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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-26-2012, 04:28 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 579
Posted By bbeerrttt
Yeah man I love RHCP I must of subconsciously...

Yeah man I love RHCP I must of subconsciously done it, but meh what you gonna do? haha, im sure they didn't mean to plagiarise tom petty's 'mary janes last dance' with ' dani california' but shit...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-25-2012, 07:54 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 233
Posted By bbeerrttt
Oh only just saw this haha, thanks man :)

Oh only just saw this haha, thanks man :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-25-2012, 07:34 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 579
Posted By bbeerrttt
These lyrics, I wrote them a while back and just...

These lyrics, I wrote them a while back and just decided to throw them up a few days ago to see the reactions.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-25-2012, 06:22 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 579
Posted By bbeerrttt
Well it's about a girl who falls into...

Well it's about a girl who falls into prostitution, so the whole don't do it for fun thing is about making sure people pay.

I dunno i'm not really feeling this any more, and yeah it's not really...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-25-2012, 03:36 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 579
Posted By bbeerrttt
MOTHER****ER! Haha, not really to bothered about...

MOTHER****ER! Haha, not really to bothered about similarities like this to be honest, if I was it would be impossible to write.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-23-2012, 07:20 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 250
Posted By bbeerrttt
I like it, especially the third stanza/verse....

I like it, especially the third stanza/verse. It's simple which I think it actually a lot harder to write successfully then in say purple prose stlye. My one criticism, and something im completely...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-23-2012, 07:16 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 579
Posted By bbeerrttt
Haha cheers man :)

Haha cheers man :)
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-18-2012, 04:27 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 579
Posted By bbeerrttt
Down on her knees.

She's only eighteen,
ain't got no steady home.
She's only eighteen,
lives like a rolling stone.

Her daddy told her,
that she don't need no one.
Her daddy told her,
just don't do it for fun
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques 07-16-2012, 09:50 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 845
Posted By bbeerrttt
Good advice.

Good advice.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques 07-15-2012, 08:52 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 845
Posted By bbeerrttt
I'd love to get to the point of not being self...

I'd love to get to the point of not being self conscious you know? Like you can't imagine Bruce Springsteen struggling to write a song! I'd love to get to that level!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques 07-15-2012, 08:02 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 845
Posted By bbeerrttt
These are all great pieces of advice man, I think...

These are all great pieces of advice man, I think I might actually slow down and take a break from it, let some ideas come to me, see how that works.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques 07-15-2012, 07:43 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 845
Posted By bbeerrttt
Yeah, I am definitely forcing these songs out...

Yeah, I am definitely forcing these songs out haha. But I dunno, surely its only logical that the more you write, the better you become? So forcing myself is a good thing? Or does 'art' not work that...
Forum: Modern Rock 07-15-2012, 07:25 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 445
Posted By bbeerrttt
Arcane Roots! They're a smallish band from...

Arcane Roots!
They're a smallish band from England but they are amazing and one of those bands you KNOW are gonna be huge.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9-D5CpORJI
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics Techniques 07-15-2012, 07:24 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 845
Posted By bbeerrttt
How many songs do you throw out?

I was just wondering how many songs/lyrics/riffs you actually use?
Like today I wrote three songs, and have decided they all kind of suck haha.
Is this normal? It takes me like ten songs before I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-15-2012, 05:36 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 266
Posted By bbeerrttt
Wow, these are some ****ing great lyrics. They...

Wow, these are some ****ing great lyrics. They really remind me of something from Springsteen's 'Nebraska' album, so I was surprised to hear the song is actually quite the mars volta-esque. Record a...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-15-2012, 05:28 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 404
Posted By bbeerrttt
'its either crime or the unemployment...

'its either crime or the unemployment line'
'maybe you'll hope that it washes the town clean'
Are both fantastic ideas. If you don't mind they're getting used at some point!
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-14-2012, 04:05 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 277
Posted By bbeerrttt
Tbh it's all good stuff. Like the first message...

Tbh it's all good stuff. Like the first message the only thing I would really recommend is a sense of movement within the lyrics, perhaps a suggestion of how things could or will get better. Or...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-14-2012, 04:00 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 404
Posted By bbeerrttt
Any feedbacks good feedback I guess. And yeah...

Any feedbacks good feedback I guess. And yeah I'll get right on that now.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-13-2012, 07:17 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 233
Posted By bbeerrttt
Abit of green

Thoughts, opinions, criticism blah blah blah.... cheers

Lately it feels like, we've been growing apart.
These years have been hard,
and we haven't played smart.
Now when we meet up, its all...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-13-2012, 08:53 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 207
Posted By bbeerrttt
Wow great feedback, well yeah I know what you...

Wow great feedback, well yeah I know what you mean about forcing rhymes, it something I try really hard not to do but on some songs its just kind of slips in if you know what i mean, its just to easy...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-12-2012, 06:44 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 207
Posted By bbeerrttt
We run for more than life.

I don't know how I feel about this, be as brutal as you like. Cheers

Verse:
I got these beat up old shoes, and a way to walk
gonna have to pick up my pace, sorry mr, i cant talk.
The hoods and the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-12-2012, 04:43 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 404
Posted By bbeerrttt
Thanks man, what exactly do you mean not as...

Thanks man, what exactly do you mean not as strong? I know im being pedantic but I wonna write as solidly as possible. Be as critical as you like, i wont be offended ha
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-11-2012, 10:35 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 404
Posted By bbeerrttt
Haha who doesn't enjoy the turning the light...

Haha who doesn't enjoy the turning the light parts out! And yeah I do but I wouldn't even know where to begin in recording shit on my own, may have to invest in a new computer. But thanks for the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 07-08-2012, 09:01 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 404
Posted By bbeerrttt
Unchanged Melody

Tell me what you think, its unfinished as yet, and ill be happy to check out your stuff aswell.

Verse:
Sittin' on the last bus,
watching all the lads go
out for the night.
Smell of mischief in the...
Forum: Original Recordings 04-07-2012, 03:29 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 132
Posted By bbeerrttt
Well considering music is so subjective it's hard...

Well considering music is so subjective it's hard to say where you could make this better if you follow what I mean. Personally I would maybe re-write the beginning solo, change the drums in what I...
Forum: Original Recordings 04-07-2012, 12:57 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 194
Posted By bbeerrttt
and Vince: I knew It reminded me of something,...

and Vince: I knew It reminded me of something, cheers.
Forum: Original Recordings 04-07-2012, 12:56 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 194
Posted By bbeerrttt
Tiky: do you actually think if I was being...

Tiky: do you actually think if I was being serious I'd call it 'Super Awesome Riff'?
Forum: Original Recordings 04-07-2012, 12:17 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 194
Posted By bbeerrttt
Did I write this?

Now this may sound strange, but I don't know whether I wrote this riff or not haha.
There are technically three riffs and its only a minute long so give it a listen and let me know what you think!...
Forum: Cover Songs 03-03-2012, 11:03 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 233
Posted By bbeerrttt
Really good man, you have good control over the...

Really good man, you have good control over the harmonics and a good tone. Would of been good to know where (if any) the improvisation was, you know. Still, good job.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 03-01-2012, 11:08 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 204
Posted By bbeerrttt
Original Song

Ok, my second ever post (getting brave) As ever any comments at all would be really appreciated. Very short verse I wrote in like a stream of conscious way! Feel free to add to it and help a brother...
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