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Old 07-03-2007, 02:33 PM   #1
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Acoustic-Popish-Rock (Gp5, gp4, midi)

Hey...

I wrote this last night...I stayed up like till 3:30 making this lol...

Plz tell me wat you think of it...thanks

(I normally write more metal-ish stuff but I was inspired to write something acoustic...)

EDIT: Its in Gp5, Gp4, and MIDI

EDIT: This is loaded with harmonization!!
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Old 07-03-2007, 02:43 PM   #2
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Thats REally good. Im jealous
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Old 07-03-2007, 02:45 PM   #3
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Its really good. It flows well. Crit 4 Crit?
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Old 07-03-2007, 03:09 PM   #4
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Agree with the others. its realy good, and flows nicey.
Dont know what else to say.
Do you got some lyrics to it, couse that would be realy beutyful.

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Old 07-04-2007, 05:20 AM   #5
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This is really, really, really, good man. I would be able to listen to this a lot without problems
Get some lyrics, please
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Old 08-03-2007, 09:18 PM   #6
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quite nice =P

add lyrics for it
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Old 08-04-2007, 01:06 AM   #7
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well, i usually write some extensive crits and breakdown every part of a song but unfortunately with yours it would only be "this part was amazing" over and over again, so i wont be that redundant.

but the only thing that bothered me a little bit was the first note of measure 52. i think it was a minor 3rd right? so i dont know why it sounded bad, maybe just cause i think most of the rest was more major. idk. i cant help you there.

but this was an extremely beautiful song. great job.
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Old 08-04-2007, 04:35 AM   #8
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^ same here. That was one sweet song son. Everything flowed nicely, all the little solo parts sounded good (i especially liked the acoustic outro and the post chorus) The vocals seemed to fit nicely, perhaps put the lyrics on GP so we can see what they're like? Overall a good song.

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Old 08-04-2007, 05:01 AM   #9
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this is pretty much flawless... i can't even crit this! lyrics are all it needs, but other than that, it's beautiful!

crit mebbe? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru....php?p=10221071
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Old 09-06-2007, 08:09 AM   #10
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THis is a great acoustic song. I love how inspirational it sounds. I agree with H(i)ss in that its PERFECT! Not much to crit but it sounds a lot like fear of the dark. Awesome work man. 10/10.
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Can't get much better than this. Just plain brilliant. A masterpeice.
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