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Old 01-07-2013, 03:45 PM   #1
Fost0681
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Opinion on my music from outside source please!

So I'm a new musician sort of, "7 years of guitar, two years of songwritting", and I know by playing music for people that It's good, but I want to know if I'm great, good, or descent from an outside source because I don't play shows, here's an unmastered song I recorded, and a demo, thanks

reverbnation.com/pigeonhill/song/15724921-i-took-root-on-rolling-cloud-unmastered


youtube.com/watch?v=e9tR4JkxlIY
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Old 01-08-2013, 04:21 AM   #2
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Wow, you're great, reminds me a bit on Mumford and Sons, actually I like your music more than their. I'm not into this kind of music myself that much, but I still like it, would definitely see you live.
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Old 01-09-2013, 10:42 AM   #3
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guitarwork is good. the mix needs some work, but songwriting is solid. The only two things throwing me off was that it's nothing I haven't heard before and the shakiness in your voice. sounds overused a bit, if it's controllable, I'd try and smooth some of that out as it tends to wear on you as the song progresses. Just my humble opinion though. Dynamics are there....it's a great start TS. Keep it up, you're already way ahead of alot of folks in the "intangibles" department. nice work!
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Old 01-10-2013, 07:06 PM   #4
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Thanks for the honest feedback, its a hard thing to get, ha I've already rerecorded that song since you said that, It was shaky cause I was trying to record the guitar and vocals at the same time to get a more natural sound but I think I just got worn out and my voice just got real tense
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