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Forum: Site Suggestions 05-22-2014, 05:13 PM
Replies: 184
Views: 11,185
Posted By Fredmac12
This. Maybe a comment on a 4/5 or 3/5. On 1 or 2...

This. Maybe a comment on a 4/5 or 3/5. On 1 or 2 though you should have to send a correction along with the rating. It may decrease the number of ratings but it should increase the reliability of the...
Forum: Tab Talk 05-16-2014, 07:48 PM
Replies: 102
Views: 7,744
Posted By Fredmac12
I think this same problem has happened to me. On...

I think this same problem has happened to me. On this tab http://tabs.ultimate-guitar.com/c/coldplay/yellow_acoustic_ver3_tab.htm for Coldplay - Yellow Acoustic. I received a 1 star rating and...
Forum: Musician Talk 10-16-2013, 07:20 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 437
Posted By Fredmac12
What chord is this?

Played this chord, and I didn't know what it was, so here it is:

e|----
B|-6--
G|-5--
D|-6--
A|-6--

Thanks in advance
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-29-2013, 09:29 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 280
Posted By Fredmac12
Circles

Your face I once looked for
Now haunts my nights and plagues my days,
Your name rattling and so my mind plays.
I so wish to find a reason
To give you blame, and deface the past
But still finding...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-25-2013, 01:00 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 328
Posted By Fredmac12
Well it's about growing older/growing up? Yes? I...

Well it's about growing older/growing up? Yes? I liked the chorus a lot. Especially the last line.
I think the verse 2 is not as good, mainly because I don't understand it! The very first line I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-25-2013, 11:57 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 258
Posted By Fredmac12
I'd suggest you post your lyrics in a separate...

I'd suggest you post your lyrics in a separate thread then just leave a link for other people to crit your piece. It's a lot simpler that way, thanks for giving my lyrics a look, post yours in a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 02-24-2013, 09:33 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 258
Posted By Fredmac12
You have it all (Do you?)

Not yet finished I don't think, the ending was rushed to make it not feel it ended abruptly, but I intend to carry it on and thus change this ending.

On you go you've got it all
Everything you want,...
Forum: The Pit 11-30-2012, 05:35 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 961
Posted By Fredmac12
This is a thread on what I guess is...

This is a thread on what I guess is ultimateyou.com
Forum: The Pit 11-30-2012, 04:26 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 961
Posted By Fredmac12
But what is guitar?

What is guitar to everyone?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques 11-21-2012, 04:49 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 509
Posted By Fredmac12
Yeah I know, forced things just sound, well...

Yeah I know, forced things just sound, well forced hahah. I write things down as you say, always better to have the vague idea then you might find a better way to word it later!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques 11-21-2012, 04:24 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 509
Posted By Fredmac12
Problems developing ideas...

Does anyone else ever have a good idea for a song, then after writing the first verse have problems continuing further?
Also does anyone have problems putting an idea into a chorus, without being too...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-29-2012, 01:21 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 446
Posted By Fredmac12
If you had to read it twice, that's just what I...

If you had to read it twice, that's just what I was after with this piece! Thanks, I'll take a look at your work when I'm on my computer not my phone
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-27-2012, 07:58 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 446
Posted By Fredmac12
I didn't feel that rhyme was forced actually, imo...

I didn't feel that rhyme was forced actually, imo it's genuinely what I was trying to say, but thanks for the feedback!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-25-2012, 05:58 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 457
Posted By Fredmac12
Overall I liked the ideas behind this, and it...

Overall I liked the ideas behind this, and it shows some promise, but there are (as pointed out) parts where I feel it's a little forced and simple. Good work though, and if you like writing lyrics,...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-25-2012, 05:48 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 446
Posted By Fredmac12
Thanks! I am a fan of trying to use contradicting...

Thanks! I am a fan of trying to use contradicting things, paradoxes, impossibilities etc... If you have any thing you want me to take a look at leave a link :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-25-2012, 04:38 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 481
Posted By Fredmac12
Not sure about repeating the chorus directly...

Not sure about repeating the chorus directly after the chorus if that's what the 'chorus 2x' means, it's overly repetitive. Maybe repeat it and the end and do as factor said by cutting it off. As a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-25-2012, 10:25 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 218
Posted By Fredmac12
It specifically says in the rules not to repost...

It specifically says in the rules not to repost for that reason... I'll have to just in case.

*reported*
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 09-25-2012, 10:23 AM
Replies: 138
Views: 20,345
Posted By Fredmac12
I'm new to the 1v1 thing, I'd accept this, if we...

I'm new to the 1v1 thing, I'd accept this, if we can find out how it works!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-25-2012, 10:18 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 446
Posted By Fredmac12
Unseen by the unseen

Very different to my other pieces, thought I'd try something else.


And all will hear, but hear nothing
All seeing but all blind,
For here and there unaware so fair
'tis unfair to be aware of the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-24-2012, 06:55 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 813
Posted By Fredmac12
The fact is this piece makes absolutely no sense,...

The fact is this piece makes absolutely no sense, but that is the point of it (I guess). Therefore taking into account some people don't like things without meaning, which is fair enough, then it...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-24-2012, 06:37 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 255
Posted By Fredmac12
It might just be hard to see, and I'm blinded due...

It might just be hard to see, and I'm blinded due to being the writer. I don't know the quote, but I'll keep it in mind! Thanks.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-23-2012, 05:15 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 255
Posted By Fredmac12
I see your point, to me I felt there was a...

I see your point, to me I felt there was a context if you looked into the lyrics to find it. However as I wrote it I would obviously find that easy to see. It's a working progress, I'll try and make...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-22-2012, 04:47 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 237
Posted By Fredmac12
I really enjoyed this! The rhyming, and internal...

I really enjoyed this! The rhyming, and internal rhymes especially were brilliant and didn't seem forced. The ending was perfect and fitted really well. If there was one thing I'd criticise it would...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-22-2012, 04:42 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 254
Posted By Fredmac12
Check out some of my work if you have a chance! ...

Check out some of my work if you have a chance! :D
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1560053
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1561729
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-22-2012, 04:39 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 353
Posted By Fredmac12
I liked this piece on a whole, with only a few...

I liked this piece on a whole, with only a few minor improvements that (to me anyway) would make it better. Good work!

Check out some of my work if you have a chance! :D...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-21-2012, 12:08 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 255
Posted By Fredmac12
Perfection

You had nothing to gain
Everything to lose
But you lost it all
And you're better of for it
You couldn't take the stress
Of keeping it together
You thrive on the freedom
You can now keep forever

If...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-14-2012, 11:19 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 340
Posted By Fredmac12
Could very well be, I always find it quite hard...

Could very well be, I always find it quite hard to get the flow of something without the music.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-14-2012, 11:07 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 340
Posted By Fredmac12
They're the only places I feel the flow is not as...

They're the only places I feel the flow is not as good, it's not bad just the rest is better. However this could just be the way I'm reading or something.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-14-2012, 11:02 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 402
Posted By Fredmac12
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah the up and down is...

Thanks for the feedback!

Yeah the up and down is deliberate, the second verse is intended to be a faster, I think it could maybe do with a bit added to it, to increase the length. It would probably...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-14-2012, 06:54 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 340
Posted By Fredmac12
It's nice, quite thought provoking, fairly vague...

It's nice, quite thought provoking, fairly vague and maybe a bit ambiguous but I like that. Especially as a first attempt it's very good. I think in a few parts it could flow a bit better, if you...
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