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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
12-03-2012, 09:35 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 252
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Me too, then I though, I'll ban the ****er, then...
Me too, then I though, I'll ban the ****er, then I though, can't do that either. :( I'll critique this later. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-30-2012, 08:02 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 363
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Hehe thanks all. Yeah this is more prosey than...
Hehe thanks all. Yeah this is more prosey than most, I might toy with the structure a bit, since there's a hell of a lot of internal rhyme going on here, I could make that more apparent. I've also... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-30-2012, 07:59 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 457
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I'm good dude. It's just nice to see at least...
I'm good dude. It's just nice to see at least some of the regular faces around still. I hope you do finish this one, its worth it. Oh and if you get the chance I'd appreciate a comment on mine if you... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-28-2012, 10:50 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 188
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This does work. I've just been negative to...
This does work. I've just been negative to someone else for such a small piece that's trying to just encapsulate a single moment, it not having enough substance for it to be memorable. While that is... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-28-2012, 10:33 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 237
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The Hurt Within
I like the idea here. Just parts of it left me...
I like the idea here. Just parts of it left me confused. The first stanza for a start. If it is a waterproof mac, it's exactly that, no amount of rain will soak through, the image is flawed, I know... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-28-2012, 09:39 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 457
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The Hurt Within
I'm a fan of small ditty pieces and I'm not. On...
I'm a fan of small ditty pieces and I'm not. On the one side they lack the character and substance of a longer piece, for the most part, and on the other they're a little sound bite that encapsulates... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-27-2012, 09:17 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 375
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Dylan, this worked on so many levels, enjoyed it,...
Dylan, this worked on so many levels, enjoyed it, a lot. Keep it up bro. Looks like I'm nesting. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-27-2012, 06:27 PM
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Replies: 1,659
Views: 50,060
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests
11-27-2012, 06:23 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 547
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The Hurt Within
^^^
Same. Although the last had some highs too...
^^^ Same. Although the last had some highs too that made me consider it. For me 1st, just. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-27-2012, 06:13 PM
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Replies: 1,536
Views: 75,928
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The Hurt Within
I'm not blaming anyone. I've been stalking here...
I'm not blaming anyone. I've been stalking here for a good 4/5 months. It just seems a lot of people are expecting something for nothing, there's a load of pieces with 0 replies, because everyone is... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-27-2012, 03:47 PM
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Replies: 1,536
Views: 75,928
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The Hurt Within
This is putty much what I was gonna say. Do it to...
This is putty much what I was gonna say. Do it to the best of your ability, but it's the effort that counts. If the piece writer can see you've taken a while to compose your opinions on it, no matter... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-26-2012, 08:21 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 375
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-26-2012, 08:03 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 363
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The Hurt Within
Oh dear lord I'm crying with laughter again....
Oh dear lord I'm crying with laughter again. :haha: :haha: :haha: Still is the best thing ever.... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-26-2012, 07:52 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 305
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The Hurt Within
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-26-2012, 06:04 PM
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Replies: 1,536
Views: 75,928
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The Hurt Within
I noticed that the forum isn't looking too hot...
I noticed that the forum isn't looking too hot right now. It makes me sad, very sad. It's not a lack of quality writing, just seems the lack of willingness. There also seems to be a massive divide... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
11-26-2012, 01:53 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 363
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The Hurt Within
Grand Mother Nature
Hi. It's been a while. I might be fleeting, I might be nesting, who knows... Grand Mother Nature If ever an air of disappointment was more apparent, it was when I visited my grandmother, the... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-11-2011, 05:05 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 138
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The Hurt Within
Aint the place for this mate, please read the...
Aint the place for this mate, please read the rules of each forum before you post. repo'ed |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-11-2011, 04:14 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 262
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The Hurt Within
Cheers a lot guys I am going to utterly overhaul...
Cheers a lot guys I am going to utterly overhaul the form of this piece when I get in, I did overlook the structure for sure, I was caught up on the idea of having the interchangable words, check... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-10-2011, 08:00 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 224
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The Hurt Within
I agree with the above. I think it'd work for you...
I agree with the above. I think it'd work for you so much more to keep the physical descriptions crow related, you do switch between the two, only once mind, but it was enough for me to question your... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-10-2011, 07:42 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 280
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The Hurt Within
This just reads and behaves like something much...
This just reads and behaves like something much bigger, it's very very compact, even for me, I have a very similar style (2 years ago I posted a lot here...) and it kind of kills itself in its... |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-10-2011, 07:19 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 433
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The Hurt Within
I've got a piece floating around if you wouldn't...
I've got a piece floating around if you wouldn't mind. peACE |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-10-2011, 06:48 PM
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Replies: 1,659
Views: 50,060
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I think he is hoping that my return will result...
I think he is hoping that my return will result in some kind of soddamy party. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-10-2011, 06:45 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 635
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The Hurt Within
This is something I recognise, yay!!
I've got...
This is something I recognise, yay!! I've got a piece floating around on page 2 probably by now, if you wouldn't mind. peACE Nice to see you still posting. |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-07-2011, 09:47 PM
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Replies: 1,659
Views: 50,060
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests
04-07-2011, 09:32 PM
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Replies: 135
Sticky: 1v1 Challenge Thread : Season IX
Views: 13,981
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Contests
04-07-2011, 09:29 PM
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Replies: 135
Sticky: 1v1 Challenge Thread : Season IX
Views: 13,981
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-07-2011, 08:57 PM
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Replies: 1,659
Views: 50,060
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-07-2011, 08:46 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 262
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The Hurt Within
Juxta/ posed
This will take a couple of reads, i'm sure. I wrote this not long after I ****ed off. This has had a major overhaul now and the internal poem has been altered too. Juxta/posed I am entwined |
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-07-2011, 08:26 PM
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Replies: 1,659
Views: 50,060
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics
04-07-2011, 08:23 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 173
Posted By
The Hurt Within
Yeah fair play, I should have seen that in a way,...
Yeah fair play, I should have seen that in a way, but it's been a while ;) personally the first time I stopped and thought hmm this isn't working was here: Now it's just a matter of trying to stay... |
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