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Old 05-03-2013, 07:40 PM   #1
5wFisher
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in defense

i don't really like this song that much but i wanted feedback so i could get better. any critiques would be helpful. thanks!

never know what you had
until it's dead and gone

you wrong somebody
and not even know it
in the blink of an eye

cry baby cry
whatever's troubling ya
down deep inside
just cry baby cry

i've lost my composure
on seperate occasions
but i can't just let you
pass me by

cry baby cry
whatever's troubling ya
down deep inside
just cry baby cry
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