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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-08-2015, 12:11 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 283
Posted By circular.parade
about coming back home

I throw another log on the fire,
as the town pulls a thick blanket over its head;
The smoke from the chimney rises
and effortlessly blends with the ice fog
a clog in the aerial arteries
a mirror of...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-01-2015, 09:21 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 546
Posted By circular.parade
Eh, that was really solid. Strong ending here....

Eh, that was really solid. Strong ending here. This is one of these pieces that read like it needed to be written.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-01-2015, 05:09 PM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,969
Posted By circular.parade
So apparently it's been a decade, s+l. Miss your...

So apparently it's been a decade, s+l. Miss your glory days. Thanks for the hundreds of good reads, guys. Funny thing to say, i'd be a different man if it wasn't for some of you.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-30-2014, 03:17 PM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,969
Posted By circular.parade
Real happy for you keeno. Congratulations man!

Real happy for you keeno. Congratulations man!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-21-2014, 06:48 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 509
Posted By circular.parade
It's good to come here and be able to read you. I...

It's good to come here and be able to read you. I thought this was really good man. Trouts are alright. More interesting than tadpoles. I used to know so much about those. Hope you're well.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-21-2014, 06:15 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 415
Posted By circular.parade
Greetings from Zagreb. Felt that one my...

Greetings from Zagreb. Felt that one my friend.

Eh, although a stranger to the meaning, i feel this is a strong ending, at least for you. Take care.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-13-2014, 08:30 AM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,969
Posted By circular.parade
this, exactly. if I am to give some news, I have...

this, exactly. if I am to give some news, I have to say the Yukon is beautiful. I never once thought I'd be there for over three years, but that's the reality of things. I am in one of the most...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-27-2014, 03:47 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 478
Posted By circular.parade
the last line flows awkwardly to me, just a bit...

the last line flows awkwardly to me, just a bit wordy or something. I can appreciate the attempt, I still long for just a little more purpose despite the brevity.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-13-2014, 07:42 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 519
Posted By circular.parade
superb. Have I not known, I could have guessed...

superb. Have I not known, I could have guessed this piece was yours.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-09-2014, 07:55 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 401
Posted By circular.parade
the repetition works just fine for me, like it's...

the repetition works just fine for me, like it's allowed in this piece. That rhyme to open the stanza was the good stuff too. good to read you.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-29-2014, 04:55 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 419
Posted By circular.parade
oh man, you gotta be kidding me. This is a...

oh man, you gotta be kidding me. This is a special piece right here. I'm blown away by this. amazing.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-22-2014, 06:09 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 640
Posted By circular.parade
reading this was exactly like sitting on the...

reading this was exactly like sitting on the beach at high tide. this piece just took me away. I'd say the first 2 stanza appeared a little flat at first, but they made everything come together, they...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-22-2014, 07:58 AM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,969
Posted By circular.parade
yeah, turns out I can't write anymore. I miss...

yeah, turns out I can't write anymore. I miss reading all of you guys on a regular basis.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-13-2014, 05:05 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 661
Posted By circular.parade
best thing I've read from you in quite a while....

best thing I've read from you in quite a while. meaning this is quite good
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-26-2013, 12:20 AM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,969
Posted By circular.parade
not unnecessary at all man. quite a few people...

not unnecessary at all man. quite a few people dropped words like those recently, I guess we all feel the same way a little bit. when I'm rich I'm flying everybody and we'll meet and drink and read...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-24-2013, 12:40 AM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,969
Posted By circular.parade
if you're anything like me, you'll leave, find a...

if you're anything like me, you'll leave, find a great place, and wake up three years later thinking the exact same ;)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-21-2013, 10:45 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 498
Posted By circular.parade
yeah well every single line for me resonates so...

yeah well every single line for me resonates so much. except the ending couplet. I can still take this for what it is and enjoy the shit out of it and thank you for sharing. as far as the piece...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-18-2013, 10:14 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 498
Posted By circular.parade
this

this
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-18-2013, 07:51 AM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,969
Posted By circular.parade
you're drunk. or getting older

you're drunk.


or getting older
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-07-2013, 07:23 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 364
Posted By circular.parade
for me it's countenance too. it kind of clashes...

for me it's countenance too. it kind of clashes phonetically. maybe hint of it before the ending, a half-rhyme or just something that shares it's qualities.

I've been reading here again for a few...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-05-2013, 06:02 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 213
Posted By circular.parade
very nice little piece of prose you have here....

very nice little piece of prose you have here. length was spot on I thought. I liked it.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-05-2013, 02:32 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 653
Posted By circular.parade
sure, why not? nice little piece.

sure, why not? nice little piece.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-05-2013, 02:30 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 364
Posted By circular.parade
ehhh I really liked this. the full circle seems...

ehhh I really liked this. the full circle seems like it could be just a little more effective, but definitely works as is. the last 3 lines not being in the same stanza kind of bothered me visually....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2013, 06:41 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 194
Posted By circular.parade
cheers

cheers
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-30-2013, 02:50 PM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,969
Posted By circular.parade
if only I'd written something for half the times...

if only I'd written something for half the times I got drunk since... i'll try and get to it today. how's the tour going jimmy
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-02-2013, 06:09 PM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,969
Posted By circular.parade
what magazine dylan? any chance to see what...

what magazine dylan? any chance to see what you've been doing, website?

jimmy, hope the tour's amazing. No YT date? oh well. will give you guys a listen, do sing/write?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-15-2013, 05:26 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 763
Posted By circular.parade
sigh. thanks for this. all the best, man.

sigh. thanks for this. all the best, man.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 10-15-2013, 03:33 AM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,226
Posted By circular.parade
yo, sure

yo, sure
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-09-2013, 12:56 AM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,969
Posted By circular.parade
hahaha that's almost 6 years ago man. crazy...

hahaha that's almost 6 years ago man. crazy stuff.

... I like to party.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-06-2013, 06:01 PM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 74,969
Posted By circular.parade
you have no idea how this place helped me get an...

you have no idea how this place helped me get an actual grasp of the English language. I could argue that I learned more on here than all my classes combined, ESL to a couple semesters in an English...
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