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Old 12-01-2012, 11:38 PM   #1
Tdvv
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How would you rate/describe my song?

Any advice really helps too... also it has a guitar and vocal part written, but I'm waiting till i get a decent recording mic to record them



and the lyrics are:

I am the face of misery
My life, a dissonance of autumn and spring
The years are written in the same
Lugubrious, nostalgic grey
How can it be the author to blame?
I cannot scream this all away…
Burn nor Bleed this all away…
Ordained to the darkest of her hues

I was convinced in death...
Aeons away from amity
Fallen to bleeding affliction

No words of hate
No words of hope
Do I have Lenore to send to me,
The sordid mistake of Thebes
Caught In the longest nightmare
The slowest way to die...
I know this is my life
But I am not the one in control
Yes, I know it's me...
Antigone

If it must be…
Then just kill me
(Antigone) sing me out of reality
I wear this dissonant crown of shame
(Antigone) I don't want this name
I hate to be this way
(Antigone) Here comes the edict, to blame
The sordid child of Thebes
This is me
Antigone

If it must be…
Then just kill me
(Antigone) sing me out of reality
I wear this dissonant crown of shame
(Antigone) I don't want this name
I hate to be this way
(Antigone) Here comes the edict, to blame
The sordid child of Thebes
This is me
Antigone

But the suffering
none I resent
At the end of the darkness
Stood a light, a glimpse of your star
Anam Cara
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