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Forum: Original Recordings 11-22-2013, 08:29 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 563
Posted By Jready
Tran Euro - Like the intro before the lead,...

Tran Euro - Like the intro before the lead, pretty good all in all. I like the strangeness of the electronic drums.

This world - Reminds me quite a bit of a modern day Doom remix that kept the...
Forum: Original Recordings 11-20-2013, 06:44 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 123
Posted By Jready
Post Jared Shaw - "Play" (C4C!)

So, after having no inspiration to play guitar for a few months, Nemertines released his album "6", consisting purely of tracks under 1 minute. I was inspired by this to turn some short melodies I'd...
Forum: Original Recordings 06-21-2013, 02:20 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 310
Posted By Jready
Pretty good, but the lead is definitely too sharp...

Pretty good, but the lead is definitely too sharp sounding - not notation wise, but it might be peaking with too much overdrive or something. Maybe lower that down just a tad, but otherwise, the mix...
Forum: Original Recordings 06-21-2013, 02:17 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 221
Posted By Jready
Well, I went back to the DAW, and it turns out...

Well, I went back to the DAW, and it turns out the lead guitar is the quieter than the rhythm guitar, drums and vocals. Speaking of vocals, it was kind of difficult to get them to a proper level, as...
Forum: Original Recordings 06-21-2013, 04:12 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 276
Posted By Jready
Interesting. Glad you had fun when making this,...

Interesting. Glad you had fun when making this, and after reading the description, I'm going to keep in mind that this is just a demo of sorts of some riffs.

Production value is quite good, I must...
Forum: Original Recordings 06-21-2013, 04:02 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 691
Posted By Jready
Keepin' in touch: The very beginning reminds me...

Keepin' in touch:

The very beginning reminds me of Andreas Ronnberg's song "tears", as they both have very low descending piano chords. It's interesting to hear Synth guitar, but I think actual...
Forum: Original Recordings 06-21-2013, 03:53 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 158
Posted By Jready
Really like the drum fills in the intro - they...

Really like the drum fills in the intro - they sounded awesome! Vocals sound like a mix of James Hetfield and maybe Tom Araya. Guitar riffs are really awesome and brutal, same for the drumming! All...
Forum: Original Recordings 06-21-2013, 03:44 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 221
Posted By Jready
Post Psycho Soldier [Spoken word Doom Metal] (C4C!)

http://jaredshaw.bandcamp.com/track/psycho-soldier

A song I made for a friend who's likely long gone. Will gladly C4C.
Forum: Original Recordings 06-07-2013, 12:04 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 238
Posted By Jready
Since it's a demo, take these ideas into mind:...

Since it's a demo, take these ideas into mind: Put some reverb on the guitar, and get a pop filter for the vocals. These are really interesting ideas, and I'd love to see them fleshed out, but this...
Forum: Original Recordings 06-06-2013, 11:54 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 298
Posted By Jready
Intro riff sounds similar in tone of 80's thrash...

Intro riff sounds similar in tone of 80's thrash metal or black metal, however, at 38 seconds, the chorus(?) seems to take more of a melodic metal turn, with a mix of some of those black metal-style...
Forum: Original Recordings 06-06-2013, 11:49 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 310
Posted By Jready
I really like the slight distortion on rhythm,...

I really like the slight distortion on rhythm, not too much, but still enough to hold out as strong and somewhat aggressive. Vocals are good, really brought out in the mix. Sounds good. Also like the...
Forum: Original Recordings 06-06-2013, 10:19 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 229
Posted By Jready
Post (C4C) Spec(trum) of dust - Experimental Glitch/Ambience track

http://jaredshaw.bandcamp.com/track/spec-trum-of-dust

A song I made entirely digitally. I used AudioPaint to make spectrumized photos, and tooled around with Audacity to create the song.
Forum: Original Recordings 05-26-2013, 08:03 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 268
Posted By Jready
Intro is interesting - pretty bluesy, the chord...

Intro is interesting - pretty bluesy, the chord progression in the background especially. There are just a few parts where the background rhythm guitar conflicts with the lead, because they seem to...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-26-2013, 05:05 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 178
Posted By Jready
Interesting piece. Thought it was going to be...

Interesting piece. Thought it was going to be mono in the left ear for a second when I heard the intro, heh. Anyways, I like the intro bit, and when the drums come in, the mood of the song changes a...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-26-2013, 04:37 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 162
Posted By Jready
I like the vocals, lyrics are all good. I'm...

I like the vocals, lyrics are all good. I'm hearing some Black Sabbath vibes here and there. But then again, I never did listen to them too much, so maybe I don't know what I'm talking about. I also...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-26-2013, 04:26 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 452
Posted By Jready
The intro is mysterious and warming, good build...

The intro is mysterious and warming, good build up to the distortion that comes in. The clean tone is very warm. Also like the bass drop right before the distortion guitar comes in. Adds lots of...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-26-2013, 04:20 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 117
Posted By Jready
Interesting. Really like the sound of the...

Interesting. Really like the sound of the keyboard backing track. The guitar is very calming, and the whole atmosphere is great. Around 43 second in, the backing track gets a little more complex, and...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-26-2013, 03:15 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 154
Posted By Jready
really like the intro - water drops and a serene...

really like the intro - water drops and a serene violin effect on guitar, I believe. The guitar sounds lovely, the piano adds in extra spice, it's all very lovely, and the bass and drums are great...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-26-2013, 03:08 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 296
Posted By Jready
Thanks for your time, everyone! I've revised...

Thanks for your time, everyone!

I've revised track 3, "Trench Warfare", so maybe it would be worth another listen - this time around, there's drums, bass, and a more appropriate intro/outro.
Forum: Original Recordings 05-25-2013, 08:58 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 136
Posted By Jready
The rhythm is good, and I like the song, but the...

The rhythm is good, and I like the song, but the problem here seems to be that the guitar is way too loud, it kind of absorbs the vocal track at times. It's really noticeable at the start, but it...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-25-2013, 08:51 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 212
Posted By Jready
I really like it. The bass notes sound a bit odd...

I really like it. The bass notes sound a bit odd from what I'm accustomed to, same for the higher ones. But it's not a bad thing at all, in fact, it makes the track more interesting to me. There was...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-25-2013, 08:44 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 207
Posted By Jready
Interesting piece. Really liked the Chorus, and...

Interesting piece. Really liked the Chorus, and the contrasting poppy tunes and somewhat grim lyrics are a really nice contrast, and I have to say I really like the slight (English?) accent in the...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-25-2013, 08:39 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 146
Posted By Jready
Glad to hear your choppers are getting back in...

Glad to hear your choppers are getting back in order. :)

Very soulful, I think that if you cleaned up the guitar a little bit, and made the ending maybe a little less abrupt, even though I do kind...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-25-2013, 08:34 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 296
Posted By Jready
Post Gatsby (C4C)

Okay, so here's the circumstance of why I made this:

In English class, we just finished reading "The Great Gatsby", and were assigned a project in which was mostly free, though had to be based on...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-03-2013, 06:03 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 242
Posted By Jready
Pretty good, pretty good. But I feel maybe the...

Pretty good, pretty good. But I feel maybe the Rhythm guitar track could be turned down just a little. Doesn't really drown out the rest of the sound, but it overwhelms the other tracks just a bit. I...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-03-2013, 05:58 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 229
Posted By Jready
Interesting way you have your fingers there....

Interesting way you have your fingers there. Good, serene track, but I feel maybe it could benefit from a slow, simple drum track, and I'm not sure if it's because of the mic quality or something,...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-03-2013, 05:54 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 345
Posted By Jready
A little too quiet with the intro's drum and...

A little too quiet with the intro's drum and acoustic guitar. It would be good to maybe go back to the production and see if you can increase the volume to a good point. Same with the electric...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-03-2013, 05:51 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 345
Posted By Jready
Really like the intro - the gentle storm,...

Really like the intro - the gentle storm, orchestra, harp, and overdrive guitar is really good. I wish that maybe in the transition, there would have been a bit more of a volume increase, but if not,...
Forum: Original Recordings 05-01-2013, 10:03 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 282
Posted By Jready
Left a comment. Anyways, to be completely honest,...

Left a comment. Anyways, to be completely honest, I'm just some 16 year old who recorded most of this in his room, and in his mother's basement.

Okay, all of it.

I haven't much experience in...
Forum: Promote YOUR Band 05-01-2013, 10:01 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 818
Posted By Jready
"Pure Imagination". Heh. Lovely cover,...

"Pure Imagination". Heh.
Lovely cover, friend. I remember when I was young, I heard this song, and it became a favorite for a long time. Times were so different back then. So much was different in so...
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