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UG Ninja
Join Date: Sep 2006
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Ghost Clay
In layers of dirt
Eyes do see Ancestors playing the high E While we remain low Scraping the below Barely touching, ageless wisdom Whilst folding hands as cups To catch whatever seeps Through leaking pipes Eyes do see Sewers stretching timelines Where ghost crap flows And mud dwellers roam In currents beneath "I'm down here" One could only hear The deepest bottom end Whilst strumming these strings And matching to no prevail Obsessed by their high notes Where did the past go? Let ring, sail on Walk not in mire Let the stars speak Our saying will become Standing in cosmic shower Absorbing distant light Eight minutes left Eight minutes left Overwhelmed By the sense of becoming Clearing this layer of sand and water What looks like dirt, we Take in and absorb As clay and ours to form Once beautiful, risen as new Now we play the high chords Let ring, sail on Walk not in mire Let the stars speak Our saying will become Standing in cosmic shower Absorbing distant light Eight minutes left Eight minutes left Last edited by Eccer : 05-17-2013 at 01:22 AM. |
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Join Date: May 2012
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The apocolypse?
Amazing wording! I like it! |
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UG Ninja
Join Date: Sep 2006
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Quote:
Thanks ![]() Well it's about what we take from the past, and what can be learned from it. To take up the remains, and form it as new ![]() |
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Join Date: May 2012
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Cool!
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Join Date: Jan 2004
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I think the lyrics themselves are decent, but I LOVE the title. For some reason, titles are just as important(if not more so) to me as lyrics. I'm weird like that.
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UG Ninja
Join Date: Sep 2006
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Thanks, I'll try to comment on your text sooner or later
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