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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-15-2012, 03:55 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 199
Posted By leilalauren
Nice work! A very appreciated point you put...

Nice work!
A very appreciated point you put forward...well said as well.
The verses are rather ungangly at times yet with folk that's often a welcome trend.
I definitely think that the chorus is the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-15-2012, 03:35 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 531
Posted By leilalauren
This is a pretty predictable piece. It's simple,...

This is a pretty predictable piece. It's simple, and I won't try to make it into something it's not. I wouldn't say it's mind blowing, but it's straightforward and I can appreciate that.
I like it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-14-2012, 05:41 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 218
Posted By leilalauren
Haha...those are a lot of words...and big ones at...

Haha...those are a lot of words...and big ones at times. :)
I'd be impressed to see how you fit all of it into a coherent piece of music, but I'm sure you've figured that out...
If a frustrated,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-14-2012, 05:15 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 198
Posted By leilalauren
7/13/12 For Good

It's been awhile since I've been here...good to be back. This one has got a Mumford and Sons'ish feel to it. Wrote it on the piano:)

Chorus
I am dirty, I am weak
And so afraid to speak
Of things I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-12-2012, 10:51 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 372
Posted By leilalauren
Wow....this is like a totally different piece!!!...

Wow....this is like a totally different piece!!! Nice edit. ;)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-10-2012, 01:28 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 372
Posted By leilalauren
Good to see that you are writing again my friend!...

Good to see that you are writing again my friend! :)
Mmmmm...I'd have to admit that this song makes me a little....apathetic. The whole concept is kind of a moot point....she doesn't like you...you...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-19-2011, 04:22 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 336
Posted By leilalauren
Just watched it. Though it's a very rough...

Just watched it. Though it's a very rough recording like you said, I really enjoyed it. Lyrically, I still think it still needs to be fleshed out somewhere in between your two ideas, but hearing the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-15-2011, 09:58 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 255
Posted By leilalauren
:haha:

:haha:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-15-2011, 09:56 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 201
Posted By leilalauren
hey wil9212, while that is a lovely song, I...

hey wil9212, while that is a lovely song, I believe you're in the wrong section of the forum.

And Dillon_Kennedy dear, that is spam.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-15-2011, 03:46 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 336
Posted By leilalauren
Nice piece! I always enjoy your style....

Nice piece! I always enjoy your style. :)

Question: shouldn't there be a "down" between scoured and hallways? And it's just a suggestion, but if you fit another "down" in that third line you'd have...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-15-2011, 12:26 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 414
Posted By leilalauren
Hmmm.....i wanted to have that perspective change...

Hmmm.....i wanted to have that perspective change from 1st to 3rd to show the passage of time, but perhaps it is ineffective?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-14-2011, 08:43 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 631
Posted By leilalauren
I like it....I'd love to hear a...

I like it....I'd love to hear a recording...except those lines about the boulder...I read it over and over again trying to make it smooth in my mind...but it doesnt. Perhaps you could say something a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-13-2011, 10:40 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 273
Posted By leilalauren
hey great stuff! I really wish I had something...

hey great stuff! I really wish I had something intelligent to say, but I don't. :sad:
This is REALLY cool. ;)

If you wouldn't mind.......
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-13-2011, 10:32 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 330
Posted By leilalauren
Yep I would definitely agree with...

Yep I would definitely agree with gateway01.

Also, the phrase "today's not a good day for me" just sticks out. Why are you telling me that you're having a bad day? Isn't obvious by your imagery?...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-13-2011, 10:21 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 280
Posted By leilalauren
yeah I kinda want to know what was there? The...

yeah I kinda want to know what was there?

The first verse felt nice to me....but the second feels unnecessarily tense. Keep working on it and keep me posted!

Care to crit?...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-13-2011, 10:15 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 156
Posted By leilalauren
Hmmmmm..... I don't know how serious you are as a...

Hmmmmm.....
I don't know how serious you are as a writer...if you are a simple terrestrial expressing his wonder and delight in the world around him, then this indeed is very good.

But however, if...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-13-2011, 09:54 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 560
Posted By leilalauren
The dripping sarcasm intertwined with precocious...

The dripping sarcasm intertwined with precocious sweetness really constitutes a mini-masterpiece. Congrats!

and I wouldn't mind a crit myself... ;)...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-13-2011, 09:43 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 414
Posted By leilalauren
US Untitled WIP 11/13/11

I'm sorry I haven't been around for so long! Please let me know if any of you have posted something that I just have to see!!

As I make myself reacquainted with the neighborhood, would you leave a...
Forum: The Pit 08-08-2011, 01:25 AM
Replies: 85
Views: 1,549
Posted By leilalauren
For those of you that watched last season of...

For those of you that watched last season of American Idol: This here is James Durbin territory!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-07-2011, 10:24 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 314
Posted By leilalauren
Quite clever I must say. Kinda burst my bubble...

Quite clever I must say. Kinda burst my bubble though 'cause I still believe in fairytales. :eek: haha
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-07-2011, 10:11 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 265
Posted By leilalauren
I second themarsvolta. Exactly what I was...

I second themarsvolta. Exactly what I was thinking. It has a lot of potential, I just think it needs to be re-worked. :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-07-2011, 10:02 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 431
Posted By leilalauren
Wow, you a have a really unique style. I love it....

Wow, you a have a really unique style. I love it. I'd really enjoy hearing a recording.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-07-2011, 08:16 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 191
Posted By leilalauren
Sweet stuff. I'd love to see if you could make it...

Sweet stuff. I'd love to see if you could make it longer.
Forum: The Pit 08-06-2011, 02:04 AM
Replies: 357
Views: 6,818
Posted By leilalauren
And how exactly is that being...

And how exactly is that being respectful?


Anyway, I think what matters most is that you and her agree religiously - or if not, are comfortable and willing to live with each other's differences. Let...
Forum: The Pit 08-06-2011, 01:49 AM
Replies: 6,437
Views: 44,253
Posted By leilalauren
^ I don't know about your avatar, but I noticed...

^ I don't know about your avatar, but I noticed your username a few weeks ago and wrote it down because it was so fun to say.
Forum: The Pit 08-06-2011, 01:45 AM
Replies: 137
Views: 3,011
Posted By leilalauren
- I shared ice cream with my sister this...

- I shared ice cream with my sister this afternoon
- I bought a pair of jeans are long enough (YAY!!!)
- still daydreaming, having watched Source Code last night. *swoon* :heart:

Good times... :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-04-2011, 11:38 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 209
Posted By leilalauren
Very clever. The corona extra line totally...

Very clever. The corona extra line totally distracted me though, and continued to as I read on. The same effect as a glaring product placement in a movie - I felt like it was one big commercial....
Forum: The Pit 08-04-2011, 05:37 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 402
Posted By leilalauren
right behind you

right behind you
Forum: The Pit 08-04-2011, 05:19 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 706
Posted By leilalauren
Well I suppose this is where I introduce myself....

Well I suppose this is where I introduce myself. :p:
But I rarely venture out of S&L, so y'all probably don't know me.
Forum: The Pit 08-04-2011, 05:00 PM
Replies: 100
Views: 2,701
Posted By leilalauren
To be completely honest with you TS, facial hair...

To be completely honest with you TS, facial hair has a 50/50 chance. I personally am a sucker for facial hair. Not uncontrollable mind you, it has to be well kept like anything else. But most of my...
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