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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-19-2014, 06:12 PM
Replies: 2,083
Views: 67,576
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Hope all the hard work pays off for you, make...

Hope all the hard work pays off for you, make sure to drop us a link when it's done. Are you self releasing or going through a label? I only ask as I've been struggling with finding a label...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-19-2014, 05:58 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 103
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
The texture of this is fantastic, you play on the...

The texture of this is fantastic, you play on the bruising so well. The inevitability of ageing and decay is so prominent in this for me, and I must say it has really touched me.

I'd like to see...
Forum: The Pit 09-10-2014, 05:20 PM
Replies: 85
Views: 2,022
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I like this...

I like this one.
http://www.micheallarsen.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/10/bythethroat.jpg
Forum: Metal 09-08-2014, 06:04 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 811
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uz0lLEHBGv0

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AEsbcLOeVCw

As has already been mentioned, Joy Division and MBV are necessary.
Forum: Hardcore 09-08-2014, 05:23 PM
Replies: 34,548
Views: 394,705
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Love that Endzweck track, surprised I'd never...

Love that Endzweck track, surprised I'd never heard of them before.

Would you guys mind checking out my band's most recent EP? It's post-rock influenced hardcore/screamo type stuff, if you're into...
Forum: The Pit 09-08-2014, 08:36 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 982
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Is noise acceptable? If it is I'd love to...

Is noise acceptable? If it is I'd love to contribute.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-07-2014, 03:05 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 205
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
This is a very richly textured piece, I really...

This is a very richly textured piece, I really enjoyed it. Loving stuff like "muscular kudzu" and "huffing pure sunlight".

I think "nude" is a bit redundant, as it is followed by "erect" which alone...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-07-2014, 02:53 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 189
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Thank you for looking in, and thank you for your...

Thank you for looking in, and thank you for your kind words. Yeah, interpretation can be bullshit and bullshit can be interpretation, it's all good though as long as it's interpretation.

Had a quick...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-05-2014, 06:48 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 252
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I'm stumbling on "that was hid under my...

I'm stumbling on "that was hid under my bed", I think it could do with more control as you've employed in the rest of the piece, it might specifically be "hid under" that's the problem, maybe there's...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-05-2014, 06:39 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 252
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I think it is fine to write without punctuation,...

I think it is fine to write without punctuation, but by not using it you lose a potential dimension of a piece, so it is important to employ other techniques. Personally I'd like to see further...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-05-2014, 06:28 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 189
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Beetles know this. Beetles are good doctors.

http://crowdecidedtotrywords.files.wordpress.com/2014/09/beetles-know-this-beetles-are-good-doctors.jpg

(Sorry for another huge image)
Forum: Promote YOUR Band 09-03-2014, 04:46 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 193
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Really enjoying this track, it does very much...

Really enjoying this track, it does very much have an early Bongripper vibe to it. I think you could do with bringing the bass forward in the mix slightly, just to give some serious punch to the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-02-2014, 02:31 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 335
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Feels like a long time since you posted, I really...

Feels like a long time since you posted, I really enjoyed the flow of this and I do love your voice.

My only complaint is that I find myself yearning for some separation on that last line, I think...
Forum: Promote YOUR Band 09-02-2014, 02:20 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 114
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
splints (post-rock/emo/screamo)

Based in Gloucestershire, UK.

Just released our second EP, self recorded DIY style.
https://splints.bandcamp.com/album/skinning

Thanks for checking us out.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-19-2014, 12:32 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 442
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
This is a difficult thing to answer, I think it...

This is a difficult thing to answer, I think it is impossible to get a proper view of your own music in terms of whether it's good or not, simply because you know the songs more intimately than is...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-18-2014, 05:32 PM
Replies: 2
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Views: 153
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
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https://crowdecidedtotrywords.files.wordpress.com/2014/08/m.jpeg
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-18-2014, 05:26 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 365
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Is this filled with the background noise of a...

Is this filled with the background noise of a market place perhaps? I found this was best understood in a number of separate readings, starting with the centered stanzas.

I think the left/right...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-18-2014, 05:17 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 217
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
This moves in a surprising direction, even from...

This moves in a surprising direction, even from the richly jumbled opening. I really liked this and I apologise that I can't think of anything more constructive to say at the moment - I'll get back...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-18-2014, 05:12 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 336
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I find myself getting stuck on "as eager as...

I find myself getting stuck on "as eager as once we swam amongst them", I think it just needs a word or tense change to make it flow as smoothly as the rest of this. I love the repetition that comes...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-13-2014, 04:40 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 502
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Real good stuff, fantastically clean in terms of...

Real good stuff, fantastically clean in terms of language and image.

The "cover" rhyme feels a bit stumbley though: I think the line break makes it a tad late, even for the syncopated sonics you've...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-13-2014, 04:34 PM
Replies: 3
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Views: 205
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Thank you for your comments, the repeated letters...

Thank you for your comments, the repeated letters were a sonic experiment that didn't really work/were unnecessary, so I'll remove them.

hippieboy, I'm unsure about those first strikethroughs: I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-10-2014, 04:45 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 236
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
This is an interesting piece, weaving it's way...

This is an interesting piece, weaving it's way around different elements of your consciousness. There a couple of places where I feel there is too much of a jump between paragraphs, maybe this needs...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-10-2014, 04:40 PM
Replies: 3
k
Views: 205
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
k

i am happy in the
i am happy in
i am happy. i slipaslide
over the scaly cobbles like
a clock tower
like the cathedral castle
---------------------------
kafka's gorgeous letters (to father/dear...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-06-2014, 01:49 PM
Replies: 2,083
Views: 67,576
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Dishonesty is also something I cannot stand, and...

Dishonesty is also something I cannot stand, and it is especially unhelpful in terms of puzzling out social relations. I hope you're working this one out.

It's noise, though I wouldn't say it's...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-06-2014, 12:30 PM
Replies: 2,083
Views: 67,576
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Bleed, I think I have friendships with 8 or 9...

Bleed,

I think I have friendships with 8 or 9 people that I would say are deep, by that I mean people who I talk with comfortably about anything and I regularly discuss music, art, spirituality etc...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-06-2014, 12:04 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 261
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Thanks for giving this a read over. hippieboy,...

Thanks for giving this a read over.


hippieboy, I think I certainly need to fill out some more of those images to give some more clarity, but when writing this I was restrained by the paper - I'm...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-03-2014, 05:09 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 258
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I don't like "away.", it doesn't sit...

I don't like "away.", it doesn't sit well for me in terms of texture and I also think it is too much of a repetition of the previous line. Otherwise I loved this.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-03-2014, 03:32 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 261
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
untitled.

http://i.imgur.com/GtnlfeW.jpg?1?3617






(For some reason this won't seem to embed.)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-30-2014, 05:11 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 219
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Agreed with hippieboy, I found this fascinating...

Agreed with hippieboy, I found this fascinating and I love that last line. Really enjoyable read.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-30-2014, 05:09 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 186
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Thanks for looking in guys. youknowwhyimhere, I...

Thanks for looking in guys.

youknowwhyimhere, I always find this kind of in depth reading incredibly interesting - thank you, I really appreciate you taking the time to do so.

hippieboy, I'm...
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