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Old 01-18-2013, 10:20 PM   #1
Cyclones41
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Wholly Yours

I hardly ever write songs anymore. But I've written a couple in the past two days. This is the one I wrote this afternoon, so it's still a little rough. Here's the link to listen:

https://soundcloud.com/brett-rae-1/wholly-yours


Take these dry bones
Up from the ground
Fill me with breath
Thatíll do nothing but praise you
Take these dry bones
Up from the ground
Give me new flesh
Make me wholly yours now

You only ask of me one thing
Thatís to give you my life
And these days Iím faltering
No matter what I try
My body crumbles
ĎCause itís turned into a hollow shell

But you take these dry bones
Up from the ground
Fill me with breath
Thatíll do nothing but praise you
Take these dry bones
Up from the ground
Give me new flesh
Make me wholly yours now

When Iím at a loss for words
You give me truth to speak
And though Iím just a pile of dust
You continue to make me clean

'Cause you take these dry bones
Up from the ground
Fill me with breath
that'll do nothing but praise you
take these dry bones
up from the ground
give me new flesh
make me wholly yours now
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Old 01-31-2013, 01:17 PM   #2
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Wow, first verse sounds like a spell.

Kinda cool though.
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