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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-03-2010, 05:03 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 293
Posted By ottoavist
when the classic makes you.

when the classic makes you.

pirouette, battle-axe.
stomping floors, a
popping-empty
bottle-medley;
broken-glass-acoustic-
set.
she's like
GOD IM SO USED TO IT
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-02-2010, 12:09 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 529
Posted By ottoavist
man, i was impressed. not to the point where i...

man, i was impressed. not to the point where i wanted to read it over and over again, but it's always interesting to see the perspective and creativity that routine can beat out of a person.

the...
Forum: The Pit 12-30-2009, 08:30 AM
Replies: 37,092
Views: 461,855
Posted By ottoavist
you are correct in this opinion, sir.

you are correct in this opinion, sir.
Forum: The Pit 12-30-2009, 08:23 AM
Replies: 37,092
Views: 461,855
Posted By ottoavist
loved the go-go until i realized that meth is...

loved the go-go until i realized that meth is much bigger than me or anyone else.

freebased the medicine squeezed out of a morphine-patch the other day on some aluminum foil. was one of the best...
Forum: The Pit 12-30-2009, 08:14 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,529
Posted By ottoavist
can't. stop. lauging.

can't.
stop.
lauging.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-30-2009, 07:39 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 911
Posted By ottoavist
thank you guys so much for having a look at this....

thank you guys so much for having a look at this. at this point in the infancy, i believe this will be the 'oddball' of the series. Saul's character however, will remain a constant till the end. ...
Forum: The Pit 12-30-2009, 05:51 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 274
Posted By ottoavist
my life experiences drive my pen to fruition, as...

my life experiences drive my pen to fruition, as far as i can tell.

here, you be the judge: http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1252729
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-30-2009, 04:00 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 366
Posted By ottoavist
at the risk of conducting an echo, my perspective...

at the risk of conducting an echo, my perspective is drenched with a sense of incompletion. what great descriptions you have here, and also the 'would/could'-be impact is in clear sight. what a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-30-2009, 03:48 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 619
Posted By ottoavist
when i started reading i lost interest halfway...

when i started reading i lost interest halfway through the first stanza so i went straight to the second and picked up there; understanding now that the first actually preludes the second, and it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-30-2009, 03:38 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 433
Posted By ottoavist
these are my only qualms, friend. you've matured...

these are my only qualms, friend. you've matured so incredibly well Dan, compared to when you first began posting here. really, really good job.

if you find the timey, could you have a look-see at...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-29-2009, 06:10 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 911
Posted By ottoavist
WotW - filter-dope Saulm.

filter-dope Saulm.
i'm beginning something of a series of these; this is the prototype lol.

caressed his bottom lip with
the cigar not lit, yet.
a mission is in store, in loveless
cooperation...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-07-2009, 02:09 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 734
Posted By ottoavist
thank you all for your insight on this. i've...

thank you all for your insight on this. i've written a lot lately but haven't really had the means to share it on here. hopefully i can return as given. :cheers:

Goldfish, it's about a man having...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-06-2009, 02:36 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 734
Posted By ottoavist
WoTW - distance.

distance.

so
enormous;
like genre disposition and
hobo smiles,
the veiling mists of the divide seem to
purge its ghosts at me, relentlessly
but hey
restless hearts were never
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-03-2009, 04:49 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 240
Posted By ottoavist
bookmarked.

bookmarked.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-09-2009, 11:19 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 325
Posted By ottoavist
this one's a keeper, Mel. :heart: you have such...

this one's a keeper, Mel. :heart:
you have such beautiful perspective.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-09-2009, 11:04 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 189
Posted By ottoavist
tract.

tract.

"so uh...you nervous or what?"

nah i've done it a million times.

"man i just want a job, you know?
haha, i guess times really are gettin' pretty rough."

yep.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-08-2009, 02:29 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 410
Posted By ottoavist
this idea is so wore out. i mean, the subject...

this idea is so wore out.
i mean, the subject itself is wonderful to tamper with - but i think you finalized with a product i've seen too many times to pull any sort of praise from a writer's...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-27-2009, 03:49 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 804
Posted By ottoavist
not everything revolves around technique. and...

not everything revolves around technique.

and lazy? lol, ok.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-26-2009, 09:42 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 390
Posted By ottoavist
no Fred, thank you for reading.

no Fred, thank you for reading.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-24-2009, 12:39 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 390
Posted By ottoavist
thanks so much guys, it means alot. :cheers:

thanks so much guys, it means alot.
:cheers:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-24-2009, 04:29 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 501
Posted By ottoavist
i'm going to jump the gun here and say this would...

i'm going to jump the gun here and say this would probably round out really nice if you posted part 2 along with this and combined them into one.
a series is definitely supposed to leave the reader...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-24-2009, 04:22 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 386
Posted By ottoavist
the immense detail that begins about halfway...

the immense detail that begins about halfway through stanza 1 and lasts till the end, is so easy on the eyes. ;)


matter of fact, this little bit here - is probably one of the best things i've read...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-24-2009, 04:09 AM
Replies: 8,016
Views: 129,943
Posted By ottoavist
well right off the bat i noticed this one -...

well right off the bat i noticed this one - http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1168199
looks like this user might be newer to the forum also, which is cool.
it's nice to see fresh...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-24-2009, 03:57 AM
Replies: 8,016
Views: 129,943
Posted By ottoavist
3:55 a.m. where i live right now. i think i've...

3:55 a.m. where i live right now.
i think i've read every piece on this forum for like, 3 pages and counting.

there are some really, really good writers here that i'd never noticed before.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-24-2009, 03:08 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 464
Posted By ottoavist
took the words right out of my mouth. i don't...

took the words right out of my mouth.
i don't comment too often on your stuff, if i ever have at all - but i'm always reading you.

also Chris(we have sound) has a point. it reads so much better...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-24-2009, 12:37 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 390
Posted By ottoavist
this reminds you of Three Days Grace? :(

this reminds you of Three Days Grace?
:(
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-24-2009, 12:29 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 390
Posted By ottoavist
the disease.

the disease.

sometimes too many days
pass by when
i don't remember
why i can't hold a steady hand

and then i try to dig deep
to feel the control
that used to be.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-23-2009, 11:29 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 652
Posted By ottoavist
wow this hit home. like, really. when it's good,...

wow this hit home.
like, really.

when it's good, it's soo good.
a person that's never been in love would have a hard time relating to this.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-23-2009, 08:41 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,277
Posted By ottoavist
lol, i think you've deserved this for...

lol, i think you've deserved this for awhile.
congratulations buddy.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-22-2009, 01:58 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 519
Posted By ottoavist
oh i'm positive you're aware of what i think of...

oh i'm positive you're aware of what i think of it.

what beautiful writing.
:heart:
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