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Old 04-28-2007, 09:26 PM   #1
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Talking [PT/MIDI]Chiclets (Catchy Rock song)[PT/MIDI]

hi this is my newest song, its kind of a moder rock song with a cool catchy solo in it , at the beginning it may get repetitive but its because of the intro being the same riff as the verses. hope you like it!

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Old 04-28-2007, 09:36 PM   #2
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Old 04-28-2007, 10:27 PM   #3
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The intro is very cool, and although it has some variations, it sounds repetitive, maybe add some vocal harmonies to it (unless its a real song played by you that has vocals, then you should record it...). It is a 8/10 for the intro
The solo (both of them) was, in three words,....AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING, Sounded like something that could be put in the radio and enjoyed by everyone, or something a big band could do and still be cool, and I would gladly listen to it, I would give that solo a 13/10.

Lets sum:8/10+13/10=21/20=10.5/10,.......yeah, thats right, a 10.5/10!!!!!!!
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Old 04-29-2007, 03:30 AM   #4
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well thanks for the crits, im glad you liked it
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Old 04-29-2007, 01:09 PM   #5
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That was really good. Very catchy progression, and your leads were very good. Also, the solo was very good. It was just an overall good peice.

Well done. 8.5/10.

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Old 04-29-2007, 01:22 PM   #6
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lol the intro reminds me of journey - dont stop believing

i enjoyed the solo

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Old 04-29-2007, 04:41 PM   #7
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I've shorten up a little bit the verses to make it sound less repetitive. cheers
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Old 04-30-2007, 02:43 AM   #8
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twas a tad repetitve, but otherwise it was pretty good, the leads were pretty good also.

id say about 7/10
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Old 04-30-2007, 03:48 AM   #9
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i actually enjoyed that immensely

so much in fact, im going to learn it. Just because i liked it so much

Top effort!!

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Old 04-30-2007, 04:37 PM   #10
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****ing awesome -- solo was good - didnt think it was too repetitive. some of the rhythms and the solo remind me of thin lizzy an awful lot. rock on!
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Old 04-30-2007, 06:53 PM   #11
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Absolutely magnificent. Catchy intro, nice bass, amazing solo's, excellent progressions. I applaud you.

Really.

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Old 04-30-2007, 08:15 PM   #12
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thanks for all the positive feedback. I'm really glad you liked it.
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Old 05-01-2007, 06:56 PM   #13
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one part of the song sounds like do ya by elo(electric light orchestra)
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Old 05-02-2007, 03:57 AM   #14
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I loved it. Nice and catchy and well the solo suited the song so well. seemed to really flow. 9/10 (y), you get 10 from me if you do it in guitar pro with drums haha. Nice work, keep it up!


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Old 05-07-2007, 06:30 AM   #15
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I loved this song, a great intro - singing would go great with it. Perhaps when the distortion guitar initially kicks in you could keep the clean one playing quietly? It would really fill up that section. The progression is great, if a tad repetitive sometimes. Nice leadwork, really epic sounding stuff. Would love to hear the song with some drums too (can powertab do drums?) Nice gentle outro, really suits the vibe of the song.

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Old 05-11-2007, 01:16 PM   #16
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that was awesome man, just the kind of song that gets radio play everyday, in a good way, gread leadwork kept me interested the whole way through cant really fault it, the intro riff was great and the chorus riff was really catchy and uplifting, perfect song, make sure if your making vocals you take time as it needs good vocals to compliment it

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Old 05-13-2007, 04:04 AM   #17
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I like it, man. Pretty cool and catchy, the kind of song you listen and actually pay attention to, at least in my case.
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amazing work man everything fit so perfectly. can tell you really put your heart into it and felt it.
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lol the intro reminds me of journey - dont stop believing

i enjoyed the solo


Really? i was thinking more of Tuesdays Gone - Lynard Skynard. Great job btw 9.5/10
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Old 05-14-2007, 10:42 AM   #20
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can tell you really put your heart into it and felt it.

well i really got inspired for this one lol.

thanks for all your crits!

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