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Old 10-10-2012, 02:00 AM   #1
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Fun Is For Everyone

Numb numb nom on this
Milk for your chocolate chips
Jumping on my pogo stick
Bags of candy make me sick

In this jungle gym I live
Girls and boys play like this
Fun is for everyone
Fun fun fun fun
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look nigga, if you're chillin with 5 bros and 2 hos, you're gonna wanna pay attention to all of em equally. not moon over the hos forever and laugh at every shitty thing they say and just stare at them all night, like some of my mates do.
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Old 10-10-2012, 05:13 AM   #2
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It's good because it's true.
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Old 10-10-2012, 07:33 AM   #3
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This made me smile.

I particulaly like the deep metaphorical commentary on the political tension between India and Pakistan in that first stanza, higher order intelligence sir.
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Old 10-10-2012, 09:34 AM   #4
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Old 10-10-2012, 11:18 AM   #5
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How about "Fun for everybody is" to keep with your pointlessly inverted word order in line five? Alternately, "I live in this jungle gym" keeps the facile rhyme scheme intact without injecting the pointlessly inverted word order.

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Old 10-11-2012, 01:06 AM   #6
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You mean we could embed youtube videos? on UG...

It's like Christmas.
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Old 10-11-2012, 10:29 AM   #7
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this is the first time i have ever tried. suffice to say as soon as i realized i broke out the champagne!
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