11-14-2012, 10:45 PM
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Join Date: May 2009
Location: The London Borough of Croydon, GB
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It's Cold Outside
Sitting
In my room Just bitching What can I do It's cold Outside I'm confined It's true Haven't got a car Parked and no I Don't drive It's cold outside Can't afford To go out Plus I look Bruck too Gotta clean up That's what I'm Gonna do You don't need money All you need Is you
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11-16-2012, 03:40 PM
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DT's Feminist Mom
Join Date: Sep 2006
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there's one verse. now write another four.
 rhyme structure needs room for complexity to develop within the poem, so have fun with it.
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GOODBYE BLUE MONDAY
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11-17-2012, 03:23 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2012
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Hi, I usually don’t post comments. But, I had to say this was a really good post.great, agree with your idea!
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