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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-03-2012, 11:35 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 284
Posted By BrandyCross
Holding On

so, it could be said that it's been a long time since I posted here, but I would love to know what you think about this one.

Sitting in this asylum I have come to call my home
I am broken I am...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-03-2012, 11:33 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 783
Posted By BrandyCross
I really love it, the only thing I would even...

I really love it, the only thing I would even think of changing is underneath to beneath but that's just a personal thing.
Your 'ultrasound' verse isn't quite as flowing as the rest of it as well...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-03-2011, 04:03 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 215
Posted By BrandyCross
ahem, its nice, but there is one line in it , why...

ahem, its nice, but there is one line in it , why did you left???
shouldnt it be why did you leave???
or are you trying to exercise bardic license to no point??
I give it a 6 out of 10 not to...
Forum: Musician Talk 01-03-2011, 12:32 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,087
Posted By BrandyCross
may I suggest a phsyciatrist? or Tool :) Perfect...

may I suggest a phsyciatrist?
or Tool
:)
Perfect Circle

not boring at all,
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques 01-02-2011, 04:03 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 437
Posted By BrandyCross
uhhm, I think that sometimes it is a good thing...

uhhm,
I think that sometimes it is a good thing to repeat words,
for instance take the beatles
if they didn't use repition, their songs would be much much shorter

however, I think that, if you...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 01-01-2011, 06:05 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 359
Posted By BrandyCross
I think it has a good idea behind it but is still...

I think it has a good idea behind it but is still crude as of yet,
how long have you been writing lyrics????
Forum: Musician Talk 01-01-2011, 04:01 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 174
Posted By BrandyCross
actually yes you just look up the Behringer Xenyx...

actually yes you just look up the Behringer Xenyx 1202FX but put the words pa system into it, should put it at like $540 or something, let me see if i can find it for you


hmm, well american...
Forum: Musician Talk 12-31-2010, 07:39 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 174
Posted By BrandyCross
Behringer Xenyx 1202FX should be priced at...

Behringer Xenyx 1202FX

should be priced at around $100 probably one of the best low cost one's that I have found, :) lemme see if i can find it on americanmusical for you...
Forum: Musician Talk 12-30-2010, 06:59 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 212
Posted By BrandyCross
I can play pretty good jazz piano :) thanks for...

I can play pretty good jazz piano :) thanks for the advice,
im basicly just looking for a way to differentiate my style so i can have it sound dark but not the same as the last peice,
thanks :)...
Forum: Musician Talk 12-30-2010, 06:47 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 212
Posted By BrandyCross
Hey thanks :) good advice, shall work on it, I do...

Hey thanks :) good advice, shall work on it, I do have a keybaord but its errr on another continent so not really an option right now, THANKS Chad

@cornela1
I didnt actually have a piano teacher so...
Forum: Musician Talk 12-30-2010, 06:21 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 212
Posted By BrandyCross
are you familiar with piano?? its basicly really...

are you familiar with piano??
its basicly really dark piano with heavy riffs but with a touch of melody and classical sound to it :) fast solo but alot of chords played at once.
Forum: Musician Talk 12-30-2010, 06:16 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 212
Posted By BrandyCross
uhhm, like something you would find in a cradle...

uhhm, like something you would find in a cradle of filth song , gothic metal piano may be a better phrasing :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-30-2010, 06:06 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 177
Posted By BrandyCross
I think that if you find something that makes you...

I think that if you find something that makes you angry (religion, politics, your little sister destroying your room) and use it to either inspire the song or the lyrics,
for chords i would suggest...
Forum: Musician Talk 12-30-2010, 05:59 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 212
Posted By BrandyCross
Piano Help Please!

I play death metal style piano, (Gothic Piano, really dark)
I find that when composing I tend to stick mostly to A-E-D and a combination thereof
also I tend to use a whole octave or more with my...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-28-2010, 10:18 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 346
Posted By BrandyCross
Wow you know how to use your words. Only one...

Wow you know how to use your words. Only one thing, the second line of your chorus has alot of comma's in it, to me those are pauses.... would like to hear how this works out to music
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-24-2010, 11:49 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 142
Posted By BrandyCross
Sleeping In A Manger

Born this night in sleeping town
sweet dreams his face gives no frown
lord of heaven, king of kings
sleeping in a manger

no satin sheets
on straw he sleeps,
prophet, king and savior,

no marble...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-24-2010, 11:42 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 415
Posted By BrandyCross
hey thanks, any crit you would like to give to...

hey thanks, any crit you would like to give to help it reach that potential?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-16-2010, 04:24 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 415
Posted By BrandyCross
Like Shattered Glass

dont tell her its broken,
she knows already
she's in love with the fallen
knows better than me

dont say its wrong
dont say its right
she's waiting so long
just leave her tonight
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-16-2010, 12:19 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 199
Posted By BrandyCross
bminor pentatonic, d maj pentatonic , i asked a...

bminor pentatonic, d maj pentatonic ,
i asked a friend
is this really the right thread for this??
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-15-2010, 12:28 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 152
Posted By BrandyCross
K first off, you may have written it in ten...

K first off, you may have written it in ten minutes, but its going to be better if you take a look at it a few days later and fix what you don't like

Looking after you car again, that will give you...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-15-2010, 10:03 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 152
Posted By BrandyCross
were you looking for a crit on this? Personally...

were you looking for a crit on this?
Personally I think it is a pretty cool song theme, but I also think some of your wording was somewhat poor and maybe for the sake of the song you could change it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-14-2010, 05:46 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 117
Posted By BrandyCross
the imagery is awesome I dont think it needs...

the imagery is awesome
I dont think it needs anything
try not to scare any small children with it
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-14-2010, 03:56 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 743
Posted By BrandyCross
very very nice, few gramatical errors but that is...

very very nice, few gramatical errors but that is about it
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-14-2010, 02:05 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 118
Posted By BrandyCross
Let Me Be Your Sinner

I am sin and I am death,
I am dark and I am night,
Lady in a red dress,
Take one more breath.

Let me be your sinner,
You know that you are mine.

Darkness, creeping, up on me,
Loving, caress of her...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-14-2010, 01:36 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 104
Posted By BrandyCross
I like the chorus this is a first draft?

I like the chorus

this is a first draft?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-14-2010, 01:33 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 149
Posted By BrandyCross
Put me out with the waste like i know you'll...

Put me out with the waste like i know you'll do.
It's a far away place trying to please you.
Everytime i retrace my steps back to you.
Yeah sure i'll be fine but i know it's no use.
sorry but last...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-14-2010, 10:12 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 532
Posted By BrandyCross
:P its 5-7-5 on the sylables other then that you...

:P its 5-7-5 on the sylables
other then that you can free wheel but
this one seems to have
4-4-4
X_X
Forum: Musician Ads 12-14-2010, 09:32 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 224
Posted By BrandyCross
I know someone who may be interested if you are...

I know someone who may be interested if you are in the right area, his email if jamsif@hotmail.co.uk
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-14-2010, 09:17 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 437
Posted By BrandyCross
beautiful peice of prose only crit i have to...

beautiful peice of prose
only crit i have to give is the after-noon on two seperate lines could be a little bit smoother, but it still sounds good as is. Kudo's to you
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-14-2010, 05:38 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 234
Posted By BrandyCross
I think it is good, the double lineing of...

I think it is good, the double lineing of fire/desire seems to me that it could be slightly better but :) overall quite good
An adultís toy that no one knows how to fix
is maybe a tiny bit awkward...
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