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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-14-2005, 05:01 PM
Replies: 844
Views: 14,314
Posted By Efferri
selfless acts have consumed him hating himself...

selfless acts have consumed him
hating himself was part of the problem
he acted for others to escape himself
which ultimately left him limp
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-08-2005, 05:52 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 781
Posted By Efferri
Very impressive. The flow is amazing. Mebbe...

Very impressive. The flow is amazing. Mebbe take out the word 'The' in the chorus.
Forum: Recordings 12-08-2005, 02:16 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,100
Posted By Efferri
Mebbe its bad karma for being so insensistive...

Mebbe its bad karma for being so insensistive regarding the Late Pope John Paul (RIP)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-07-2005, 02:10 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,392
Posted By Efferri
Thumbs up As a poem, I think this is really well written. ...

As a poem, I think this is really well written. I like how you ventured out with the structure too. As a song, (in my opinion) I think it would be a little hard to follow. Unless you are the type...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-07-2005, 01:53 PM
Replies: 646
Views: 15,758
Posted By Efferri
I think WoTM to be an excellent motivation to...

I think WoTM to be an excellent motivation to keep writers writing. You only can get better through trial and error. Not only does it get them writing, but it gets them writing their BEST because...
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