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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-27-2014, 03:05 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 314
Posted By greyeyedfire
I feel like the shitty handrwirting mattesr

Deciphering the handwritign is half the game.
http://i.imgur.com/3p8G07o.jpg
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-11-2014, 11:11 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 323
Posted By greyeyedfire
Something something clever about her name

I like when her hair's purple
she knows it, too
strutting around in her hoodie
slung low under one shoulder
a dirty look over the other
to let me know there's nothing underneath
she's my favorite
and...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-06-2014, 12:16 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 176
Posted By greyeyedfire
....

I feel voices in my head
for the first time in years
some puzzle piece
I turned out to be
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2014, 03:23 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 525
Posted By greyeyedfire
The words people say don't interest me nearly as...

The words people say don't interest me nearly as much as what the words they don't say.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2014, 02:10 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 637
Posted By greyeyedfire
Being somewhat of a minimalist with punctuation,...

Being somewhat of a minimalist with punctuation, I had a difficult time parsing this.
To be honest, the top half just hits me as a short list of images that fall flat.

The second half, however, is...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2014, 01:56 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 378
Posted By greyeyedfire
This line here. I love it. I love what it means,...

This line here.
I love it. I love what it means, or at least what it means to me.
You're afraid of being a better person. Why is that ?
Does being a better person come with new responsibility, and...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2014, 01:40 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 538
Posted By greyeyedfire
Assuming you're around my age (24), I'm sensing...

Assuming you're around my age (24), I'm sensing some degree of nostalgia; thinking of loves past (or continuing, if you're lucky), the days when listening to music in your room constituted a proper...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2014, 01:19 AM
Replies: 5
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Views: 362
Posted By greyeyedfire
The formatting is working against me, here. I...

The formatting is working against me, here. I have difficulty parsing phrases across line breaks, so this took me a couple of tries to make any sense of it.
I still can't make any sense of the second...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2014, 12:17 AM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,723
Posted By greyeyedfire
I will use this phrase in a way that does not...

I will use this phrase in a way that does not make you roll your eyes.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-31-2014, 12:10 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 202
Posted By greyeyedfire
Brevity without gaudy word choices and an...

Brevity without gaudy word choices and an ambiguous, negative ending. I like it.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-30-2014, 11:22 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 189
Posted By greyeyedfire
I'm going to write a movie about Rescued

I tried drawing another angel today
but I still can't get the proportion right
so I grabbed the Jameson
because the name reminds me of good decisions
that I regret anyways
and I put on Jack's...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-15-2014, 09:24 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 367
Posted By greyeyedfire
Mismatched Romances

The warm glow from the horizon
revealed her horrified expression
wordless and breathless
she ran away from me
and into the burning city
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-23-2014, 12:10 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 322
Posted By greyeyedfire
Sweet, Sweet Dreams

I can see her, even when I'm awake
the little snow demon that keeps me up at night
She's sitting next to me while I write
trying to hurry me along, so I can go to bed
because she can only hold me in...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-18-2014, 12:48 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 230
Posted By greyeyedfire
Probably Anticipation

I felt her cool breath against my back
so I turned to her, the angel by my bed
beneath her grey robe and her perfect hair
I can feel her shaking
but I can't tell if it's with dread or anticipation
of...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-12-2014, 12:24 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 211
Posted By greyeyedfire
Very OTS

Fair warning, this is drunk OTS

I spent the night drinking alone
with my new imaginary friend
telling her all about my problems
she doesn't get pissed off like my real girlfriend does
I told her how...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-05-2014, 11:56 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 241
Posted By greyeyedfire
Like a Good Irishman

The building burned down around me
and I just sat in the flames
quietly breathing smoke
with a good whiskey
to compliment the taste
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-03-2014, 09:38 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 281
Posted By greyeyedfire
Strict rhyming is one of my personal pet peeves....

Strict rhyming is one of my personal pet peeves. I find it holds you back from what you really wanted to say. This piece is fine (I vote to leave the extra stanza out), but next time you write,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-03-2014, 10:06 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 236
Posted By greyeyedfire
Cheeks

I laid my head down
next to the valkyrie's wings
while I traced the outline

furry and heavy
my battle angels are more
beautiful than most

why do you draw them
so furry, not feathery ?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-26-2013, 08:05 PM
Replies: 4
asd
Views: 312
Posted By greyeyedfire
asd

My doctor says
I'm a puzzle piece
Madii says
I'm a puzzle piece of clear blue sky
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-26-2013, 06:14 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 363
Posted By greyeyedfire
This part

This part
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-26-2013, 06:09 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 314
Posted By greyeyedfire
Your writing is full of this elaborate imagery...

Your writing is full of this elaborate imagery and philosophical comments, but goes all over the place and lacks a strength. Try cutting back on a lot of words. Not necessarily in a minimalist...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-24-2013, 02:25 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 449
Posted By greyeyedfire
I Fear I May Have Missed a Foot or Two

There was a time when Madii told me all
about her dreams, her fears, her favorite things
I ruined it
now I can only listen to her sleep
fearing the things she dreams of me
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-29-2013, 01:44 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 416
Posted By greyeyedfire
..... ....... .....

Somewhere, she mistook
me for a good example
and followed me home
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-30-2012, 08:53 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 270
Posted By greyeyedfire
Bored On My Favorite Holiday

We just laid there and watched the sky
her looking for the beauty in every star
me too scared to breathe
because it might set her off
and ruin the new year
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-05-2012, 10:06 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 279
Posted By greyeyedfire
Speechless

Moving around furniture
to make room for carpentry projects with my father
places for friends to sit and watch tv
even vacuumed the carpet
so the girlfriend can come home to a clean apartment

I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-18-2012, 05:54 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 353
Posted By greyeyedfire
You still are one of the most talented writers...

You still are one of the most talented writers I've ever had the pleasure of reading.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-04-2012, 02:27 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 358
Posted By greyeyedfire
Better ?

Better ?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-04-2012, 12:19 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 358
Posted By greyeyedfire
Flower

http://i.imgur.com/VYacJ.jpg

If any mods feel this doesn't qualify as writing, feel free to remove it.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-02-2012, 10:34 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 285
Posted By greyeyedfire
I didn't know how to end it because the ending...

I didn't know how to end it because the ending hasn't happened yet.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-01-2012, 06:41 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 285
Posted By greyeyedfire
Just Like Old Times

I'm in one of my moods again
so she keeps her distance
content to know I'll come back to her
on wings of steel and ink
calling her my Konstantine
she'll kiss me in my living room
then I'll sing her...
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