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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-26-2014, 01:46 AM
Replies: 2,081
Views: 67,464
Posted By Sticky Tissues
what's up weirdos? anyone here I remember?

what's up weirdos? anyone here I remember?
Forum: The Pit 11-24-2011, 10:55 AM
Replies: 368
Views: 9,236
Posted By Sticky Tissues
anartistmachine.tumblr.com

anartistmachine.tumblr.com
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-22-2011, 03:41 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 200
Posted By Sticky Tissues
sonnet to a spread.

in time I’d taken to this royal post
with my four standing sentinels and
these stalks to swoon and sway just as we rose
in full grown clothes, a thorned spectacle
and of the showcase at its final...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-10-2011, 10:51 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 559
Posted By Sticky Tissues
this carries such a wonderfully ironic underbelly...

this carries such a wonderfully ironic underbelly of sorrow- the execution was subtle but consistent enough to be revealed in the reading. nicely done. anaphora usually bugs me but it was executed...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-10-2011, 10:46 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 334
Posted By Sticky Tissues
agreed- consistent style but the effectuality of...

agreed- consistent style but the effectuality of this piece feels deflated. by the end the messages corrolates to that of a simple plan song itself, which I desperately hope was not your goal. and if...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-10-2011, 10:44 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 400
Posted By Sticky Tissues
disliked the bracketed bits, they felt...

disliked the bracketed bits, they felt overstated. also the second 'it won't budge'. they would be effective as spoken but as written they seem redundant. great great word choice here- the pegasus...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-10-2011, 10:40 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 181
Posted By Sticky Tissues
this feels laboured. unfortunately in my opinion...

this feels laboured. unfortunately in my opinion critically flies on the coat-tails of Shane Koyczan denegrating into the sea of other 'socially aware' spoken word poets. what are you saying...
Forum: The Pit 10-10-2011, 07:57 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 365
Posted By Sticky Tissues
well obviously, I mean in a more specific sense.

well obviously, I mean in a more specific sense.
Forum: The Pit 10-10-2011, 07:55 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 365
Posted By Sticky Tissues
What makes wes anderson movies the way they are?

I'm sure I'm not the only one who finds his movies to be so weird and wonderful. But beyond their innate weirdness they are also incredibly difficult to read beyond the surface level. everything is...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-25-2011, 05:55 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 455
Posted By Sticky Tissues
...

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1481591

if you've got time :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-22-2011, 10:07 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 291
Posted By Sticky Tissues
former yous felt odd, but at the same time it is...

former yous felt odd, but at the same time it is an interesting little bit of speech that gets tucked away in your thoughts to rest as you read the poem. keep it, I think.

longing/belonging also...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-22-2011, 10:01 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 440
Posted By Sticky Tissues
I think you could do with a bit of sensitivity...

I think you could do with a bit of sensitivity towards spacing- some parts immediately struck that could have had a bit more time to marinate- 'unforeseen' in particular could rest on its own line I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-22-2011, 09:55 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 455
Posted By Sticky Tissues
really love the brisk tone you're exerting here....

really love the brisk tone you're exerting here. you speak with quick and lively diction and it shows. everything is wonderfully self contained in this filthy universe of which the characters are...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-22-2011, 09:49 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 176
Posted By Sticky Tissues
namesakes and chesapeake was great- (i think...

namesakes and chesapeake was great-

(i think aks was a typo)

really love the dual image of honeymoon/honey moon. I think its really important to see words as separate images within themselves and...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-21-2011, 10:11 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 329
Posted By Sticky Tissues
after you.

so this, my inheritance
a sickness of sorrows
left to lie in bed
with my half-forgotten lovers
the knives lay like
children beneath
the pills sit like
bells
on a yuletide wreath
rung once or not at...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-30-2011, 12:00 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 800
Posted By Sticky Tissues
winter sky.

winter sky.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-29-2011, 10:21 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 734
Posted By Sticky Tissues
well deserved. yes yes yes.

well deserved. yes yes yes.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-29-2011, 11:05 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 457
Posted By Sticky Tissues
woooow. really thematically strong in an unusual...

woooow. really thematically strong in an unusual way. nicely done :D
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-28-2011, 01:49 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 591
Posted By Sticky Tissues
hahah if it helps (or hinders) any, it only had...

hahah if it helps (or hinders) any, it only had those big spaces between because when I copied it to my tumblr it came out that way. I'm thinking I like it better that way though. thanks culex and...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-26-2011, 12:08 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 428
Posted By Sticky Tissues
I adoooooooooooooooooooooooooooore the double...

I adoooooooooooooooooooooooooooore the double entendre of 'rest' at the end. so goddamn elegant. well done.

also, I've always loved the name Anna.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-23-2011, 05:12 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 591
Posted By Sticky Tissues
to explain the weird syntax on the plural...

to explain the weird syntax on the plural singular, the mother figure who is haunted 'becomes the ghost', and that's why its 'it', if that makes sense. it originally was 'they' but I wanted another...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-22-2011, 07:30 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 404
Posted By Sticky Tissues
oh goodness. yes.

oh goodness.

yes.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-11-2011, 07:57 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 591
Posted By Sticky Tissues
didn't realize people posted on this! thanks...

didn't realize people posted on this! thanks guys. I will get back to all of you shortly. :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-10-2011, 09:21 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 591
Posted By Sticky Tissues
WotW - mother.

sometimes I think
whatever ghosts
that made you want to
kill yourself
still haunt this house
and are telling me
the same things
it told you.

(and we could pray
Forum: Guitar Gear & Accessories 08-03-2011, 05:46 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 248
Posted By Sticky Tissues
as in, sandwich pickup is...

as in, sandwich pickup is better?

clearly.






but actually, probably the paf 7.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-27-2011, 03:48 PM
Replies: 2,081
Views: 67,464
Posted By Sticky Tissues
well, 2 decades finally. happy birthday to me. :)

well, 2 decades finally. happy birthday to me. :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-26-2011, 01:22 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 276
Posted By Sticky Tissues
a few bits stuck out as a little too meandering...

a few bits stuck out as a little too meandering but there was so much to love here. I'm sorry to say (I think) I've felt this way before. hang in there.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-25-2011, 08:16 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 734
Posted By Sticky Tissues
the kind of feeling you get after listening to...

the kind of feeling you get after listening to the last song of a jimmy eat world record. wonderful stuff.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-24-2011, 08:25 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 211
Posted By Sticky Tissues
ahhhhhhhh so so so nice. such a wonderful...

ahhhhhhhh so so so nice. such a wonderful vignette.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-20-2011, 02:35 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 726
Posted By Sticky Tissues
congratulations and salutations, good sir.

congratulations and salutations, good sir.
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