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Old 11-07-2012, 06:40 PM   #1
Tdvv
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Lyrical adivice, help, etc.

Well I'm in a gothic metal band and we're writing this song, and I'm kind o unsure about the lyrics that I've written for it. It's suppose to be a very powerful, philosophical, and I guess rhetorical.

Draconian


[The Cypress Is In Bloom]
The cypress is in bloom
I see the evil, the efflorescence of decadent doom
Eloigning, with thy clandestines of the Dead September's reign
My belovéd Penelope, abscond from coven so deep, the glades of misery
We must face her in the grove
*for*our most treasured arcady, the path we must take
She's in my mind, vaporously,
Laughing with my, dangers and fears
Lie, with ephermelcy's broken truths
Leading me to Cypress, Marigold
Immortally, willows, forevermore
Forevermore

[To Question; To Know]
My argentine silence, you only condonicy*
Ends with such eath
The Mockingbird in me--died
Resting in one ounce, an abundance of shame
With an infinity of joy
Exiled, by the ones, who give all, names
My breath starves for only more
The façade, the veil, the austerity dims with Aquarianlore*
She falls to her knees, why for?
Celandine she will be
Celandine is she

[Bead]
The lair within, free from their causalities of their sins
Shadowy primroses begin to grow, the season will never end
In there I dream to be like you, violet blue,
La Fleur Blanche du Lisieux,
So Celandine are you
Celandine are you

[Draconian]
Draconian--Reach the shadows within
Draconian--Break from The Fallen's Sin
Draconian--Their Empirical lies, only die
Draconian--Reach The Shadows Within
*
[The Demonic Flight]
Dwelling around your body, in your mind, in your sight*
He comes out as a nymph, for you, this night
Upon this demonic flight, far from Divine Sight
Only Damnation and blight, to the burning bridge
To The Plains of Sarah
Life assumes nothing, barren
As destruction feeds - the child learns to Live, lust, then Die
Not the race of Cain, Seth led the way
Through dismissal, came dismay
Luna they call thy Name
Is it my Father's Reign?

[I Have the Evil of You]
I have the evil of you
Caught in my hands, entangled
Like the arabesques of Eden's vines
Just like paradise, but why should shame remain
Singeing like immolation of Peter's Inferno
These reddish-purple chains convolute myself
as the grapples shoot out form the clouds
both below, above me
The self-lovelust propelling*
You did this - these plagues
You drag me down - to your cage
Cadaver Vampire - I am your slave

[The Metamorphosis]
Sing the ode, you know my name
Amon talks through you
I can ordain you to be the highest of all kings
Legions of venus, lotus
Demand thy lead

As her poison spits*
In Lilithian ways
Virtue of lust remains
*impale these pale wax dolls
In a dark lantern's chamber *
Façades willingly stay
Caressing my sins' marrow
Transpose to a state
So lugubriously ugly, beyond *grotesque
O prince of exile
Bring me more
Finest nymphs of Demon Flesh!

[Draconian]*
Draconian--Reach *the shadows within
Draconian--Break from the Fallen's sin
Draconian--Their empirical lies, only die
Draconian--Reach the shadows within

[The Puppeteer]
The storm I see you in
Caught in the race of Caïn
Held by the arms you cannot see--the conducter of Ennui*
-No stronger than the void you hold within-
It began with a hope, an obsession
Casted into, slavery of repugnant possessions*
Granted by, the Avaricious Lords, the ones we serve for
-They Told Us to pray, hope, away from despair, the despair caused by their immaculate Hands
Malice, envy, greed, was granted to me, The Feudal Dream, we want to be Them, just like him
-just how he solaces us, ambivalent hope, engendering knives to my throat*

[The Fall]
In this Valley of morning and weeping
Love lies bleeding, in desperate fear
With their talons, they *hunt to rip out thy heart*
As each velvet petal falls apart
Her body chained in their bile and lies, covered with their red-spy
-sent just to check if our souls are in line, do not defy*
Her blood velvet and pure, drips away with innocence *of the amber guardian*
The soil of plagues, beggars, and graves
Is know her home, the coven of solace
Though the seed has died--resurrection Is near passing through death's fear
One stronger than you--and thy funeral skies
She is alive--anew
But the vapors still remain
The Apocalypse is here, do we fear?
Just for the death of our sins
Elysia never Seemed so far away

[Our Damnation]
Solitary ruins, Fulfill their visions
We strayed far from the depths within*
We all lingered to his solace--lies
-you make the sign everyday, but lack to know the name
We are just the toys, he pulls all of the strings
We are nothing in this burning world
Of Decadence, and failed semblance

[Draconian]*
Draconian--Reach *the shadows within
Draconian--Break from the Fallen's sin
Draconian--Their empirical lies, only die
Draconian--Reach the shadows within

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Old 11-07-2012, 06:50 PM   #2
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I have no idea why there are random asterisks (*) throughout this
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