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Old 11-14-2012, 10:45 PM   #1
treborillusion
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It's Cold Outside

Sitting
In my room
Just bitching
What can I do
It's cold
Outside
I'm confined
It's true
Haven't got a car
Parked and no I
Don't drive
It's cold outside
Can't afford
To go out
Plus I look Bruck too
Gotta clean up
That's what I'm
Gonna do
You don't need money
All you need
Is you
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look nigga, if you're chillin with 5 bros and 2 hos, you're gonna wanna pay attention to all of em equally. not moon over the hos forever and laugh at every shitty thing they say and just stare at them all night, like some of my mates do.

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Old 11-16-2012, 03:40 PM   #2
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there's one verse. now write another four.
rhyme structure needs room for complexity to develop within the poem, so have fun with it.
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Old 11-17-2012, 03:23 AM   #3
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Hi, I usually donít post comments. But, I had to say this was a really good post.great, agree with your idea!
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