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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-07-2012, 12:33 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 240
Posted By Always-Idle
I didn't read them like that originally though, I...

I didn't read them like that originally though, I read them like stereotypical, pissed-off punk lyrics
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-06-2012, 10:43 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 240
Posted By Always-Idle
I like Blink 182

I like Blink 182
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-06-2012, 10:40 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 240
Posted By Always-Idle
For the lyrics it might be good to turn it into a...

For the lyrics it might be good to turn it into a narrative or something like that.
Here's my go at it:

And she had dark/light (colour) eyes that would sparkle
Like my life that she made bright
And...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-06-2012, 10:25 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 310
Posted By Always-Idle
I like it's simplicity. I think that being able...

I like it's simplicity. I think that being able to decipher and sum up your thoughts like that is wonderful skill.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-06-2012, 10:21 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 231
Posted By Always-Idle
I'm Irish and I approve of this haha. Though I...

I'm Irish and I approve of this haha. Though I dunno how relevant it is; we don't have many guns, broken clubs or mass blood spillages here nowadays and snow is a rarity. But I did read it in the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-06-2012, 10:10 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 492
Posted By Always-Idle
This is so good, sad though. I wish I could be...

This is so good, sad though. I wish I could be useful and give a critique but it's just perfect as is.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-06-2012, 10:01 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 205
Posted By Always-Idle
I think this is really good, if I had one...

I think this is really good, if I had one criticism it's that the last stanza is a bit crude.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-06-2012, 09:41 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 253
Posted By Always-Idle
Bla-bla-bla Maybe

Lately, everythings been getting me down
Maybe, I just gotta move outta town
Watching, all the ants crawl around
I know, I am not alone

(Chorus)
And maybe, tomorrow is your day
Throw your fears...
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