01-31-2013, 03:13 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Albuquerque, NM
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gallows
Oh, it is just like us to swing from the gallows.
Never matching each other’s rhythm, Never finding unison. In death, I am mocked for things I could never be in life. It’s as becoming as the bag over your head. It’s as fitting as the noose around my neck.
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Saintly Rows||Drifter Last edited by blake1221 : 01-31-2013 at 03:14 AM. |
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01-31-2013, 03:27 AM
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Biology student
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: the Netherlands
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This deserves a round of applause.
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You who build these altars now
To sacrifice these children You must not do it anymore
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02-05-2013, 12:19 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Albuquerque, NM
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Oh, forgot about this. Anything to critique?
Something feels....slightly clumsy about the middle. To me, at least.
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