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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-30-2013, 09:10 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 146
Posted By trackmind
4:50am (ots)

we wore nothing on our sleeves
but the daydreams of the production line.
absurdity
like a drunken nightmare.
sorry,
thatís a hungover nightmare.

anyways,
i stepped out in the streets
in the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-13-2013, 06:20 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 203
Posted By trackmind
how could they? (ots)

ironic, yes.

--------

here i am,
doing nothing
but reciting myself in a thousand years.
houses and homes.
blouses and bones.
semen.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-10-2013, 06:59 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 192
Posted By trackmind
terracotta

you know,
i donít spend entire nights anymore
missing her relentless smile
or her igneous eyes.

(i used to staple my fingers
to her terracotta hair,
wishing for some sort of blood to...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-08-2013, 06:50 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 400
Posted By trackmind
i kinda feel like anything i could possibly say...

i kinda feel like anything i could possibly say about this would be redundant.

that being said, i loved this.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-07-2013, 09:41 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 220
Posted By trackmind
last thoughts on the ravines

this is
my last blue view
tritely projected
across salt crystals and vapid skies.
up on the ravines
smiling outwards,
into that mirror that stretched for miles
and curved but never really...
Forum: Alternative & Indie 11-15-2012, 08:51 PM
Replies: 5,600
Views: 81,650
Posted By trackmind
1. I'm not saying that they aren't relatively...

1. I'm not saying that they aren't relatively educated or knowledgeable. That is fully possible. What I am saying, and I'm relatively confident about this, is that if these people had a basic...
Forum: Alternative & Indie 11-15-2012, 12:28 PM
Replies: 5,600
Views: 81,650
Posted By trackmind
America needs to worry more about its (rapidly...

America needs to worry more about its (rapidly growing) uneducated, ultra-christian, right-wing part of the population, and less about remote Islamism.
Forum: Alternative & Indie 11-13-2012, 09:59 AM
Replies: 102
Views: 3,352
Posted By trackmind
Bump... Is anyone as bored with the new album as...

Bump...

Is anyone as bored with the new album as I am? Oh my god, sounds like a hibernated 70's prog rock album. I love their earlier stuff (Yellow House and Horn Of Plenty especially), but this was...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-30-2012, 05:59 PM
Replies: 0
you
Views: 135
Posted By trackmind
you

here i lay in this hell
that Iíve constructed from textile ceilings
and alcohol.
constructed
from your tears,
displayed through glass
that you once wore with the beauty
of your smile and petty...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-27-2012, 09:52 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 198
Posted By trackmind
The 'smurf' lines are sort of supposed to sound...

The 'smurf' lines are sort of supposed to sound out of place. I personally find them humorous and I don't really see why comedy and loneliness can't coexist.

And concerning the short line breaks......
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-26-2012, 05:02 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 198
Posted By trackmind
Spoke

(itís kind of like
riding an elevator
that never stops
that just keeps descending
now matter how frantically you press
the stop button).

last time i saw you
you were happy
almost unusually
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-24-2012, 06:37 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 241
Posted By trackmind
This Is Not Me, Or: 0101010101

Watching a blank computer screen
is like staring into your heart,
cause silver strings
decorate my hell.

My eyes
will ****ing liquidate
and drip
into this reality.
and every 0
Forum: Alternative & Indie 08-22-2012, 07:00 PM
Replies: 5,600
Views: 81,650
Posted By trackmind
I was about to write that if there is such a...

I was about to write that if there is such a thing as indie pleb, then that list is the very epitome of that. Then I realized how stupid that would have sounded.

Then again...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-29-2012, 09:39 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 183
Posted By trackmind
Your Months

I was contemplating my dreams,
falsely clenching my thirst
and I missed their lives to death.
Landlocked in my aging and finance.

You drenched me in alcohol,
and then sent me home
to nothing but
a...
Forum: Alternative & Indie 06-26-2012, 04:30 PM
Replies: 1,023
Views: 34,674
Posted By trackmind
Just listened to This Is A Long Drive for the...

Just listened to This Is A Long Drive for the first time in my life. Can't believe I've been missing out on all this brilliance while at the same time complaining about my music library for months....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 06-24-2012, 11:55 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 171
Posted By trackmind
Untitled

I bathed in the sweat of our youth,
Splashing it into the clouds,
Into diamonds on the plantations.
And now left with the bitter aftertaste
Of what remains, dried on our skin.
Forum: Alternative & Indie 06-14-2012, 03:45 PM
Replies: 262
Views: 20,196
Posted By trackmind
I just think the Smiths are a lot more...

I just think the Smiths are a lot more historically and politically direct than people normally give them credit for. Especially the Meat Is Murder album. And Heaven Knows I'm Miserable Now is really...
Forum: Alternative & Indie 06-14-2012, 10:14 AM
Replies: 262
Views: 20,196
Posted By trackmind
We obviously disagree. I mean, I'm sure you can...

We obviously disagree. I mean, I'm sure you can appreciate it. Just not on the same level as someone who grew up in the same city and lived during the Smiths' existence, who walked the same streets...
Forum: Alternative & Indie 06-13-2012, 05:46 PM
Replies: 262
Views: 20,196
Posted By trackmind
Disagreed. I don't really think the requirement...

Disagreed. I don't really think the requirement for an understanding of the context counteracts the potential of having a huge following.

I mean, sure, there's the universal themes of teenage angst,...
Forum: Alternative & Indie 05-29-2012, 03:56 PM
Replies: 262
Views: 20,196
Posted By trackmind
The Smiths are brilliant. Just everything about...

The Smiths are brilliant. Just everything about them. Except for Meat is Murder, which is a pretty juvenile song, to be honest.

I think you have to understand the context of The Smiths to truly...
Forum: Alternative & Indie 05-29-2012, 08:37 AM
Replies: 5,600
Views: 81,650
Posted By trackmind
So much happened, and all of it was so profound....

So much happened, and all of it was so profound. Joan's sequence of events was tragedy at its best.
Forum: Alternative & Indie 05-28-2012, 02:12 PM
Replies: 5,600
Views: 81,650
Posted By trackmind
Did any of you guys watch the latest Mad Men...

Did any of you guys watch the latest Mad Men episode?

Hoooly shit.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-14-2012, 06:02 PM
Replies: 1,892
Views: 60,782
Posted By trackmind
Personally, no. I barely tell my best friends...

Personally, no. I barely tell my best friends about my poems and short stories. But that's always been a result of not being comfortable enough with my writing more than anything else. In a way I do...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-14-2012, 04:35 PM
Replies: 1,892
Views: 60,782
Posted By trackmind
Does artistry automatically equal pretension,...

Does artistry automatically equal pretension, though? Seems kind of cynical. Although I totally get what you're getting at.

And hello.
Forum: Alternative & Indie 05-14-2012, 03:47 PM
Replies: 5,600
Views: 81,650
Posted By trackmind
Landscapes are great and all, but I get bored...

Landscapes are great and all, but I get bored very easily. Just give me a great city, and I'm happy. I love directionless road trips with friends, though.
Forum: Alternative & Indie 05-13-2012, 05:00 PM
Replies: 5,600
Views: 81,650
Posted By trackmind
Man, you guys gotta get out of your own little...

Man, you guys gotta get out of your own little bubble. I don't wanna hate on your lifestyle or whatever, because it's probably easier for me to travel to foreign countries, considering I'm European...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-13-2012, 08:38 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 262
Posted By trackmind
It's hard growing up and realizing that...

It's hard growing up and realizing that everything wasn't perfect when you were a kid, the people around you just tried to give you that impression. And now, all we're left with is harsh truths; a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-13-2012, 08:10 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 291
Posted By trackmind
Soon

And like a little rock
you sit there,
small and insignificant,
brought down by the force of gravity,
and your relentless nihilism.
Saying weíre all lost,
especially me
because I believe in...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-07-2012, 04:29 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 289
Posted By trackmind
I agree on everything, really. I need to work on...

I agree on everything, really. I need to work on my last stanzas in general. I was happy you mentioned those lines in the first stanza. Quite happy about that myself, to be honest.

Thanks!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 05-04-2012, 04:08 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 289
Posted By trackmind
Rimbaud

The streetlight casts a body-like shadow of death
In the seventh sunrise
As I stumble home,
Again,
In a pas de un
Asking myself how long I will write about you,
Instead of to you.
And then after a...
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