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Forum: Original Recordings 02-23-2015, 02:46 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 683
Posted By TommyGunUk
thanks for the crit man! Appreciate it, link me...

thanks for the crit man! Appreciate it, link me to your stuff you want me to listen to
Forum: Original Recordings 02-14-2015, 05:57 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 256
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey dude, This piece is pretty good, I reckon it...

Hey dude,

This piece is pretty good, I reckon it would work well as music for like a trailer or something for a movie or TV show. The production isnt bad, but you might wanna take a look at the...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-14-2015, 05:48 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 272
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, As far as production goes, this is very...

Hey man,

As far as production goes, this is very good. The drums are nice and crisp, the guitar tones are quite brilliant, and the balance is excellent, I can't criticise any part of it. As far as...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-11-2015, 04:26 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 243
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man The song is pretty good, the production...

Hey man

The song is pretty good, the production is very good. The tones on the guitar are nice too, the balance is great, I like what youve done there. The song has a creepy vibe which you have...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-11-2015, 04:19 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 173
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, The thing has a nice vibe, and the...

Hey man,

The thing has a nice vibe, and the soloing is pretty cool, it attracts attention. If I were you I would play around with the texture as the song goes on, with a sort of repetitive thing...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-10-2015, 06:51 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 253
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, Rather good, the beginning especially...

Hey man,

Rather good, the beginning especially reminded me of Sithu Aye. The higher arpeggiated guitar after the beginning probably needs to be made a little bit louder, its almost drowned out by...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-10-2015, 06:43 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 163
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey dude, The mix is good, in terms of balance,...

Hey dude,

The mix is good, in terms of balance, and the guitar lead tone is nice. My only remark is that it sounds just a tad empty, and that can be solved by having some extra tracks with clean...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-02-2015, 05:58 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 188
Posted By TommyGunUk
Im normally harsh in my reviews, but this track...

Im normally harsh in my reviews, but this track is literally perfect in every way

The lyrics are expressive, the title is a small glimpse into my own soul

The music, my God; I met a woman, got...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-01-2015, 03:46 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 163
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey dude. Sounds very Floyd. The solo guitar...

Hey dude. Sounds very Floyd. The solo guitar needs to be maybe slightly louder, its almost buried in the texture. The tone of the electric guitar is just a tad icy. What alot of people do when they...
Forum: Original Recordings 02-01-2015, 03:39 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 205
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, Mix is good. The song has got some good...

Hey man,

Mix is good. The song has got some good compositional devices too; repetition, memorable melodies, not bad. The large amount of repetition makes it feel like it drags on a little, you want...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-28-2015, 05:41 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 197
Posted By TommyGunUk
You've already reviewed my stuff so dw about C4C...

You've already reviewed my stuff so dw about C4C haha

The track is pretty nice, sweet medieval folk sort of feel. Be careful with the mix, the vocals very nearly overpower the guitar. They dont, but...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-28-2015, 05:35 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 149
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, The opening track is mixed pretty well,...

Hey man,

The opening track is mixed pretty well, plenty of low end on the main riff guitar, its loud enough but it doesnt overpower the drums or bass. so good job there. The lead guitar is a tad...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-28-2015, 07:27 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 303
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey dude, In the Mind of Homonculus is good. The...

Hey dude,

In the Mind of Homonculus is good. The beginning was very well done. In terms of production, the balance is almost perfect. There just needs to be a slight boost in volume in the vocals...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-26-2015, 12:26 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 143
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey dude, Good mix. Good playing. You've got...

Hey dude,

Good mix. Good playing. You've got some proper ideas and stuff going, which I like. It gives your piece character and makes it recognisable as your own. Work on reincorporating your main...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-25-2015, 02:33 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 350
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey dude, for the soloing in particular, yours...

Hey dude,

for the soloing in particular, yours wasn't bad by any means. The sweeps were a nice touch, and its fairly melodic. Its good, but it doesnt stand out in particular from other good...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-25-2015, 02:16 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 245
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, Ill give most of my crit on the...

Hey man, Ill give most of my crit on the mixing.

The mix isnt too bad, but you need to have a look at things like the hi hat that jumps in occaisionally and stuff like that, make sure it isnt too...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-22-2015, 09:02 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 257
Posted By TommyGunUk
Thanks for the crit man, very detailed, and Im...

Thanks for the crit man, very detailed, and Im glad you enjoyed my tracks.

All I See - The piano part repeating is very good in the beginning, and it develops well as the song progresses. The heavy...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-22-2015, 06:13 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 335
Posted By TommyGunUk
The singing is relatively bluesy, a bit weird,...

The singing is relatively bluesy, a bit weird, but I like it. Riff is nice. Good atmosphere.

I think you need to think about other areas in your writing besides just the chords, and melodies and...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-22-2015, 09:03 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 152
Posted By TommyGunUk
Beginning is very mellow, very pleasant, and it...

Beginning is very mellow, very pleasant, and it draws you in very well. However the intro sequence is a little long for the length of the overall track. You should make it longer so as to have the...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-20-2015, 01:52 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 683
Posted By TommyGunUk
Dude, if you like, go ahead. I dont mind, I'd be...

Dude, if you like, go ahead. I dont mind, I'd be interested in how it turns out. Just if you show it to people, be sure to credit me for the writing and stuff. But otherwise, go for it! And show me...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-19-2015, 05:44 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 683
Posted By TommyGunUk
Shameless bump - Thanks for the crit guys. As a...

Shameless bump - Thanks for the crit guys. As a result I think these tracks (besides Further and maybe Rain) will sit as demos, and Ill redo them hopefully some time this year with my friend who is a...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-19-2015, 06:33 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 231
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, To be honest I have no criticism. As...

Hey man,

To be honest I have no criticism. As far as composition goes it works. It can be called repetitive, but I feel like it works. This is a piece which depends heavily on vocals and the story,...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-18-2015, 03:33 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 734
Posted By TommyGunUk
Yo dude, Production is very good, the only...

Yo dude,

Production is very good, the only criticism I can give is the lead in the beginning after the riff, where the riff carries on, is a little too quiet. But apart from that its very well...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-17-2015, 06:20 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 168
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, Very Pink Floyd. You make use of a main...

Hey man,

Very Pink Floyd. You make use of a main idea, repeating it and stuff which is great, but you don't really develop it beyond a bit of sequencing. If I were you I would develop the main idea...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-16-2015, 01:54 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 353
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, Whats good; Sounds powerful, mixed...

Hey man,

Whats good; Sounds powerful, mixed reasonably well in terms of bass, rhythm guitar, vocals etc. Structure good.

Things to think about; The intro is too long, you need to either have...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-15-2015, 12:19 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 305
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey dude, Okay, your intro was pretty good,...

Hey dude,

Okay, your intro was pretty good, though think about playing with texture a little bit more in the beginning. The riffs were introduced well, and the gradual changes make for interesting...
Forum: Guitar Gear & Accessories 01-13-2015, 09:04 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 174
Posted By TommyGunUk
^sweet, thanks for the part number, man. Ill...

^sweet, thanks for the part number, man. Ill check it out
Forum: Guitar Gear & Accessories 01-13-2015, 02:56 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 174
Posted By TommyGunUk
@Offworld92 Thats a really good point. I ended up...

@Offworld92 Thats a really good point. I ended up buying it; put a down payment and paying the rest next week, should get to me by the time the guy is back home and can send it, thanks for the advice...
Forum: Guitar Gear & Accessories 01-12-2015, 07:00 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 174
Posted By TommyGunUk
He blocked it off because he doesnt have the trem...

He blocked it off because he doesnt have the trem bar, and so it doesnt come with one. The trem works alright otherwise, from what I know. Finding a trem bar that fits *might* be a problem but Im...
Forum: Original Recordings 01-12-2015, 04:48 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 694
Posted By TommyGunUk
Hey man, Planet Progression reminded me a bit of...

Hey man,

Planet Progression reminded me a bit of Radio Gaga by Queen at first haha. Its weird, but it works. The vocals suit the song very well.The song itself is perfectly good, and I guess...
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