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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-24-2014, 03:39 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 549
Posted By Jordan89R
it means - lyrics done by one person (frontman)...

it means - lyrics done by one person (frontman) & music is a collaborative effort (i.e. the entire band)..
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-24-2014, 10:52 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 328
Posted By Jordan89R
a deeper shallow

The catchiest shit you ever heard bringing
Collective consciousness to a halt
Post-halt addition
Vibrates off a drum and echoes into forever
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-05-2014, 09:11 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 274
Posted By Jordan89R
I kinda wrote this out quick without really...

I kinda wrote this out quick without really reading it back. Upon doing so I can't believe how much I dislike the 2nd & 3rd stanza. But I feel the second half is pretty decent.

@thetinysurvivor...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-30-2014, 03:51 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 274
Posted By Jordan89R
short and not sweet

countless times throughout the day
it aches in my bones
from all my own stones that I've thrown

so I say I ****ed up now
counting the seconds of my minute
hour by hour

the curtain just fell to the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques 03-08-2013, 09:19 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 662
Posted By Jordan89R
I would say keep it real. Do what comes natural...

I would say keep it real. Do what comes natural to you. I wouldn't try and imitate another writer or artist, because I feel you're then funneling your ideas through a narrow tunnel. That doesn't mean...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-08-2013, 09:11 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 788
Posted By Jordan89R
I enjoyed reading this. Word choice is great in...

I enjoyed reading this. Word choice is great in my opinion, and it really gives off a cool vibe. May I ask what you were envisioning when you wrote this? Or where the inspiration came from? Thanks.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-08-2013, 09:03 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 441
Posted By Jordan89R
Thank you, sir. I appreciate the kind words. I...

Thank you, sir. I appreciate the kind words. I will try and return the favor by visiting that link in your sig and posting a reply.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-02-2013, 07:29 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 441
Posted By Jordan89R
repet it if

Thousands of people
Pile in
Making their way, taken their way

You're so smart, it kills me
I'm excited by the bustle
And dangerous tides

Highways lead to cities
Guided by headlights
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-06-2013, 05:14 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 544
Posted By Jordan89R
If you are asking random strangers whether or not...

If you are asking random strangers whether or not they think you should give this to her, then I think you are pretty uncertain yourself. I obviously don't know your relationship, or "situation", at...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-06-2013, 04:57 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 143
Posted By Jordan89R
The latter

An imaginary line
A vision of division
Two polar opposites that are separate but equal

How you defined it
Makes me think of
What you think of me

Watery Eyes
Sneezing incessantly
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-13-2011, 12:27 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,551
Posted By Jordan89R
#2 and #3 really grab me. Both sound beautiful...

#2 and #3 really grab me. Both sound beautiful and look gracious, in my mind anyway.

#1 isn't really my cup 'o tea, but different nonetheless.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-11-2011, 02:38 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 257
Posted By Jordan89R
Thanks guys. I'd have to agree, there are parts...

Thanks guys. I'd have to agree, there are parts (such as 1st stanza) that don't make sense/hard to understand, unless you're me. I don't mind that style really, because it allows the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-11-2011, 08:18 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 328
Posted By Jordan89R
I like what you are trying to say here. And that...

I like what you are trying to say here. And that very last line, that is something special.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-10-2011, 01:22 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 261
Posted By Jordan89R
Is it just me or do those "you'll"s...

Is it just me or do those "you'll"s make no sense?

P.S. can someone give me at least 1 single post on my recent lyrical addition to this forum? ...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-09-2011, 01:08 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 257
Posted By Jordan89R
Day Out/Night In

tents and halls
ridden with plastic
fiddling with matches
wiping the mirror
and making it clear
bells and whistles
birds and crickets
dark hate alleys
with some funny business
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-26-2011, 04:03 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 166
Posted By Jordan89R
I don't know dude. If I'm being honest I didn't...

I don't know dude. If I'm being honest I didn't enjoy it. But hell if I was your age I'd probably be writing the same song. I'd read some other people's work on here if I were you. It might...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-25-2011, 01:27 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 123
Posted By Jordan89R
If I gave a..

All of the evils in this city couldn't keep me dry. I got soaked, tossed my cookies, but god damn did I learn. From here to there, a 10 mile drive to Hollywood. Taking it and drowning in a past...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-08-2011, 01:26 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 292
Posted By Jordan89R
An Old Magazine

Yeah, you've got a lot of ways
To get your point across
I've heard it before
You got your point across

Success and old fashions
I'm bringing what's left back
The old days wore out
Smoked and sold
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-06-2011, 03:21 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 214
Posted By Jordan89R
This piece is supposed to feel lazy and more...

This piece is supposed to feel lazy and more minimal than a normal one.

trueamerican, my simple answer is this:

They are supposed to connect. Maybe this isn't as visible as I'd have hoped. Yes,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-06-2011, 02:55 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 241
Posted By Jordan89R
Overall, I liked it. There's some sort of weird...

Overall, I liked it. There's some sort of weird sense of security in knowing the outcome, even when dreams are at stake, and your controlled outcome is shit (compared to the possibilities).
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-06-2011, 04:52 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 214
Posted By Jordan89R
A lazy day - how I perceived it anyway

Mysteries go best unsolved
So I walk out without a word
No hint at what I'm thinking
Words escape me when I'm lazy
And today I'm spending in bed
Give you something to think about
And me an empty head
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-28-2011, 01:21 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 138
Posted By Jordan89R
The latter

An imaginary line
A vision of division
Two polar opposites that are separate but equal

How you defined it
Makes me think of
What you think of me

Watery eyes
Sneezing incessantly
Forum: The Pit 08-29-2010, 02:07 AM
Replies: 59
Views: 1,304
Posted By Jordan89R
Haha nailed it!!!!

Haha nailed it!!!!
Forum: The Pit 07-19-2010, 05:04 PM
Replies: 204
Views: 3,291
Posted By Jordan89R
I voted for Chelsea Harkey. Is that right? If...

I voted for Chelsea Harkey. Is that right?

If it is, she looks like a really genuine and nice person and I wish her the best of luck.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-18-2010, 12:11 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 271
Posted By Jordan89R
For me, it started off a little weird. First...

For me, it started off a little weird. First couple lines rhyme and then this shows up -

When his wife was still beautiful, his dog still faithful, and his kids weren't such little shits.


The...
Forum: The Pit 07-16-2010, 10:07 PM
Replies: 57
Views: 1,095
Posted By Jordan89R
It depends on a ton of factors. Sometimes really...

It depends on a ton of factors. Sometimes really fast, other times really slow. Urinary retention from drug use makes it take a WHILE sometimes.
Forum: The Pit 07-16-2010, 03:43 PM
Replies: 80
Views: 1,421
Posted By Jordan89R
If you have to ask this question then yes, it...

If you have to ask this question then yes, it probably is.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-16-2010, 04:19 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 348
Posted By Jordan89R
I lay awake, Awaiting my dreamless sleep In my...

I lay awake,
Awaiting my dreamless sleep
In my head, some hope to keep.
My thoughts progress
As they usually do.
A constant reminder,
That what you said, was true.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-16-2010, 03:47 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 187
Posted By Jordan89R
Not much to say. I know you said in 6 simple...

Not much to say. I know you said in 6 simple lines the emotion was conveyed but I'd have to disagree. For me it is short and doesn't give too much. Maybe someone has something better for you.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-15-2010, 02:04 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 188
Posted By Jordan89R
It's Habit

It's Habit

I couldn't mention the time
The night had that feeling
"It's been getting late these last few hours"
Even if we got old, it wouldn't
We promised many months before
I remember the...
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