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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-28-2014, 04:30 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 264
Posted By freshtunes
WotW: as of now

sitting naked,
in a sturgis office chair,
with a single fan,
and a used Chinese take-out
terriyaki stick,
scraping
a one hitter into a five-gallon
utility bucket
on jefferson
ave,
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-13-2014, 07:04 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 201
Posted By freshtunes
buzz

to a fly,
a buzz seems
so innocent and natural;
and i say for me too.
to a fly,
a buzz keeps it afloat
and moving
despite unrest;
i say for me too.
to a fly,
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-12-2014, 05:25 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 252
Posted By freshtunes
Untitled

An old, sun-bleached science project
sits in a glass case at the top of the stairs.
Beside a window,
it catches relentless daylight
that turns the paper-mache herring gulls
a color resembling...
Forum: The Pit 02-12-2014, 05:22 PM
Replies: 106
Views: 2,517
Posted By freshtunes
Accounting.

Accounting.
Forum: The Pit 08-26-2013, 09:09 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 275
Posted By freshtunes
How do I convince a professor to let me audit a course for free?

Here’s the deal…

I just graduated from a community college and have transferred to a state university for the fall semester. While I was completing my associates degree, the college I was attending...
Forum: The Pit 07-16-2013, 08:09 PM
Replies: 151
Views: 2,722
Posted By freshtunes
Put on some weight, cut that douchebag hair.

Put on some weight, cut that douchebag hair.
Forum: The Pit 07-16-2013, 08:03 PM
Replies: 151
Views: 2,722
Posted By freshtunes
Dress, a decent hairstyle (not just a buzz or a...

Dress, a decent hairstyle (not just a buzz or a clip, but some product), posture, facial hair, attitude, and a tan go a long way.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-01-2013, 11:23 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 311
Posted By freshtunes
god gave me a perfect day

god gave me my perfect day;
the one I had dreamt for years.
route 128 north, a sports car, and
a women for whom I cared.
sclafanis deli, and stage fort park.

half moon beach, not a cloud...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-20-2013, 06:26 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 274
Posted By freshtunes
untitled

some friends,
I try not to talk to much about
the future with.
they squirm
and change the subject to
another matter
with no matter.
the future is all
we have.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-29-2012, 01:11 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 815
Posted By freshtunes
Oh my god, I fuking loved this. Needs to be...

Oh my god, I fuking loved this. Needs to be published. Not sure where I stand on the absence of puncuation, though..... part of me thought it worked well, part of me was annoyed at times.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-29-2012, 01:08 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 809
Posted By freshtunes
There was nothing about this that I didn't like. ...

There was nothing about this that I didn't like. Except for the word uncouth. I do not believe it fits with the rest of the vocabulary used.

-Nick
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-29-2012, 12:53 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 265
Posted By freshtunes
no wine for us.

affection takes the shape
of rows, vines, and grapes.
stretching above so warm.
footsteps of migrant men
left with a blanket
like the ring a bottle
prints in the dirt
before we decide to empty...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-01-2012, 12:19 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 248
Posted By freshtunes
for public pain and anguish

violence did not come to exist
through man or a bullet,
but from the scent of a woman.
antagonizing and frequent.

like martyrs on a bus in jerusalem.
the world expects us to get use to them.

but...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-27-2012, 02:45 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 630
Posted By freshtunes
This is the first piece in over two years I have...

This is the first piece in over two years I have read on here that I truly connected with. I strongly suggest adding some punctuation, even if it is minimal and basic at best.

"subtracted slits...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-27-2012, 01:35 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 469
Posted By freshtunes
WotW - for hate.

the imperfect
bones, muscles, and smile
attached to your neck
die off like an alcoholics
grand ideas of -if.
and the feelings are stiff
uncomfortable to me,
whipped and lashed
in a car...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-26-2012, 09:27 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 311
Posted By freshtunes
Good call, thanks to both! Any links?

Good call, thanks to both! Any links?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-26-2012, 01:24 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 247
Posted By freshtunes
Absolutely brilliant. Bravo. You know the...

Absolutely brilliant. Bravo. You know the sounds of the mouth very well my friend.

I hope you don't mind if I whisper this in some bar fly's ear.

"i’d tickle a giggle out of you and ask
for...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-26-2012, 01:19 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 311
Posted By freshtunes
that thing you did that no one will ever know about

i remember the first lock
on my bedroom door
and the liberty it brought.

we all have friends
with whom we are
emotionally intimate

and-or partners
who let us push
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-26-2012, 12:54 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 257
Posted By freshtunes
Haha aren't we all greedy bitter bastards? Loved...

Haha aren't we all greedy bitter bastards?

Loved it.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-26-2012, 12:51 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 847
Posted By freshtunes
Maybe I missed it...

Maybe I missed it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-23-2012, 12:09 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 411
Posted By freshtunes
Damn straight. I intimately cuddle with my...

Damn straight. I intimately cuddle with my pillow to.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-16-2012, 04:22 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 492
Posted By freshtunes
Thank you for all the wonderful replies. Its...

Thank you for all the wonderful replies. Its really a blessing to be a part of a writing community that has been running strong for quite a number of years now.

The word cun*t was used not to...
Forum: Original Recordings 06-16-2012, 09:03 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 223
Posted By freshtunes
I really like this. The jam drops out of...

I really like this. The jam drops out of time/beat here and there, but that is easy to tighten up with some more practice. A lot of good movement between sections, and melody. Consider finding a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-13-2012, 03:40 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 382
Posted By freshtunes
I agree with our in- house revolutionary. Love...

I agree with our in- house revolutionary. Love the last line, though, you break it off just right.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-10-2012, 10:03 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 492
Posted By freshtunes
WotW - sky lantern

your smile rises like a chinese lantern
soaring in the july cape ann dusk,
which begins to
turn the yawns of
saturday skippers
lurking on the indian lake
into a confrontation with
capabilities...
Forum: The Pit 05-28-2012, 11:47 PM
Replies: 16,550
Views: 350,521
Posted By freshtunes
Haha, your right. Other ideas?

Haha, your right. Other ideas?
Forum: The Pit 05-28-2012, 11:32 PM
Replies: 16,550
Views: 350,521
Posted By freshtunes
So I was in a literature class with this chick at...

So I was in a literature class with this chick at my community college. Gorgeous, hot skinny italian chick Jacqui. She would sit directly in front of me in a lecture hall built for 30, but with...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-26-2012, 02:19 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 274
Posted By freshtunes
common prostitute.

I’d never fight a man for a woman
No woman’s worth a damn.
When we let them know
Just how much we crave them
Their price goes up, and quantity goes down.
Now they know they're rare.
So lets...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-15-2012, 08:45 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 341
Posted By freshtunes
Damn straight. "It'll always wait with...

Damn straight.

"It'll always wait with you, no options, until
you're the one with your hand on the switch,
living vicariously through your own until you give it a name"

"You though of yourself...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-15-2012, 08:19 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 209
Posted By freshtunes
/ˈvī(ə)ləns

Oh the bruises,
Skin colored strong.
I am injured thin
To this naked marrow,
Her pheremones
Landing on my toungue.
Provoking primal thoughts
To which I can not say
Farewell for long.
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