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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-10-2014, 11:06 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 337
Posted By mr.retard
i enjoyed this. especially the ending. as i was...

i enjoyed this. especially the ending. as i was reading i kept thinking this is well written but what's the point. then i read the last two lines and it all made since. not sure how important a title...
Forum: The Pit 07-04-2014, 10:57 PM
Replies: 91
Views: 2,144
Posted By mr.retard
yes. i read the majority of that thread.

yes. i read the majority of that thread.
Forum: The Pit 07-04-2014, 10:34 PM
Replies: 91
Views: 2,144
Posted By mr.retard
...

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=360040
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-23-2014, 02:35 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 195
Posted By mr.retard
Is There A Way To Stop Thinking

Is there a way to stop thinking
that is somewhat constructive?
Only when I'm unconscious
is when I'm not forced to think.
Even when I ejaculate
I think about the things,
The things I don't wanna...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-23-2014, 02:15 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 358
Posted By mr.retard
i would feel good about this. why did you trying...

i would feel good about this.

why did you trying to limit yourself to four lines?

the sense of alienation was captured very well.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-19-2014, 01:45 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 358
Posted By mr.retard
i think i like this.

i think i like this.
Forum: Bass Guitar 06-10-2014, 02:55 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 207
Posted By mr.retard
thanks you guys. i'll probably go with a combo...

thanks you guys. i'll probably go with a combo because i will have access to a good pa system and will be playing at small venues. thanks
Forum: Bass Guitar 06-07-2014, 08:29 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 207
Posted By mr.retard
another bass amp thread

i bought a stingray and i need to get a decent amp because it's such a nice bass that it's deserves a good amp. i was going to get the amp that day but i was too overwhelmed with all the heads and...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-05-2014, 09:22 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 254
Posted By mr.retard
i didn't get to see the first version but i like...

i didn't get to see the first version but i like this version.

the metaphor may be a little obvious like hippieboy said but it takes a nice unexpected turn with the whole digging it up and throwing...
Forum: The Pit 05-25-2014, 08:50 PM
Replies: 29,794
Views: 253,537
Posted By mr.retard
i'm the same. i'm like this is so stupid why do...

i'm the same. i'm like this is so stupid why do people likes this. then something pretty funny shows up and i laugh.
Forum: The Pit 05-25-2014, 08:48 PM
Replies: 29,794
Views: 253,537
Posted By mr.retard
:haha: i just started listening to nofx

:haha: i just started listening to nofx
Forum: The Pit 05-25-2014, 08:32 PM
Replies: 29,794
Views: 253,537
Posted By mr.retard
would you guys look down on me if i wrote a...

would you guys look down on me if i wrote a fictitious song about a guy who has to dump his girlfriend because she rarely wipes and when she does she wipes back to front?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-21-2014, 05:02 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 230
Posted By mr.retard
i too really like this piece. thanks for sharing.

i too really like this piece. thanks for sharing.
Forum: The Pit 04-21-2014, 04:54 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 257
Posted By mr.retard
i think a survey thread is a good idea.

i think a survey thread is a good idea.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-16-2014, 04:31 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 209
Posted By mr.retard
thanks so much for the helpful critique. i was...

thanks so much for the helpful critique.

i was definitely trying to do the semi spoken thing and i'll take your advice on slowing it down.

since you prefer "result" then i'll keep it.

i'm...
Forum: Pop Punk & Emo 04-14-2014, 08:41 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 264
Posted By mr.retard
i just started getting into this band.

i just started getting into this band.
Forum: The Pit 04-14-2014, 08:38 AM
Replies: 58
Views: 1,009
Posted By mr.retard
the horn on my car doesn't work so never.

the horn on my car doesn't work so never.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-14-2014, 08:33 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 209
Posted By mr.retard
The Placebo Effect

I don't care if these pills are placebos
as long as I get the desired result.
And I don't care is she doesn't give a shit
about me as long as she keeps pretending
then I get the desired...
Forum: The Pit 04-09-2014, 07:53 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 421
Posted By mr.retard
this

this
Forum: The Pit 04-08-2014, 08:23 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 421
Posted By mr.retard
it says it's closed

it says it's closed
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-08-2014, 04:43 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 275
Posted By mr.retard
this is a little too cliche for me. the love is a...

this is a little too cliche for me. the love is a battle metaphor has been done many times before.

that being said there are some good lines in here and the metaphor does help make your point clear.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-07-2014, 12:10 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 321
Posted By mr.retard
i like this piece. is it a song or a poem? i...

i like this piece. is it a song or a poem?

i like how it takes (what i think is) an unexpected turn after line 6. it starts off with optimism but it quickly vanishes.

my only critiques is the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-07-2014, 11:59 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 214
Posted By mr.retard
but at least I'm not like fat mike telling you who not to vote for

have a listen (https://soundcloud.com/stream)

most of the time
i am able
to separate
writing music
and listening to their music
it's like apples and oranges
but there are times when i compare
and...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-29-2014, 01:49 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 211
Posted By mr.retard
good stuff. in particular the first and second...

good stuff. in particular the first and second stanza. i like the "bouncing around" line a lot for some reason.

in the first stanza is the "an" supposed to be a "and".

thanks for sharing.

i know...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-24-2014, 09:51 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 322
Posted By mr.retard
i like this piece. is it a song or poem? the...

i like this piece. is it a song or poem? the structure seems a little weird but that's probably just me. the second stanza is a lot longer than the rest. that's not a bad thing just an observation....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-18-2014, 11:20 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 389
Posted By mr.retard
i'm guessing this was inspired by a movie or tv...

i'm guessing this was inspired by a movie or tv show or something.

anyway i really liked this piece.
Forum: The Pit 03-18-2014, 10:28 AM
Replies: 116
Views: 3,318
Posted By mr.retard
i'm 25 year old virgin who's never kissed a girl,...

i'm 25 year old virgin who's never kissed a girl, gone on a date, and i don't see things changing any time soon.

hopefully that makes you feel better.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-17-2014, 03:19 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 227
Posted By mr.retard
sounds like you got a good punk song. any chance...

sounds like you got a good punk song. any chance i could hear it?
Forum: The Pit 03-16-2014, 10:49 PM
Replies: 2,772
Views: 30,372
Posted By mr.retard
being a packers fan should i be glad about...

being a packers fan should i be glad about signing peppers
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-16-2014, 10:33 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 227
Posted By mr.retard
"This was the song I didn't want to write for a year or so. I guess I was in denial..

"This is the song I didn't want to write for a year or so. I guess I was in denial and didn't want to admit it."

Have a listen....
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