|05-22-2014, 05:54 PM||#1|
Join Date: May 2009
Math rock (WIP) [GP5]
But it kinda became metal or something. Oh well. My newest creation. Kinda repetive. Enjoy
I'm planning on adding some vocal lines but I'm not sure how.
Last edited by CheesyMozarella : 05-22-2014 at 05:57 PM.
|06-13-2014, 09:19 PM||#3|
Join Date: Jul 2005
Pretty awesome man. 42-57 was arousing. 58-77 was orgasmic.
Only thing, is the tremolo section. You tied it in decently, but I think maybe adding in a string motif reminiscent of the Main section would be legit. I just copy-pasted the same 2 bars of 4/4 from right before the Tremolo section over and over again on top of Tremolo, and it sounds pretty cool... So I know something like that would fit.
I also just threw on the 4/4 bars form the "du du du du" section on the jazz guitar and that fits in with all of it as well.
But it's also good without.
Care to check my doohickes out?
Last edited by Garb : 06-13-2014 at 09:26 PM.
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