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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Today, 01:57 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 43
Posted By 剣 斧 血
Warm Thought/Masochist

never-ending pain
pushing behind my eyes, covered in
life-giving tubes; needles
clawing at me while I'm held down by
nurses and their painkiller hands
screaming until my throat bleeds
so agitated,...
Forum: The Pit Today, 08:17 AM
Replies: 18,145
Views: 181,539
Posted By 剣 斧 血
Well this is confusing. Confusingly arousing.

Well this is confusing. Confusingly arousing.
Forum: The Pit Yesterday, 06:28 PM
Replies: 415
Views: 13,757
Posted By 剣 斧 血
Ah Thrustor, I wonder how much innocence he would...

Ah Thrustor, I wonder how much innocence he would have harvested in his continued existence...
Forum: The Pit 03-29-2015, 03:53 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 599
Posted By 剣 斧 血
Deep Throat Nine.

Deep Throat Nine.
Forum: The Pit 03-29-2015, 03:52 PM
Replies: 63
Views: 1,001
Posted By 剣 斧 血
I have a different name for each of my friends....

I have a different name for each of my friends. Bitchtits, Cumbucket, Doggyknobber, ****muppet, Wastegash, Cockmongler, etc.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-26-2015, 08:38 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 142
Posted By 剣 斧 血
Hugh Manatee

Hugh Manatee was a working stiff
Sharply dressed with a stylish quiff
With suits from a Chinese sweatshop
for added ethnic delight
A clear conscience and not a thought
for the children's plight
At...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-25-2015, 09:04 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 62
Posted By 剣 斧 血
Routine

Two weeks of false starts
with failing productivity.
Taking long walks
to be a glorified pillow
for your snoring heart.

Leaving for late nights,
where sleep becomes a reluctant friend
and a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-23-2015, 08:00 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 135
Posted By 剣 斧 血
I really liked this. I dare say I would only...

I really liked this. I dare say I would only change one thing about this and replace 'can not' with 'cannot'. It flows a bit better to me. Nice one :y:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-19-2015, 10:10 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 136
Posted By 剣 斧 血
An Overdue Apology

It didn't take long to realise
The safest place was not her arms, but her eyes
Where she can't see you
For her gaze, it blisters;
Grey skin to cinders

While gentle derision flickers its last
Casting...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-15-2015, 07:13 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 179
Posted By 剣 斧 血
A little late but... I liked the premise and...

A little late but...

I liked the premise and progression of this piece. As I was reading through it felt like there were different people being addressed, starting out with a mantra read to the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-15-2015, 06:45 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 340
Posted By 剣 斧 血
Overall, I quite enjoyed this piece, nice one. If...

Overall, I quite enjoyed this piece, nice one. If you make a complete song do post a link to it in here so we can listen. :y:

On another note, one of the rules around here is that you don't ask...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-15-2015, 06:25 PM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 75,104
Posted By 剣 斧 血
So, who kicked this forum up the arse and into...

So, who kicked this forum up the arse and into moderate action? This is the most lively I've seen S+L in ages...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-15-2015, 06:21 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 275
Posted By 剣 斧 血
I thought this myself. I actually entered a...

I thought this myself. I actually entered a revised version on another site but I'm still not particularly happy with parts of that version either so I may come back to edit this one at some...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-12-2015, 10:58 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 275
Posted By 剣 斧 血
This is the most thoughtful crit I've received in...

This is the most thoughtful crit I've received in a long while. I'm definitely considering revising this piece at some point so your views are well noted. Thank you :) I'll try to reciprocate,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-09-2015, 06:09 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 275
Posted By 剣 斧 血
Bipolar Love

Pacing my very own cage, lamenting over your delicate hollow-toothed smile
Memories of your soft touch, lightning somewhere in the set of a sun lit storm
For a missing sky against an insecure...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-02-2015, 10:28 PM
Replies: 2,172
Views: 75,104
Posted By 剣 斧 血
Quick question, what do you guys do when you get...

Quick question, what do you guys do when you get stuck in a rut and can only write/think about one thing?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-22-2015, 03:10 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 241
Posted By 剣 斧 血
You made the wrong choice, kid.

They never told you
You'd be taking hungover notes of a drunken alphabet
With an attention span far less than unity

That a trip in the brightly coloured night
Would break you apart
Would ruin more...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-16-2015, 09:45 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 193
Posted By 剣 斧 血
My Hell Is A Woman

Every time she flashes her heartbreaking smile
I struggle with the weakest of wills

With kisses for thighs and a fire inside
Worthy of igniting lies

Touching nights with the sweetest dreams
Taking...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-31-2015, 07:26 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 118
Posted By 剣 斧 血
"Friends"

Why do I stop fights when I'm blind drunk?
Feeling like I'm on the wrong side
When I'm the only one making her back off
You should've just stayed home and whacked off
Now I have to deal with girls...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2014, 11:45 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 286
Posted By 剣 斧 血
I don't like the second to last line, it drags...

I don't like the second to last line, it drags the piece down a little bit to me.

Other than that, a really nice piece, it seems to capture a feeling I've been trying to get with my pieces but I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-04-2014, 11:40 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 209
Posted By 剣 斧 血
A Wasted Trip

She took my hand and sent me sailing solar winds
Through drunken thoughts and sober dreams
Along nine weeks of missed smiles; covering the miles between us
Where twenty minutes become two hours,...
Forum: The Pit 11-22-2014, 11:59 PM
Replies: 55
Views: 1,340
Posted By 剣 斧 血
her

her
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-22-2014, 11:23 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 313
Posted By 剣 斧 血
One more drunk night, with you in my head

I've been
Gone
Wished you here
Felt jokes run plain while faces glance with blame
To a single running gag
Jets on, empty
Fuelled by sad, inadmissible passes at being caring
Sharing drinks in...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-21-2014, 11:12 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 279
Posted By 剣 斧 血
Choices

Lay back and let the room spin
While the sticky gleam of glossed lips
Coats confused, sweetened hands
With a reminiscent tingle of soft breathing

Take restless nights and worn out days
Circling the...
Forum: The Pit 09-26-2013, 06:12 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,436
Posted By 剣 斧 血
No, it was just an ordinary looking guy. :haha:

No, it was just an ordinary looking guy. :haha:
Forum: The Pit 09-26-2013, 05:48 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,436
Posted By 剣 斧 血
Weirdest thing seen/heard/done at a urinal?

To kick off, one time I had just initiated what would be rather a long leak as another man walked over to a urinal nearby. He unzipped and spoke to his penis. "I've only got 10 minutes! Let's rock n...
Forum: The Pit 09-11-2013, 04:39 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 976
Posted By 剣 斧 血
Apart from playing Devil's Advocate would mean...

Apart from playing Devil's Advocate would mean that you oppose what they say in order to strike up or maintain debate on the subject, even if you don't necessarily take that view point. Which I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-30-2013, 06:17 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 514
Posted By 剣 斧 血
Like the lyrics. I would like the music too, I...

Like the lyrics. I would like the music too, I enjoy discordant sounding songs, but I find your voice and the music to be too different in pitch for it to be enjoyable in my opinion. :shrug:
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-30-2013, 06:07 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 433
Posted By 剣 斧 血
I like it, especially the ending. However, in the...

I like it, especially the ending. However, in the stanza...

I was the father of a chosen race (1)
My kingdom I burned down, I didn't know my place (2)
Strike my heel and I will crush your head...
Forum: The Pit 08-23-2013, 04:42 PM
Replies: 224
Views: 3,198
Posted By 剣 斧 血
One of my mates has a pitbull, he left it with...

One of my mates has a pitbull, he left it with another one of our friends while he went away for a week. Said friend trained it to not bite people as much and sit. Within two days of being with the...
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