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Old 09-19-2012, 10:32 AM   #1
Factor13x
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DaVinci Would Be Jealous

This song is a metalcore/hardcore/post-hardcore song, whatever you want to call it. Ill do a C4C for this so let me know what you think. If you want to listen to a rough recording of the guitar for this song I have it here DaVinci Would Be Jealous- guitar.

DaVinci Would Be Jealous

the snow covered ground beckons
beckons for blood to spill, now is the time to kill
we will paint it red, oh yes we will
so grab your brush and lets strike canvas
lets make this masterpiece

we paint with guns and swords
the blood we use is yours
streaking across the page
its dripping slowly, dripping slowly away
smearing everything

our masterpiece is almost done
we watch the blood we spill run

the ground shakes from below
the armies cross the freezing snow
hands black with frostbite
blood runs down their knives
screams fill the air
they kill without care
run blades through your chest
until theres no breath left

we paint with guns and swords
the blood we use is yours
streaking across the page
its dripping slowly, dripping slowly away
smearing everything

our masterpiece is almost done
we watch the blood we spill run

cries of pain ring through
ground covered a crimson hue
bodies strewn across the field
giving wolves a meal

we paint with guns and swords
the blood we use is yours
streaking across the page
its dripping slowly away
smearing everything
our masterpiece
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Lyrics:
To The Grave
The Marionette
Our Last Dance
DaVinci Would Be Jealous
An Angel No More

Gear:
Jackson DKXT Dinky
Silver Star Semi-Hollow Body
Peavey Vypyr 30w, 1 x 12 Combo Amp
Korg Nanopad
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Old 09-19-2012, 12:10 PM   #2
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I don't think this sort of music suits rhymes.
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