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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-16-2014, 11:02 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 258
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I enjoyed this, particularly in light of the...

I enjoyed this, particularly in light of the background have provided as this is an act of therapy for you.

While the particular context of this poem makes it difficult to critique, there are a few...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-13-2014, 10:34 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 273
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Agreed with JD that I'd like to see you come back...

Agreed with JD that I'd like to see you come back to that first line, and offer something of a resolution. Or actually, as this seems very much like a snapshot from a much bigger scene, I'd like to...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-13-2014, 10:18 AM
Replies: 2,107
Views: 69,429
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I am interested in a copy, if you'll post to the...

I am interested in a copy, if you'll post to the UK that is, I'll happily pay postage if that makes any difference.

I've previously found it really tough telling someone I'm close friends with that...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-13-2014, 10:11 AM
Replies: 2
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Views: 139
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Thanks dude. This will eventually be the part of...

Thanks dude.

This will eventually be the part of a much larger visual piece, which should help to give it more context.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 11-11-2014, 07:32 AM
Replies: 2
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Views: 139
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
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Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 10-23-2014, 04:23 PM
Replies: 2,107
Views: 69,429
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
So good to hear you're feeling better...

So good to hear you're feeling better man.


brokencoastline, that zine looks really cool - I may have sent a few bits and bobs over.
Forum: Tabs & Chords 10-06-2014, 03:57 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 1,028
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Yeah that sounds good. I'd like to contribute...

Yeah that sounds good. I'd like to contribute some vocals as well, it's been a while since I've done anything really gritty.
Forum: Tabs & Chords 10-06-2014, 02:44 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 1,028
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I'd like to write anything that doesn't involve...

I'd like to write anything that doesn't involve notes.

Particularly if there's anything atmospheric, experimental or very heavy happening.

Edit: HaydenHohns would you be interested in something...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-29-2014, 05:46 PM
Replies: 4
#6
Views: 295
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
"I'd" is what your after I think. I'll...

"I'd" is what your after I think. I'll get back to you on this in more depth soon.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-29-2014, 03:22 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 241
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Thanks for giving this a look. I don't know about...

Thanks for giving this a look. I don't know about that line, thank you for pointing it out, it provides a context which is critical to me in the construction of the piece, but is it a good line? or...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-23-2014, 01:54 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 241
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Fibber

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to the boy who pushed me
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-23-2014, 09:51 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 224
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I very much enjoyed this, but I feel you need to...

I very much enjoyed this, but I feel you need to clean up that final line as it is too jumbled as it is. there is just too much going on compared to the first two lines, it just needs stripping...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-23-2014, 09:45 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 686
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I don't know how you'd feel about this kind of...

I don't know how you'd feel about this kind of technique, but maybe simple removing "it" and using some kind of formatting or space or something to highlight that omission might work. That's all I...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-19-2014, 06:12 PM
Replies: 2,107
Views: 69,429
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Hope all the hard work pays off for you, make...

Hope all the hard work pays off for you, make sure to drop us a link when it's done. Are you self releasing or going through a label? I only ask as I've been struggling with finding a label...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-19-2014, 05:58 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 562
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
The texture of this is fantastic, you play on the...

The texture of this is fantastic, you play on the bruising so well. The inevitability of ageing and decay is so prominent in this for me, and I must say it has really touched me.

I'd like to see...
Forum: The Pit 09-10-2014, 05:20 PM
Replies: 85
Views: 2,158
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I like this...

I like this one.
http://www.micheallarsen.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/10/bythethroat.jpg
Forum: Metal 09-08-2014, 06:04 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 1,382
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uz0lLEHBGv0

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AEsbcLOeVCw

As has already been mentioned, Joy Division and MBV are necessary.
Forum: Hardcore 09-08-2014, 05:23 PM
Replies: 34,743
Views: 397,401
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Love that Endzweck track, surprised I'd never...

Love that Endzweck track, surprised I'd never heard of them before.

Would you guys mind checking out my band's most recent EP? It's post-rock influenced hardcore/screamo type stuff, if you're into...
Forum: The Pit 09-08-2014, 08:36 AM
Replies: 61
Views: 1,416
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Is noise acceptable? If it is I'd love to...

Is noise acceptable? If it is I'd love to contribute.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-07-2014, 02:53 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 279
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Thank you for looking in, and thank you for your...

Thank you for looking in, and thank you for your kind words. Yeah, interpretation can be bullshit and bullshit can be interpretation, it's all good though as long as it's interpretation.

Had a quick...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-05-2014, 06:48 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 300
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I'm stumbling on "that was hid under my...

I'm stumbling on "that was hid under my bed", I think it could do with more control as you've employed in the rest of the piece, it might specifically be "hid under" that's the problem, maybe there's...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-05-2014, 06:39 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 299
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
I think it is fine to write without punctuation,...

I think it is fine to write without punctuation, but by not using it you lose a potential dimension of a piece, so it is important to employ other techniques. Personally I'd like to see further...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-05-2014, 06:28 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 279
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Beetles know this. Beetles are good doctors.

http://crowdecidedtotrywords.files.wordpress.com/2014/09/beetles-know-this-beetles-are-good-doctors.jpg

(Sorry for another huge image)
Forum: Promote YOUR Band 09-03-2014, 04:46 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 236
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Really enjoying this track, it does very much...

Really enjoying this track, it does very much have an early Bongripper vibe to it. I think you could do with bringing the bass forward in the mix slightly, just to give some serious punch to the...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 09-02-2014, 02:31 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 395
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Feels like a long time since you posted, I really...

Feels like a long time since you posted, I really enjoyed the flow of this and I do love your voice.

My only complaint is that I find myself yearning for some separation on that last line, I think...
Forum: Promote YOUR Band 09-02-2014, 02:20 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 174
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
splints (post-rock/emo/screamo)

Based in Gloucestershire, UK.

Just released our second EP, self recorded DIY style.
https://splints.bandcamp.com/album/skinning

Thanks for checking us out.
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-19-2014, 12:32 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 482
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
This is a difficult thing to answer, I think it...

This is a difficult thing to answer, I think it is impossible to get a proper view of your own music in terms of whether it's good or not, simply because you know the songs more intimately than is...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-18-2014, 05:32 PM
Replies: 2
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Views: 183
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
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https://crowdecidedtotrywords.files.wordpress.com/2014/08/m.jpeg
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-18-2014, 05:26 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 562
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
Is this filled with the background noise of a...

Is this filled with the background noise of a market place perhaps? I found this was best understood in a number of separate readings, starting with the centered stanzas.

I think the left/right...
Forum: Songwriting & Lyrics 08-18-2014, 05:17 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 261
Posted By doubtfulsalmon
This moves in a surprising direction, even from...

This moves in a surprising direction, even from the richly jumbled opening. I really liked this and I apologise that I can't think of anything more constructive to say at the moment - I'll get back...
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