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Forum: Promote YOUR Band 02-10-2014, 05:04 PM
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Posted By StreetBass252
Metalcore from Germany: Falling Back Down

Hey everyone, my Band is called Falling BacK Down, we play Metalcore. We are pretty young, and just have started the Band, so we have only 3 Songs yet. But we already played a Show.You can listen to...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-12-2013, 10:41 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 274
Posted By StreetBass252
No Longer In Your Hands

This is a new Piece i wrote. It's kinda simple, because i wanted it straight up to the point. I think with the Riffs i wrote, it will sound very cool. Anyways, some critics would be nice. :) I can...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-01-2013, 05:27 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 188
Posted By StreetBass252
Thanks for Saving Me

Hey friends, so this may sound cheesy, but it comes from the heart, and i hope it's ok.. anyways, it would be nice if you could tell me what I could do better, critics are always welcome :) Oh yes, i...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-28-2013, 04:50 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 402
Posted By StreetBass252
Dude, i like this. I am a fan of Metaphors, so...

Dude, i like this. I am a fan of Metaphors, so your Poem really impresses me :) You should keep up your work!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-28-2013, 03:13 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 290
Posted By StreetBass252
I guess you're right xD In my imagination, it is...

I guess you're right xD In my imagination, it is a pretty intensive song, but without the Instruments it's hard to carry that feeling..
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-27-2013, 08:08 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 290
Posted By StreetBass252
It Hurts (Being Replaced)

This is another Metalcore song i wrote. This one got better than my last one in my Opinion. Anyways, tell me what you think, critics are welcome. I read your Stuff as well if you tell me to :)

we...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-27-2013, 05:49 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 399
Posted By StreetBass252
Thank you, it was helpfull. Some of the lines...

Thank you, it was helpfull. Some of the lines really dont help to carry the feelings... I will try your Tips, and rework this piece :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-25-2013, 02:40 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 399
Posted By StreetBass252
It was planned to be a Metalcore Song. But it's...

It was planned to be a Metalcore Song. But it's hard to write Lyrics in that Genre, that dont seem cliche/ overdramatic... Yes, i was changing that Line a thousand times already, and i'm gonna change...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-22-2013, 01:14 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 399
Posted By StreetBass252
Breath of Despair [Unfinished Song, Help please!]

Hey folks, this is a Song i've been working on, but i am not fully satisfied with the Lyrics yet. But i dont really know what to with it, so it would be nice if you could tell me some of your...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-28-2013, 02:58 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 227
Posted By StreetBass252
Well thanks, that's really helpfull :) I imagined...

Well thanks, that's really helpfull :) I imagined it as something of half sceaming, half singing, not sure yet. With the Chorus you are right, i didn't really feel good with that - update coming soon!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-27-2013, 09:41 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 227
Posted By StreetBass252
Vengeance

So this is a type of "angry with the world" song, i wrote most spontaneously. It has inspiration from personal experiences, but also from politics. Would be awesome if you could give me some...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-18-2013, 12:57 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 536
Posted By StreetBass252
I like this, has something very special to it. :)

I like this, has something very special to it. :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2012, 06:25 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 191
Posted By StreetBass252
The Calls for Freedom

in a godforsaken land
reigned by a tyrant's hand
freedom's everything we need
that for we fight and bleed

all hope is being repressed
like pressure is crushing your chest
time has come to attack...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-10-2012, 03:33 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 273
Posted By StreetBass252
Hey, i red was and found it really good. Short,...

Hey, i red was and found it really good. Short, but cool. To answer your question, i don't think there is a Limit for posting.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-03-2012, 04:29 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 299
Posted By StreetBass252
Thank you :). I imagined it as kind of a Metal...

Thank you :). I imagined it as kind of a Metal Ballad like Fade to Black by Metallica.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-25-2012, 02:37 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 299
Posted By StreetBass252
God of The Martyr

Hey Guys, this is a slow, but quiet heavy Song, about Martyrs, and what they go through. Constructive Critics would be nice, if you want I do C4C


what gives him the power to believe?
what gives him...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-25-2012, 02:08 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 216
Posted By StreetBass252
Wow, that's a good thing, i like it. Awesome...

Wow, that's a good thing, i like it. Awesome Idea, and i like the way you tell the story, i had pictures of the scenario in my head :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-15-2012, 12:06 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 184
Posted By StreetBass252
Blood and Rain (Re-wrote Lyrics)

Hey Guys, so this is the first song i wrote, i posted this a long time ago, but I re-wrote the Lyrics, so now i want to show you the new Version. Would be awesome if you could tell me what you think....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-23-2012, 04:30 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 205
Posted By StreetBass252
Haha, I'm sorry about the grammar mistakes....

Haha, I'm sorry about the grammar mistakes. Thanks for the critics, i'm going to edit it tomorrow, maybe it is a little bit clearer then. :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-23-2012, 04:17 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 205
Posted By StreetBass252
Rats never make a sound

can't breathe the air outside
it's full if toxic smoke
life has become a fight
i can't see myself in a mirror broken

smell the smoke of burning churches
watch the crown fall to the ground
every day...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-19-2012, 02:40 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 293
Posted By StreetBass252
i like it, too. the verses really hooked me, the...

i like it, too. the verses really hooked me, the first and second are really cool.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-02-2012, 09:19 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 186
Posted By StreetBass252
Cool one, can't find any mistakes.. (Not that my...

Cool one, can't find any mistakes.. (Not that my English was that good, I'm 15 and from Germany xD)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques 07-04-2012, 02:24 PM
Replies: 57
Views: 21,974
Posted By StreetBass252
Hey friends, i have two questions: 1. For the...

Hey friends, i have two questions:

1. For the last few weeks i wasn't able to write Lyrics for anything, except about one thing. This is really annoying, so can you tell me ways to find inspiration...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-02-2012, 03:48 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 161
Posted By StreetBass252
Come Out (The Fight)

i took this far too long
do you still feel so strong
than you can beat me again
it's time to strike back

come out it's time to play
come out, listen to the words i gotta say
come out, cause i...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-28-2012, 06:25 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 439
Posted By StreetBass252
Well, you know, my Rhymes aren't much better. ;)...

Well, you know, my Rhymes aren't much better. ;) I think they are ok. And this is a really interesting Piece. The thing with the Ships, and the Desert, i like the Pictures you create in the readers...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-28-2012, 06:15 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 259
Posted By StreetBass252
Thank you, lay-lay :)

Thank you, lay-lay :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-28-2012, 06:13 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 259
Posted By StreetBass252
Yes, that's right. To what you said to the...

Yes, that's right. To what you said to the Rhymes, in fact, while i was writing this, i didn't care much about the Rhymes, and these Lines were randomly like the rest of the Song.. And to the Grammar...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-27-2012, 05:50 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 298
Posted By StreetBass252
Hey, I like the idea about that sarcasm in the...

Hey, I like the idea about that sarcasm in the lines. Is this supposed to be some kind of heavy metal or groove metal Song? I could imagine these Lyrics to some nice Metal :D
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-27-2012, 05:44 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 259
Posted By StreetBass252
Prayer

now it's so empty in here
i still remember you so clear
sitting right next to me
it was the good days
and now i think of them,
regreting i didn't spend more time with you

i look to the skies...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-18-2012, 04:07 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 206
Posted By StreetBass252
Keeping me Alive

you keep living like this is nothing
but to me this feels so real
we both have a soul to heal
the only constant thing is the change
what for do we live at all?
only to bow and to crawl?...
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