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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 12-03-2012, 09:35 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 362
Posted By The Hurt Within
Me too, then I though, I'll ban the ****er, then...

Me too, then I though, I'll ban the ****er, then I though, can't do that either.

:(

I'll critique this later.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-30-2012, 08:02 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 514
Posted By The Hurt Within
Hehe thanks all. Yeah this is more prosey than...

Hehe thanks all. Yeah this is more prosey than most, I might toy with the structure a bit, since there's a hell of a lot of internal rhyme going on here, I could make that more apparent. I've also...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-30-2012, 07:59 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 579
Posted By The Hurt Within
I'm good dude. It's just nice to see at least...

I'm good dude. It's just nice to see at least some of the regular faces around still. I hope you do finish this one, its worth it. Oh and if you get the chance I'd appreciate a comment on mine if you...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-28-2012, 10:50 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 262
Posted By The Hurt Within
This does work. I've just been negative to...

This does work. I've just been negative to someone else for such a small piece that's trying to just encapsulate a single moment, it not having enough substance for it to be memorable. While that is...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-28-2012, 10:33 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 297
Posted By The Hurt Within
I like the idea here. Just parts of it left me...

I like the idea here. Just parts of it left me confused. The first stanza for a start. If it is a waterproof mac, it's exactly that, no amount of rain will soak through, the image is flawed, I know...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-28-2012, 09:39 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 579
Posted By The Hurt Within
I'm a fan of small ditty pieces and I'm not. On...

I'm a fan of small ditty pieces and I'm not. On the one side they lack the character and substance of a longer piece, for the most part, and on the other they're a little sound bite that encapsulates...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-27-2012, 09:17 PM
Replies: 6
Zoe
Views: 490
Posted By The Hurt Within
Dylan, this worked on so many levels, enjoyed it,...

Dylan, this worked on so many levels, enjoyed it, a lot. Keep it up bro.

Looks like I'm nesting.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-27-2012, 06:27 PM
Replies: 2,112
Views: 70,027
Posted By The Hurt Within
^^^ Done :)

^^^

Done :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 11-27-2012, 06:23 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 769
Posted By The Hurt Within
^^^ Same. Although the last had some highs too...

^^^

Same. Although the last had some highs too that made me consider it. For me 1st, just.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-27-2012, 06:13 PM
Replies: 1,583
Views: 88,152
Posted By The Hurt Within
I'm not blaming anyone. I've been stalking here...

I'm not blaming anyone. I've been stalking here for a good 4/5 months. It just seems a lot of people are expecting something for nothing, there's a load of pieces with 0 replies, because everyone is...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-27-2012, 03:47 PM
Replies: 1,583
Views: 88,152
Posted By The Hurt Within
This is putty much what I was gonna say. Do it to...

This is putty much what I was gonna say. Do it to the best of your ability, but it's the effort that counts. If the piece writer can see you've taken a while to compose your opinions on it, no matter...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2012, 08:21 PM
Replies: 6
Zoe
Views: 490
Posted By The Hurt Within
I'll get to this tomorrow. :D

I'll get to this tomorrow. :D
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2012, 08:03 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 514
Posted By The Hurt Within
Oh dear lord I'm crying with laughter again....

Oh dear lord I'm crying with laughter again. :haha: :haha: :haha:

Still is the best thing ever....
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2012, 07:52 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 415
Posted By The Hurt Within
peACE

peACE
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2012, 06:04 PM
Replies: 1,583
Views: 88,152
Posted By The Hurt Within
I noticed that the forum isn't looking too hot...

I noticed that the forum isn't looking too hot right now. It makes me sad, very sad. It's not a lack of quality writing, just seems the lack of willingness. There also seems to be a massive divide...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-26-2012, 01:53 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 514
Posted By The Hurt Within
Grand Mother Nature

Hi. It's been a while. I might be fleeting, I might be nesting, who knows...


Grand Mother Nature

If ever an air of disappointment was
more apparent, it was when I visited
my grandmother, the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-11-2011, 05:05 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 158
Posted By The Hurt Within
Aint the place for this mate, please read the...

Aint the place for this mate, please read the rules of each forum before you post.

repo'ed
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-11-2011, 04:14 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 370
Posted By The Hurt Within
Cheers a lot guys I am going to utterly overhaul...

Cheers a lot guys I am going to utterly overhaul the form of this piece when I get in, I did overlook the structure for sure, I was caught up on the idea of having the interchangable words, check...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-10-2011, 08:00 PM
Replies: 4
Hum
Views: 270
Posted By The Hurt Within
I agree with the above. I think it'd work for you...

I agree with the above. I think it'd work for you so much more to keep the physical descriptions crow related, you do switch between the two, only once mind, but it was enough for me to question your...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-10-2011, 07:42 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 311
Posted By The Hurt Within
This just reads and behaves like something much...

This just reads and behaves like something much bigger, it's very very compact, even for me, I have a very similar style (2 years ago I posted a lot here...) and it kind of kills itself in its...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-10-2011, 07:19 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 517
Posted By The Hurt Within
I've got a piece floating around if you wouldn't...

I've got a piece floating around if you wouldn't mind.

peACE
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-10-2011, 06:48 PM
Replies: 2,112
Views: 70,027
Posted By The Hurt Within
I think he is hoping that my return will result...

I think he is hoping that my return will result in some kind of soddamy party.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-10-2011, 06:45 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 732
Posted By The Hurt Within
This is something I recognise, yay!! I've got...

This is something I recognise, yay!!



I've got a piece floating around on page 2 probably by now, if you wouldn't mind.

peACE
Nice to see you still posting.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-07-2011, 09:47 PM
Replies: 2,112
Views: 70,027
Posted By The Hurt Within
PM no?

PM no?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 04-07-2011, 09:32 PM
Replies: 138
Views: 20,334
Posted By The Hurt Within
I'll PM you something now.

I'll PM you something now.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests 04-07-2011, 09:29 PM
Replies: 138
Views: 20,334
Posted By The Hurt Within
2 points poetry. ?

2 points

poetry.

?
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-07-2011, 08:57 PM
Replies: 2,112
Views: 70,027
Posted By The Hurt Within
Keeeeeeeennnnnnnooooo!

Keeeeeeeennnnnnnooooo!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-07-2011, 08:46 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 370
Posted By The Hurt Within
Juxta/ posed

This will take a couple of reads, i'm sure.

I wrote this not long after I ****ed off.

This has had a major overhaul now and the internal poem has been altered too.

Juxta/posed


I am entwined
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-07-2011, 08:26 PM
Replies: 2,112
Views: 70,027
Posted By The Hurt Within
You shouldn't have doubted that I recognise you.

You shouldn't have doubted that I recognise you.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 04-07-2011, 08:23 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 209
Posted By The Hurt Within
Yeah fair play, I should have seen that in a way,...

Yeah fair play, I should have seen that in a way, but it's been a while ;)

personally the first time I stopped and thought hmm this isn't working was here:

Now it's just a matter of trying to stay...
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