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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-03-2012, 06:54 PM
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Replies: 36
Views: 771
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Am I missing something here? Sarcasm of some...
Am I missing something here? Sarcasm of some kind? I don't know, I always thought writing whatever the hell you felt was the point of writing in the first place. The point of poetry and any creative... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-08-2012, 10:18 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 157
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muel333
"virgins under cover of moon and sheet...
"virgins under cover of moon and sheet exploritouching, finding more of nothing inside each other's somethings" This line was fantastic... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
03-01-2012, 09:37 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 178
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muel333
Downtown
I love the graffiti stains on the same old skyscrapers that help brighten up the three coats of shit tags. Between my windshield wipers is another penis enlargement advertisement or a coupon for a... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
02-13-2012, 09:30 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 474
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muel333
I've been reading a little bit of everyone's work...
I've been reading a little bit of everyone's work and just reread the links for good measure but I have to say, Bleed Away had some pieces that really stood out to me and that is why he gets my vote.... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques
01-29-2012, 01:04 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 710
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muel333
Yes, and probably to save the embarrassment of...
Yes, and probably to save the embarrassment of admitting you actually have the problem. Personally I feel more honest and can write better by creating almost an alter ego within my characters, some... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques
01-26-2012, 11:16 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 710
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muel333
The way I have found to make my writing more...
The way I have found to make my writing more efficient is by introducing a narrative that expresses what I want to say rather than to outright say it. For instance if you want to talk about how... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-22-2012, 03:06 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 210
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muel333
Leaving West Virginia
I need the help of highway dreams, behind the wheel, a skeptic and my blank expression in the passenger seat. One hand wiping clean condensation on the window the other busy in my pocket finding... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-19-2012, 12:05 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,116
Posted By
muel333
Unfortunately I can't say much that hasn't...
Unfortunately I can't say much that hasn't already been said. To echo everyone else, it was a strange and entertaining read. I know I'm nitpicking here but it felt a little bit too much like "then... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-18-2012, 06:03 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 123
Posted By
muel333
The fact that every line begins with a capital...
The fact that every line begins with a capital letter and has no punctuation bothers me. While I like the first stanza I think that it runs-on a bit too much. Personally I would take out the third... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-18-2012, 05:38 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 436
Posted By
muel333
Wow I seriously can't believe this. I've come to...
Wow I seriously can't believe this. I've come to S&L on and off for a couple years now but never thought I'd get WotW. Thanks and I'll take a look at your piece later tonight. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-11-2012, 05:26 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 436
Posted By
muel333
Thank you both for reading and commenting. I...
Thank you both for reading and commenting. I suppose I should connect the first stanza so that it would fit better with the rest of the piece. Since this is about my own experience I obviously know... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-09-2012, 11:43 PM
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Replies: 1,414
Views: 64,369
Posted By
muel333
I want some proof that I was really here
besides...
I want some proof that I was really here besides the hollowed out look I always seems to have. I want some memories- of way back when driving fast cars killing time on steep hills smoking whatever... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
01-08-2012, 05:08 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 436
Posted By
muel333
WotW - Woody Acres
"I could have killed you" says a festering image of laying you to rest, Carhartt overalls wet with piss and velvet stains. Climactic warmth beneath a woolen sweater irritates my skin so I begin... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
09-15-2010, 10:52 PM
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Replies: 28
Views: 868
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muel333
Marvelous, just marvelous. The sense of urgency...
Marvelous, just marvelous. The sense of urgency and comical fashion you portrayed his insanity was great. I loved it :heart:, I really did |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
09-14-2010, 10:13 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 144
Posted By
muel333
Today, Tuesday, It Rainedi like my coffee a rich shade of hazel not that it is more appealing to me in that fashion i just like the color and I also like the wind whipping at my lips as I sit sipping milkshakes in the... |
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Forum: The Pit
06-27-2010, 11:13 PM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
Posted By
muel333
Good to hear Bob! I wasn't even aware but thats...
Good to hear Bob! I wasn't even aware but thats gotta be a load off everyones chest. Oh my. I went camping with 2 of my buddies this weekend and we had a blast. I have 6 person tent and we hotboxed... |
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Forum: The Pit
06-25-2010, 09:17 AM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
Posted By
muel333
i'm leaving to go camping in like 20 minutes with...
i'm leaving to go camping in like 20 minutes with some friends. Many bowls shall be smoked and much merryment had. I miss the DT, i've been gone for a while :( how yall doing? |
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Forum: The Pit
06-17-2010, 02:15 PM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
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muel333
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Forum: The Pit
06-16-2010, 09:59 AM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
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muel333
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Forum: The Pit
06-14-2010, 09:30 PM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
Posted By
muel333
I say you two duel it out in a battle royal....
I say you two duel it out in a battle royal. Winner keeps the avatar, loser meets his maker |
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Forum: The Pit
06-14-2010, 05:09 PM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
Posted By
muel333
my dank stash is holding out nicely. I've got...
my dank stash is holding out nicely. I've got about 3/4 of my 1/8th left seeing as i've only taken a slight bit of it so far and got extremely blazed. I'm reserving that until friday which is my last... |
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Forum: The Pit
06-13-2010, 09:20 AM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
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muel333
Thanks man, idk if that's something i'll do but...
Thanks man, idk if that's something i'll do but it sounds like a reasonable possibility |
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Forum: The Pit
06-12-2010, 07:42 PM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
Posted By
muel333
Yeah I suppose the reason I say mediocre at best...
Yeah I suppose the reason I say mediocre at best is because I don't really take the time to make them something that'll last. Usually last minute things or something I can dispose of easily. I don't... |
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Forum: The Pit
06-12-2010, 07:22 PM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
Posted By
muel333
I dropped my glass spoon today and it broke :( I...
I dropped my glass spoon today and it broke :( I loved that thing. I was smoking bowls and was being too careless. It's beyond repair too. Now I'm in a predicament. I have some of the best bud i've... |
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Forum: The Pit
06-11-2010, 02:10 PM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
Posted By
muel333
the trichromes on this weed are like a light...
the trichromes on this weed are like a light glaze (it isn't a ton but definately noticeable. it looks like it's glowing white when it's in the light). It makes me just want to stare at it for hours.... |
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Forum: The Pit
06-11-2010, 01:19 PM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
Posted By
muel333
good weed right now. real good stuff. I'm...
good weed right now. real good stuff. I'm sufficiantly baked right now :) |
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Forum: The Pit
06-10-2010, 06:11 PM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
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muel333
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Forum: The Pit
06-10-2010, 05:28 PM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
Posted By
muel333
I've been watching Weeds the last few days...
I've been watching Weeds the last few days online. I really like that show haha. Does anybody else watch it at all, I just started watching the very first season and it's enjoyable. Anyway, I heard... |
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Forum: The Pit
06-10-2010, 02:55 PM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
Posted By
muel333
It was actually $50 haha. I heard him wrong on...
It was actually $50 haha. I heard him wrong on the phone. It's a good pickup too, i'll post picks in a while edit: nevermind my camera ****ing sucks. the pics turned out horrible |
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Forum: The Pit
06-10-2010, 12:50 PM
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Replies: 36,190
Views: 507,102
Posted By
muel333
I don't know anyone who gets dank as often as...
I don't know anyone who gets dank as often as this guy and I figure maybe if I continue buying and become a regular that he'll discount it a bit. But gas is expensive here, trust me. He lives a good... |
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