: Ohia. If you're into the whole lo fi/amazing...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-18-2012, 11:50 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 171
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
Not too much longer, now.

The Winter air burns cold
turning my body into a bass drum
with the beat of my heart pulsing
through my fingertips onto lit cigarettes

and it carried you up
with the smoke coming from behind my...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-18-2012, 03:18 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 121
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
Dirty Thirty Strikes Again

The funeral procession
is marked by the lining of blue bonnets
on the sides of sidewalks
covered in children's laughter
and mixed in with bright blue chalk
put there by tiny hands
unaware of the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-16-2012, 07:06 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 683
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
I liked this a lot. It's relatable without being...

I liked this a lot. It's relatable without being dishonest. I personally have done this maneuver a few times :D Good work, keep it coming.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-16-2012, 07:01 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 200
Posted By JimiJamesThe2nd
I'm Dreaming of Horse Faced Children

It's been a while. Howdy.


Steel walls
line the halls
of my dreams
of better things
that I've never seen
It's something so bright
so as to cover everything
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