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Forum: Original Recordings 05-24-2014, 06:37 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 443
Posted By JP50
Guitars are waaaaaay too muddy, grainy and bassy....

Guitars are waaaaaay too muddy, grainy and bassy. Drums sound cool though! They fit in nicely. I'm not a fan of growled vocals, the clean singing was quite good but needs work, it's a bit out of tune...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-24-2014, 12:07 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 424
Posted By JP50
Thanks for your review! Well, I agree with...

Thanks for your review!

Well, I agree with Kyleisthename on many things. I listened to it MANY times and I couldn't figure out much of the structure around 4:30. I'm really into long instrumentals...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-22-2014, 09:37 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 431
Posted By JP50
I'd have liked to hear a fuller sound (with bass...

I'd have liked to hear a fuller sound (with bass or keyboards) in the intro (it's quite long). I definitely liked the part where all instruments kick in. Not a fan of such a light vocal tone, but it...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-21-2014, 10:59 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 334
Posted By JP50
Idea for the chorus of a song (C4C)

Hi! I'm a guitarist/composer who's learning to sing and this is a little thing I composed for my alternative metal band. According to my (music) college's bel canto teachers, I'm a bass; but in more...
Forum: Original Recordings 04-20-2014, 12:08 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 696
Posted By JP50
Db7 with F bass is 1st inversion, not 2nd. 1st...

Db7 with F bass is 1st inversion, not 2nd.
1st inv = 3rd in bass (F is the third of Db major)
2nd inv= 5th in bass
3rd inv= 7th in bass


To summarize, proggresion in that part is: Eb- Ddim7/F Ab7...
Forum: Original Recordings 04-19-2014, 07:56 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 696
Posted By JP50
I see I got the notes right! The thing is that...

I see I got the notes right! The thing is that you have a b5 between the third (bass) and the 7th of that Db 1st inversion, and being that section in a minor tonality it quite suggests an inversion...
Forum: Original Recordings 04-19-2014, 06:03 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 696
Posted By JP50
You say that the bVII does not go to VIIdim7?...

You say that the bVII does not go to VIIdim7? From what I heard, Ab7 goes to Db and then I hear a diminished 7th chord with an F bass (which is not the root, I reckon) that goes to Aaug. Could you...
Forum: Original Recordings 04-19-2014, 01:05 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 696
Posted By JP50
Thanks for your review! It's quite long so I'll...

Thanks for your review! It's quite long so I'll have to give it a couple of good listenings to tell you my overall feel about it. But so far I have one question: how did you work out the sixth chord...
Forum: Original Recordings 04-19-2014, 12:29 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 169
Posted By JP50
The Wish Granter - Instrumental Metal

Original instrumental metal track inspired by Shadow of Chernobyl's tale of the mythical Wish Granter.

Composition, drums/keyboards/bass programming and guitars by myself. Sorry for the not-so-good...
Forum: Original Recordings 07-10-2013, 11:14 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 268
Posted By JP50
Liked the sound quality and flow of the track...

Liked the sound quality and flow of the track overall. The low tuning gives those power chords a lot of punch. Liked the little dissonances played by the keyboards as well. Even though there are no...
Forum: Cover Songs 05-06-2013, 11:36 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 203
Posted By JP50
Oh, sorry! I pasted the link incorrectly :S Now...

Oh, sorry! I pasted the link incorrectly :S

Now it should be working!
Forum: Cover Songs 05-06-2013, 12:41 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 203
Posted By JP50
Breath (Breaking Benjamin Cover)

A little cover I recorded today. I'd appreciate some feedback on this, since I took up singing lessons a year ago and I would like to see how my progress is heard by others. Since Ben has a pretty...
Forum: Original Recordings 08-14-2012, 03:14 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 388
Posted By JP50
Be so kind as to read the first page of this...

Be so kind as to read the first page of this thread before you get banned for your silly bumping:

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=209010

Cheers
Forum: Original Recordings 08-10-2012, 10:31 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 1,213
Posted By JP50
Thanks for your review and your time,...

Thanks for your review and your time, Aaron!

Magnum Opus 44: As jmako said, the first seconds felt a bit awkward, but when the other instruments kick in, the feeling disappears immediately. Loved...
Forum: Original Recordings 08-06-2012, 10:25 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 797
Posted By JP50
Thnx for your review and your time! I really...

Thnx for your review and your time! I really appreciate feedback and constructive criticism :D.

Now, about your work:

Nice intro, liked the lydian sounding stuff at 0:24, quite dark chord voicing...
Forum: Original Recordings 08-02-2012, 08:45 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 264
Posted By JP50
Thnx a lot for your time & review, Martis!...

Thnx a lot for your time & review, Martis! Glad you liked the track! I'd recommend you to read 'The Shadow over Innsmouth' and 'The Shadow out of Time', both great stories :D

PS: I've just listened...
Forum: Original Recordings 08-01-2012, 06:04 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 264
Posted By JP50
You have no tracks in SC :\. I've paid a couple...

You have no tracks in SC :\.

I've paid a couple of listens to The Prism, though. You have some interesting sounds coming out there! But I must say that your distorted tone despite being clear and...
Forum: Original Recordings 07-31-2012, 10:13 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 156
Posted By JP50
I'm not too into making fun of the music of...

I'm not too into making fun of the music of anyone, to be honest. When I clicked your post, I thought it was something serious (I guess the forum's goal is to share our music), too bad I was...
Forum: Original Recordings 07-28-2012, 10:22 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 307
Posted By JP50
I agree with Aaron, perhaps starting at a lower...

I agree with Aaron, perhaps starting at a lower tempo could do the trick. I'd also correct a little offkey note in the keyboards at 0:25, it's a bit noticeable (only by listening I think it's a b9...
Forum: Original Recordings 07-26-2012, 03:04 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 327
Posted By JP50
Thnx for your crit! Sorry for taking so long to...

Thnx for your crit! Sorry for taking so long to answer. You unintentionally posted your crit in that post of yours I critiqued previously, that's why it did not appear here lol.

Anyway, I've...
Forum: Original Recordings 07-14-2012, 12:16 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 424
Posted By JP50
I loved the guitar sound, but above all, loved...

I loved the guitar sound, but above all, loved the dual vocal lines! It's something that deeply pleases me when listening to a sung piece. That IV- at 1:34 was a nice surprise, and together with the...
Forum: Original Recordings 07-14-2012, 12:03 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 327
Posted By JP50
Thank you a lot for your time and your review! I...

Thank you a lot for your time and your review! I really appreciate the feedback. Overall guitar sound quality will get a lot better when I save enough for a better guitar. I recorded this with a...
Forum: Original Recordings 07-13-2012, 08:01 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 327
Posted By JP50
Descent into Y'ha-nthlei (C4C)

Hi! This time I bring you a very long instrumental track I composed a month ago. It has been inspired by H. P. Lovecraft's "The Shadow over Innsmouth". I love how it came out and I can assure you...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-17-2012, 10:33 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 137
Posted By JP50
Guitar sounds good, but man you NEED to get some...

Guitar sounds good, but man you NEED to get some vocal coaching if you are thinking of becoming a singer (no offense intended AT ALL). Despite the vocal melody is somewhat intelligible, most of the...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-13-2012, 04:28 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,050
Posted By JP50
This kind of sound quality is a lot better than...

This kind of sound quality is a lot better than the one offered by many 'recording studios' here in my country! Congrats! Very tight playing and good overall flow.
The only negative aspect I found...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-06-2012, 12:16 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 805
Posted By JP50
Outstanding overall sound quality. I'm not much...

Outstanding overall sound quality. I'm not much into metalcore but coupled with some good lyrics and a badass growling singer it should become a worldclass song. A clean part of vocals could do...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-06-2012, 12:01 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 694
Posted By JP50
Awesome phrasing, great tone, very polished...

Awesome phrasing, great tone, very polished technique! Have you composed this solo, or is it improvised? Or maybe a mix of both? Hope you win that contest, you deserve to!

PS: you might want to...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-05-2012, 04:40 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 155
Posted By JP50
Nice phrasing, man! I was expecting more of a...

Nice phrasing, man! I was expecting more of a dominant blues to be honest, but this diatonic kind of blues is great, too! What I definitely liked the most was your phrasing, it FLOWS. It's something...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-03-2012, 06:58 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 340
Posted By JP50
Some Instrumental Music

Hi all! This is the first time I post here (I've visited UG hundreds of times, though, but never signed up :P). I'd like to share some of my musical work so far. Genres are various, but the...
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